Tum Mere Ho......

by Pooja on June 22, 2007, 02:59:22 AM
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Thandi hawa ke jhonke ho
bhanwaro ke phoolo per dare ho
Bago mai koyal gaati ho
aise main kaho tum mere ho  :lol:

Virksho (Tree) ki thundi chah ho
Tere sath hi jaati her raah ho
Tere hatho main mera hath ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :razz:

Nadia ka paani gaata ho
Nadia ko sagar sung milata ho
Fiza mai inderdhanush ka raj ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :D

Asmaan mai bikhare sitare ho
Jhilmil karte her taraf tare ho
Chanda ki chandini phaily ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho  Usual Smile

Her baat per kaho tum mere ho
Her pal yah kaho tum mere ho
Ek baar nahi, baar- M- baar kaho
Tum mere ho bas mere ho!!!!!  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:



Veer ji and Paani ji>>>> yah funny nahi hai  :evil:


Same Title with Different Moods:

Bewafai: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayeri-for-dard-e-bewafai/tum-mere-ho-t24074.0.html;

Zindagi: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/tum-mere-ho-t24073.0.html;

DARD: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/tum-mere-ho-t24072.0.html;
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2007, 04:17:12 AM »
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Ha ha ha. . .

Too good Pooja =D> =D> =D>

Yeh to sahi mein khumar se bharpoor hai :wink:
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2007, 09:59:38 AM »
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Very sweet poem Pooja Di.. very sweet!
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Nirbhay
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2007, 10:00:42 AM »
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Khoob, Bahut Khoob!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2007, 02:29:31 PM »
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Pooja di... Its Lovely... =D> As Ever... Usual Smile
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2007, 03:13:50 PM »
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Wah Pooja Ji.. Kamaal kar Diya.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. !!!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Behad Pyaari Rachna Likhi Hai aapne.. !! Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2007, 03:14:20 PM »
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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

Thandi hawa ke jhonke ho
bhanwaro ke phoolo per dare ho
Bago mai koyal gaati ho
aise main kaho tum mere ho  :lol:

Virksho (Tree) ki thundi chah ho
Tere sath hi jaati her raah ho
Tere hatho main mera hath ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :razz:

Nadia ka paani gaata ho
Nadia ko sagar sung milata ho
Fiza mai inderdhanush ka raj ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :D

Asmaan mai bikhare sitare ho
Jhilmil karte her taraf tare ho
Chanda ki chandini phaily ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho  Usual Smile

Her baat per kaho tum mere ho
Her pal yah kaho tum mere ho
Ek baar nahi, baar- M- baar kaho
Tum mere ho bas mere ho!!!!!  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:

Veer ji and Paani ji>>>> yah funny nahi hai  :evil:


wah wah..............sahi hai........kiske liye likh diya ye apne....shall i make a guess..........Winking

Kis shakhs se kar di hai ye guzarish apne,
Shabdon mein pyar ki ye baarish apne,
Kaise kahega koi na aise dilwale ko,
Ishq ki ki hai bade pyaar se sifarish aapne....Winking
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2007, 03:15:34 PM »
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Vicky

Aaj kal tumhari kalam ko jang lagi hai kya :evil: sad5
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paani
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2007, 04:15:42 PM »
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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

Thandi hawa ke jhonke ho
bhanwaro ke phoolo per dare ho
Bago mai koyal gaati ho
aise main kaho tum mere ho  :lol:

Virksho (Tree) ki thundi chah ho
Tere sath hi jaati her raah ho
Tere hatho main mera hath ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :razz:

Nadia ka paani gaata ho
Nadia ko sagar sung milata ho
Fiza mai inderdhanush ka raj ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :D

Asmaan mai bikhare sitare ho
Jhilmil karte her taraf tare ho
Chanda ki chandini phaily ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho  Usual Smile

Her baat per kaho tum mere ho
Her pal yah kaho tum mere ho
Ek baar nahi, baar- M- baar kaho
Tum mere ho bas mere ho!!!!!  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:

Veer ji and Paani ji>>>> yah funny nahi hai  :evil:


Pooja .. bhhut hi meethi kavita likhi hai aapne.. sachhi.. lajawab hai..!!! bahut mithass hai issme.. keep writing such poetry pls...
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2007, 09:12:54 AM »
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Vicky

