Tum Mere ho.....

by Pooja on June 25, 2007, 10:37:54 PM
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Bahoot dino se man tha ki same topic per hi alag alag sections mai Likhu...

Same Thread name se kuch aor sections mai bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai:

Shayri-e-zindagi: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/tum-mere-ho-t24073.0.html;

Khumar-e-Ishaq: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/tum-mere-ho-t24047.0.html

Dard-e-Bewafai: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayeri-for-dard-e-bewafai/tum-mere-ho-t24074.0.html;


 Aor ab dard-e-shayri mai koshish kar rahi hu....

Raat ka adhiara ho
Her pal teri yaad ka najara ho
Dil ne phir toot Ke Tujhko Pukara ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho

Jakhamo se dard rista ho
Jab ankho main ashaq bilkhata ho
Sanso ki sargum madham ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho……

Yaandon ke bhanwar ghoolte ho
Shabdo ke khanjar chubhate ho
Jab her baat teri rulati ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho

Mana ab nahi tum mere ho
Per meri yaadon mai kaho tum mere ho
Ek baar kaho tum mere ho
Bas ek baar kaho tum mere ho.......
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2007, 03:33:13 AM »
Pooja

Beautiful ! =D>

Bahut acha laga padh kar.

Dard ka ehsaas hua padh kar sad5
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paani
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2007, 09:51:03 AM »
tum mere ho......      bahut hi kareeb hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2007, 09:48:01 PM »
Thanks Veer ji and Paani ji!!
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VIPAL
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2007, 05:25:48 PM »
aapki har rachna bohaat sanjidgi se bani hui hai pooja. aapki taraf iss kabil toh nahi jo itne rango mein khud ko bayan kar saku.. abhi sirf yahi likha hai.. shayad aap pasand karein

na teri umeed se behtar na kam hu
gujara hua masaum,aur aane wali basant hu

bhatka hu tere payaar mein ban kar musafir
uss gali,uss chorahe ka ludkta hua pathar hu

Intezar ke lamhein jo mar kar jiya
Gallon pe siskata hua deewana ashQ hu

Shikayat na rakhna kabhi aapne iss AshiQ se
kayunki,Jaisa bhi hu,mere humdum,bas sirf tera hu...!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2007, 09:36:16 PM »
very Nice Vipul ji!!!
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VIPAL
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2007, 07:42:01 PM »
Thanks pooja ji.. btw its VIPAL not VIPUL sad5 :evil:
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2007, 11:14:17 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB POOJA JI.BADI SARALTA AUR SHEETALTA SE AAPNE LIKHA HAI..BAHUT ACHE
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2007, 11:10:09 AM »
Pooja di... Its Really Very Touching...
and
Vipal... Very thoughtful writing by you too....

Really liked them...  Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2007, 09:03:39 PM »
Thanks Khwaish and Shikha ji!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2007, 09:56:07 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Thanks Khwaish and Shikha ji!!!



Shikha JI[/b] sad5 :?: sad5

Pooja Di.... Aap Mujhse naraaz ho kya? sad5
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2007, 10:56:55 PM »
Dear Shikha!!

Yah kaise kaya app baat kah gai
Narajgi apse, kaise yah soch gai

Ji lagati hu ki apki rachnaye bahoot bhati hai
Maan karti hu ki apki baatein bahoot suhati hai

Narajagi nahi, maan ki yah JI pahchaan hai
Apki aise baat pard kar, dil hua preshan hai!!
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VIPAL
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«Reply #12 on: July 02, 2007, 08:29:32 AM »
Thanks Shikha ... aap mujhse kafi impressed lagti hain tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 (j/K)

toote hue sapne aor kuch pal ki yaadein
meri jeevan ka safar bas yahi khatam lagta hai

sung reh kar,dard kissi aor ka jo bayan kare
na bewaffa hai woh,payaar mera hi kachha lagta hai

har lamha batakan aor milne ki umeed main karu
samjha tha main deewangni,lekin ab dhoka lagta hai

na raat khatam hoti najar aati hai,door tak andhera
mere humdum bhi vaada-badkhilafi ka saudagar lagta hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2007, 02:45:02 AM »
Good one Vipal ji
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akela
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2007, 01:38:04 AM »
nice everyone ..........sabhi ne bahoot achha likha hai
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