Tum Mere ho.....

by Pooja on June 25, 2007, 10:37:54 PM
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«Reply #45 on: November 28, 2008, 04:38:17 AM »
...good one Jasbir...
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«Reply #46 on: November 28, 2008, 01:32:15 PM »
thanks JHL

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«Reply #47 on: January 05, 2009, 05:29:02 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 25, 2008, 02:09:12 AM
Ankhon ke ashko main pau tumhe
her dard mai sath paau tume
koi ek pal bas aisa humara ho
jis main dil se tumne mujhe pukara ho

us pal main bas main rach jaau
her pal yaad teri main bas jaau
yaadon ke aise khumari main
akar kaho tum mere ho
nice... 1, pooooja ji
tumse jo meri rehguzar ho to,
mere pyaar mein asar ho to.
dono mein todi sahar ho to,
aakar tum kahogi tum mere ho...
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«Reply #48 on: January 06, 2009, 02:00:23 AM »
wah kaya baat hai dost kavi..
bahoot khoob
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«Reply #49 on: January 06, 2009, 04:06:51 AM »
Bohat Achche Didijaan,.
Vipal Ji..

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Sorry Ke Is Thread Ko Maine Bohat Dair Baad Dekha,.
Magar Sabne Bohat Achcha Likha hai,.
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«Reply #50 on: January 08, 2009, 02:14:27 AM »
...thanks a lot Janasheen for the appreciation...you should have written something over here...
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«Reply #51 on: January 08, 2009, 02:25:41 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on June 25, 2007, 10:37:54 PM
Bahoot dino se man tha ki same topic per hi alag alag sections mai Likhu...

Same Thread name se kuch aor sections mai bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai:

Shayri-e-zindagi: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/tum-mere-ho-vt24073.html

Khumar-e-Ishaq: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/tum-mere-ho-vt24047.html

Dard-e-Bewafai: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/tum-mere-ho-vt24074.html
 Aor ab dard-e-shayri mai koshish kar rahi hu....

Raat ka adhiara ho
Her pal teri yaad ka najara ho
Dil ne phir toot Ke Tujhko Pukara ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho

Jakhamo se dard rista ho
Jab ankho main ashaq bilkhata ho
Sanso ki sargum madham ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho……

Yaandon ke bhanwar ghoolte ho
Shabdo ke khanjar chubhate ho
Jab her baat teri rulati ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho

Mana ab nahi tum mere ho
Per meri yaadon mai kaho tum mere ho
Ek baar kaho tum mere ho
Bas ek baar kaho tum mere ho.......
Nice one Pooja Ji
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«Reply #52 on: January 08, 2009, 06:44:08 AM »
jo har pal the hum sung sung rehte
tab socha kiye the ki shayad tum mere ho

lakhon khawab sajate jab hum ankhiyan meeche
tab socha kiye the ki shayad tum mere ho

woh tera mere sang ladna,
lad kar mujhe phir apna kehna
toota hai ajj woh ek sundar sapna
kho gaya hai shayad woh "pal" phir apna

kaise ab main khud ko behla lu
apne dil ko yeh samjha du
aa kar ek bar chain dil ko de do
ya phir yeh sach shayad tum mere nahi ho
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«Reply #53 on: January 08, 2009, 12:42:20 PM »
Quote from: Arjun_ on January 08, 2009, 06:44:08 AM
jo har pal the hum sung sung rehte
tab socha kiye the ki shayad tum mere ho

lakhon khawab sajate jab hum ankhiyan meeche
tab socha kiye the ki shayad tum mere ho

woh tera mere sang ladna,
lad kar mujhe phir apna kehna
toota hai ajj woh ek sundar sapna
kho gaya hai shayad woh "pal" phir apna

kaise ab main khud ko behla lu
apne dil ko yeh samjha du
aa kar ek bar chain dil ko de do
ya phir yeh sach shayad tum mere nahi ho
Good one Arjun Ji
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«Reply #54 on: January 08, 2009, 09:16:57 PM »
Quote from: Arjun_ on January 08, 2009, 06:44:08 AM
jo har pal the hum sung sung rehte
tab socha kiye the ki shayad tum mere ho

lakhon khawab sajate jab hum ankhiyan meeche
tab socha kiye the ki shayad tum mere ho

woh tera mere sang ladna,
lad kar mujhe phir apna kehna
toota hai ajj woh ek sundar sapna
kho gaya hai shayad woh "pal" phir apna

kaise ab main khud ko behla lu
apne dil ko yeh samjha du
aa kar ek bar chain dil ko de do
ya phir yeh sach shayad tum mere nahi ho