Aaj kal tumhari kalam ko jang lagi hai kya :evil: sad5


Rajbir Bhai... Aaj kal Thoda Busy Chal Raha hoon.. Jaldi Hi aapki Shikayat Door
Kar doonga... Kalam Ko Jang Kabhi Nahi Lagne Doonga.. tongue3 tongue3 Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2007, 10:40:24 PM »
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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

Thandi hawa ke jhonke ho
bhanwaro ke phoolo per dare ho
Bago mai koyal gaati ho
aise main kaho tum mere ho  :lol:

Virksho (Tree) ki thundi chah ho
Tere sath hi jaati her raah ho
Tere hatho main mera hath ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :razz:

Nadia ka paani gaata ho
Nadia ko sagar sung milata ho
Fiza mai inderdhanush ka raj ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :D

Asmaan mai bikhare sitare ho
Jhilmil karte her taraf tare ho
Chanda ki chandini phaily ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho  Usual Smile

Her baat per kaho tum mere ho
Her pal yah kaho tum mere ho
Ek baar nahi, baar- M- baar kaho
Tum mere ho bas mere ho!!!!!  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:



Veer ji and Paani ji>>>> yah funny nahi hai  :evil:



Just playing with me..... same topic per kuch aor sections maib bhi likha hai...

Dard-e-shayari: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/tum-mere-ho-vt24072.html

Shayri-e-zindagi: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/tum-mere-ho-vt24073.html

Dard-e-Bewafai: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/tum-mere-ho-vt24074.html
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2008, 03:26:46 AM »
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vicky ji lagta hai app shikayat door karna bhool gaye... chaliye ek moka aor sahi...
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2008, 11:46:36 PM »
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Quote from: thycreator on June 23, 2007, 03:14:20 PM


wah wah..............sahi hai........kiske liye likh diya ye apne....shall i make a guess..........Winking

Kis shakhs se kar di hai ye guzarish apne,
Shabdon mein pyar ki ye baarish apne,
Kaise kahega koi na aise dilwale ko,
Ishq ki ki hai bade pyaar se sifarish aapne....Winking

Shukaria Amit ji, bahoot achi lines likhi hai apne..

Sifarish kahe ya ab kahe Gujarish
dil ne dil ki baat kah di hai
ban jaaye bas wo mere he
itne main he, sab baat kah di hai
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«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2008, 01:43:20 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on June 22, 2007, 02:59:22 AM
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Thandi hawa ke jhonke ho
bhanwaro ke phoolo per dare ho
Bago mai koyal gaati ho
aise main kaho tum mere ho  :lol:

Virksho (Tree) ki thundi chah ho
Tere sath hi jaati her raah ho
Tere hatho main mera hath ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :razz:

Nadia ka paani gaata ho
Nadia ko sagar sung milata ho
Fiza mai inderdhanush ka raj ho
Aise main kaho tum mere ho  :D

Asmaan mai bikhare sitare ho
Jhilmil karte her taraf tare ho
Chanda ki chandini phaily ho
Aise mai kaho tum mere ho  Usual Smile

Her baat per kaho tum mere ho
Her pal yah kaho tum mere ho
Ek baar nahi, baar- M- baar kaho
Tum mere ho bas mere ho!!!!!  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:



Veer ji and Paani ji>>>> yah funny nahi hai  :evil:

Badi maasoom si khwahish hai...badi pyari poem likhi thi Pooja ...meri nazar se reh gayi.
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2008, 01:56:00 AM »
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Thanks you so much Celmira.

Abhi yahi likh kar aai hu is thread main:
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/user-support-and-suggestion-forum/why-poetry-is-secondary-over-yoindia-who-is-at-fault-t40431.0.html;msg819357;topicseen#new

Mujhe bhi meri yah poem bahoot achi lagi, magar dekho kitne logo ne comments diye hai.. sad5
Aor yah meri pahli koshish thi ki same Title per alag alag bhawnao se likhu... magar koi khas response na dekh kar maine kabhi dobara koshish nahi ki sad5

Any ways.. Der aaye darust ayye.. bahoot bahoot shukaria, is thread main hazoor app ayye Usual Smile
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