tinka.......

by manjum on May 18, 2011, 04:15:39 AM
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Roz naya gham deta hai aur kahta hai ke.....
"teri aankh main aaj fir tinka pad gaya"

mann
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2011, 07:05:35 AM »
bohuy kuch bol diya apke in chand lafzon ne bohut khoob manju ji

hum tujh par iljaam lagatey nahin,
meri ankhon mein aaye ansuon ke .
kabhi hum apke dil mein they yeh sochkar ,
tinka ankh mein parh gaya dil ko dilasa dete hain

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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2011, 09:40:17 AM »
bahut shukriya saahilji.... ki ye dard aap samjhe....

sath rahie
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2011, 10:06:06 AM »
dard ko jo samjh jate to kyun yeh zakham dil par lagaate ,
malum na tha ke zakham lagakar na jee saktey na mar paatey
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2011, 06:30:16 PM »
Roz naya gham deta hai aur kahta hai ke.....
"teri aankh main aaj fir tinka pad gaya"

mann
naya gam to bahaana hai
mann ka,puraana gam jo bhulaana hai

aankho me tinke ka fasaana kar
apne dil me laakhon suiyaan chubhanaa hai…

behlaakar tujhe aansuo me tere
“nir” ko muskurakar ashq chupaana hai……

naya gam to bahaana hai
mann ka,puraana gam jo bhulaana hai………
””
ehsas ache hain gud
””
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2011, 03:49:35 AM »
shukriya niralaji... bahut dino ke baad aapka cmnt mila... aur bahut acha likha aapne.... khub...

sath rahie...
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2011, 04:01:03 AM »
shukriya niralaji... bahut dino ke baad aapka cmnt mila... aur bahut acha likha aapne.... khub...

sath rahie...
wo asal me aap aajkal itna acha likhti hain ki cmnt karne jo shabd hi nai milte hume…
islie parh ke chup rah jata hun…
aap to mashoor shayar ho gai hain Usual Smile

thanx ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2011, 04:07:27 AM »
are niralaji....thanks aapka ki aapne itni izzat di... par aap esa na kahe...
esa na kahie.... ki hm mashur shayar hain hame kahan shayari aati hai.... aap cmnt kijie....
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2011, 04:25:28 AM »
are niralaji....thanks aapka ki aapne itni izzat di... par aap esa na kahe...
esa na kahie.... ki hm mashur shayar hain hame kahan shayari aati hai.... aap cmnt kijie....
sach me ji…
aapki shayri me kamaal ki gahrai nazar aati hai aajkal…
bas feel hi kar skte hai usko…cmnt me kya likha jaye sujhta hi nai…
wese b cmnt karne na krne se kya fark padta hai ji…
aap likhti rahiye ese hi…
khus rahiye
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2011, 04:28:43 AM »
shayari achi hai ye to cmnt se hi pata chalta hai....
baki hm to likhne ka km karte rahte hain...

sath rahie....
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2011, 09:19:43 AM »
Roz naya gham deta hai aur kahta hai ke.....
"teri aankh main aaj fir tinka pad gaya"

mann

Bahut Khooob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2011, 09:32:56 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....

sath rahie...
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