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Author Topic: ~~"Tu Door Jaane Laga"~~by Sophi.  (Read 224 times)
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« on: July 04, 2009, 05:38:03 PM »




Zindagi ka arth samja aane laga,
jab tanhaiyon mein tera ehsaas satane laga..

chut gaye, tut gaye. sare bandan..
jab tera jUdai k dard yea Ash batane laga..

Socha laut aau tere paas
par aab kyun mujhse tu door jaane laga..

Sitama daaye hai Duniyan ne hum par..
Ab kyun tu is Dard de dil ka ghav badane laga...

Sophi dear, aapki likhi hui purani kaafi lines padi, par ye lines jo aapne dard me likhi hai sach me dil ko choo gayi, aur aankhein namm ho gayi..to ise design karke post kar diya..umeed karti ho meri hi tarah ye aapko aur baaki members ko bhi pasandh aayengi,..

Shally.
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« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 05:51:43 PM »
Bohat Achche, Aap Dono Ne Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai,.

Great Work,.

Sophi, And Shally,.

Yunhi LIkhte Raho,.
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« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 05:54:02 PM »
Aww thank you so so much Shally.. I m very much attached to my this "Aaj mera rone ko jee chah raha hai" poetry..

Thank you so much for bringing it with a lovely design. thank you sweetheart.

you also written very beautiful lines..  Applause  Applause
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« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 05:55:12 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on July 04, 2009, 05:51:43 PM
Bohat Achche, Aap Dono Ne Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai,.

Great Work,.
Thank you so much Azeem!

Sophi, And Shally,.

Yunhi LIkhte Raho,.
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« Reply #4 on: July 04, 2009, 07:44:56 PM »
Sophi ji behad behtareen likha hai aapne bahot khoob, Shael ji aapne bahot ache se pesh kia hai,very nice
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« Reply #5 on: July 05, 2009, 02:46:35 AM »
Bohot acha likha hai aapne sophi ji...behtarein Clapping Smiley
Shally ji..nice presentation..and well written... Applause
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« Reply #6 on: July 05, 2009, 03:20:42 AM »
Bahut khoob lekh hai aur utne hi khoobsurti ki sajawat hai
Good Sophi & Shally
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« Reply #7 on: July 05, 2009, 12:55:21 PM »
Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji And Shally Ji. Applause Applause
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« Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 01:00:56 PM »
Wah wah Sophi ji and Shally ji.mindblowing,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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« Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 08:41:09 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on July 04, 2009, 07:44:56 PM
Sophi ji behad behtareen likha hai aapne bahot khoob, Shael ji aapne bahot ache se pesh kia hai,very nice
Quote from: superspawn10 on July 05, 2009, 02:46:35 AM
Bohot acha likha hai aapne sophi ji...behtarein Clapping Smiley
Shally ji..nice presentation..and well written... Applause
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Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji And Shally Ji. Applause Applause
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 05, 2009, 01:00:56 PM
Wah wah Sophi ji and Shally ji.mindblowing,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you So much Kaash ji , Madhu ji, Suparspawn ji and Rajesh ji and Sammual.
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« Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 11:21:30 PM »
Wow lovely  Applause Good lines dear Sophi and Shally  Thumbs UP
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« Reply #11 on: July 06, 2009, 11:23:11 PM »
bahoot khoob Sophi ... good work shally with Sophi's Poem!!
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