““ tou--karta kya!!!! ””

by nirala on July 09, 2011, 06:19:36 PM
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mai shayar nahi koi kavi nahi
hadd se badha dard to karta kya!

na barish thi na tufaan na hi baadal koi
kuch bemausam chalak jaye to karta kya!

koi aya tha panahon me
chala gaya chhuriyan to karta kya!

daaman na the bheege ashkon se yun
koi pal pal ghaao lgaye to krta kya!

lauta tha woh dubara bhi,dekar hazaron zakhm
nastar ilzamo ke chubhaye fir to krta kya!

gham the me tha or thi tnhai
koi inko cheen le jaye to krta kya!

kantilee rahen,suni raten,udas din
gudgudi kar hasaye to krta kya!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2011, 08:10:43 PM »
Bhut khub nirala ji..!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2011, 06:35:50 AM »
karta kya. bahut hi kubh
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2011, 11:13:44 AM »
Quote from: nirala on July 09, 2011, 06:19:36 PM
mai shayar nahi koi kavi nahi
hadd se badha dard to karta kya!

na barish thi na tufaan na hi baadal koi
kuch bemausam chalak jaye to karta kya!

koi aya tha panahon me
chala gaya chhuriyan to karta kya!

daaman na the bheege ashkon se yun
koi pal pal ghaao lgaye to krta kya!

lauta tha woh dubara bhi,dekar hazaron zakhm
nastar ilzamo ke chubhaye fir to krta kya!

gham the me tha or thi tnhai
koi inko cheen le jaye to krta kya!

kantilee rahen,suni raten,udas din
gudgudi kar hasaye to krta kya!!


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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2011, 06:25:50 AM »
thanx aal…

ik pal me galey lagaye,duje pal chhod jaye
……nahi hua kbhee apna,ishaaron me smhaye ““ tou karta kya ”” !!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2011, 06:44:10 AM »
to kya karta ye nirala mastana....

kya baat hai mastane ji aj ye dard ki baatein kaise ....Huh??

bht hi mastam likha hai apne ye...
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2011, 07:10:36 AM »
Bhuat Khoob Nirala ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2011, 07:36:00 AM »
ekdum jhakkas nirala ji..

Wo Milaa to tha Dost ban ke,
Usse Pyar huaa hi Nahi to kartaa kyaa....?
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2011, 07:42:21 AM »
Dard bhari peshkash Nirala ji bahut baddiya.Gumboy ji aape bhi acha saath diya.superb. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2011, 07:46:02 AM »
shukriya madhuwesh ji..
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2011, 08:12:10 AM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 16, 2011, 06:44:10 AM
to kya karta ye nirala mastana....

kya baat hai mastane ji aj ye dard ki baatein kaise ....Huh??

bht hi mastam likha hai apne ye...
oh thanq mom… Usual Smile
lagta hai aapne paraya kar dia meko warna “ ji aur aap ” nahi hota sad5
anyways thanq very much wo b dil se Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2011, 08:15:50 AM »
Quote from: Sanjeev kash on July 16, 2011, 07:10:36 AM
Bhuat Khoob Nirala ji
thanx
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2011, 08:21:03 AM »
Quote from: GUMboy on July 16, 2011, 07:36:00 AM
ekdum jhakkas nirala ji..

Wo Milaa to tha Dost ban ke,
Usse Pyar huaa hi Nahi to kartaa kyaa....?
thanx n nice lines Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 16, 2011, 08:28:57 AM »
shukriya nirala ji..
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2011, 09:37:09 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 16, 2011, 07:42:21 AM
Dard bhari peshkash Nirala ji bahut baddiya.Gumboy ji aape bhi acha saath diya.superb. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanx madhu ji Usual Smile
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