...good one Arjun...
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«Reply #55 on: January 08, 2009, 09:24:17 PM »
Kaali raat thi aur tha halka sa kohra,
Maine tumhe taankte hue chaand ko bhi dekha hai,
Ek baar ki baat hoti to thik tha,
Maine tumhe har roz chaandni se sajte dekha hai,
Main jab ladu tumhare liye to woh jurn naa ho,
Aur phir aise mein kaho ki tum mere ho...
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«Reply #56 on: January 09, 2009, 06:12:32 AM »
Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on January 08, 2009, 02:14:27 AM
...thanks a lot Janasheen for the appreciation...you should have written something over here...

Theek Hai Bhai, Ek Koshish Karoonga,.
Umeed Hai, Aapko Pasand Aa Jaayegi,.


Tum Mere Ho, Ye Baat To Ab, Khwaab Jaisi Lagti Hai Mujhe,.
Is Khwaab Ko, Tum Mujhe Dekhne Do, Mujhe Kuch Dair Aur Sone Do,.

Aansuon Ka Lutf, Bhool Gaya Main, Use Jabse Dekhaa Hai,.
Jab Wo Door Hui Hai Mujhse, Kuch Behne Do, Mujhe Tum Rone Do,.

Kabtak Bhatkaa Karega, Bechaara Dard Yun Tanhaa "Azeem, Ki Taraah,.
Mil Jaayega Ise Mera Sahaara, Mujhe Ise Sehne Do, Ise Mera Hone Do,.

________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #57 on: January 09, 2009, 06:19:19 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 09, 2009, 06:12:32 AM
Theek Hai Bhai, Ek Koshish Karoonga,.
Umeed Hai, Aapko Pasand Aa Jaayegi,.


Tum Mere Ho, Ye Baat To Ab, Khwaab Jaisi Lagti Hai Mujhe,.
Is Khwaab Ko, Tum Mujhe Dekhne Do, Mujhe Kuch Dair Aur Sone Do,.

Aansuon Ka Lutf, Bhool Gaya Main, Use Jabse Dekhaa Hai,.
Jab Wo Door Hui Hai Mujhse, Kuch Behne Do, Mujhe Tum Rone Do,.

Kabtak Bhatkaa Karega, Bechaara Dard Yun Tanhaa "Azeem, Ki Taraah,.
Mil Jaayega Ise Mera Sahaara, Mujhe Ise Sehne Do, Ise Mera Hone Do,.

________________________________________-Jaanasheen-

Nice one Jaanasheen Bhai
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«Reply #58 on: January 09, 2009, 07:05:48 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 09, 2009, 06:19:19 AM
Nice one Jaanasheen Bhai

Shukriya Sir Ji,.
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«Reply #59 on: January 09, 2009, 10:43:04 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 09, 2009, 06:12:32 AM
Theek Hai Bhai, Ek Koshish Karoonga,.
Umeed Hai, Aapko Pasand Aa Jaayegi,.


Tum Mere Ho, Ye Baat To Ab, Khwaab Jaisi Lagti Hai Mujhe,.
Is Khwaab Ko, Tum Mujhe Dekhne Do, Mujhe Kuch Dair Aur Sone Do,.

Aansuon Ka Lutf, Bhool Gaya Main, Use Jabse Dekhaa Hai,.
Jab Wo Door Hui Hai Mujhse, Kuch Behne Do, Mujhe Tum Rone Do,.

Kabtak Bhatkaa Karega, Bechaara Dard Yun Tanhaa "Azeem, Ki Taraah,.
Mil Jaayega Ise Mera Sahaara, Mujhe Ise Sehne Do, Ise Mera Hone Do,.

________________________________________-Jaanasheen-




...why i shouldn't like it...if you write something like this than noone is going to ignore it...i'll just say "bravo"...
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