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Mashhur Shayar
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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kya khoya maine hai
kya khoya usne hai
kya paayaa maine hai
kya paayaa usne hai
toota dil kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai
kal wo meri khaas thi
main bhi uska khaas tha
kal wo mere paas thi
main bhi uske paas tha
aaj rishte kuch aur hai
kuch mera kuch uska hai
dil jo aaj tuta hai
mera hai ya uska hai
kaanch ka tha dil mera
usne jisko toda hai
saath reh ke kuch pal
usne hi muh moda hai
aaj sooni baahen hain
tanha har ek rasta hai
jaane kya aaj mehenga hai
par pyaar bahut sasta hai
toota dil kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai
bheed me bhi tanha hoon
saath uska chhoota hai
jaane kya wajah hui jo
yaar mera rootha hai
kasme kuch jo tuti hain
vaade kuch jo tute hain
dhundne chalaa hoon main
kya mera kya uska hai
toota dil ye kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai.....
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2012, 07:52:57 PM » |
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bahot bahot khoob Hriday sahab
kamaal ki nazm hai
daad daad daaad
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2012, 07:54:26 PM » |
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kya khoya maine hai
kya khoya usne hai
kya paayaa maine hai
kya paayaa usne hai
toota dil kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai
kal wo meri khaas thi
main bhi uska khaas tha
kal wo mere paas thi
main bhi uske paas tha
aaj rishte kuch aur hai
kuch mera kuch uska hai
dil jo aaj tuta hai
mera hai ya uska hai
kaanch ka tha dil mera
usne jisko toda hai
saath reh ke kuch pal
usne hi muh moda hai
aaj sooni baahen hain
tanha har ek rasta hai
jaane kya aaj mehenga hai
par pyaar bahut sasta hai
toota dil kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai
bheed me bhi tanha hoon
saath uska chhoota hai
jaane kya wajah hui jo
yaar mera rootha hai
kasme kuch jo tuti hain
vaade kuch jo tute hain
dhundne chalaa hoon main
kya mera kya uska hai
toota dil ye kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai.....
BAHUT KHUBSURAT NAZM LIKHI HAI HRIDAY VERIIIIII NAAAAAICE |
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2012, 01:16:20 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2012, 03:37:29 AM » |
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bahut khoob Hriday ji dheon daad aur ek rau qubool karen
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2012, 06:10:24 AM » |
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Nice.Worth a Rau.
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2012, 08:57:21 AM » |
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nyc effort....
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2012, 10:16:02 AM » |
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khwahish
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2012, 11:41:28 AM » |
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kya khoya maine hai
kya khoya usne hai
kya paayaa maine hai
kya paayaa usne hai
toota dil kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai
kal wo meri khaas thi
main bhi uska khaas tha
kal wo mere paas thi
main bhi uske paas tha
aaj rishte kuch aur hai
kuch mera kuch uska hai
dil jo aaj tuta hai
mera hai ya uska hai
kaanch ka tha dil mera
usne jisko toda hai
saath reh ke kuch pal
usne hi muh moda hai
aaj sooni baahen hain
tanha har ek rasta hai
jaane kya aaj mehenga hai
par pyaar bahut sasta hai
toota dil kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai
bheed me bhi tanha hoon
saath uska chhoota hai
jaane kya wajah hui jo
yaar mera rootha hai
kasme kuch jo tuti hain
vaade kuch jo tute hain
dhundne chalaa hoon main
kya mera kya uska hai
toota dil ye kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai.....
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2012, 04:53:58 PM » |
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~Hriday~
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Mashhur Shayar
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2012, 06:38:59 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sarfira ji....!!! bahot bahot khoob Hriday sahab
kamaal ki nazm hai
daad daad daaad
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~Hriday~
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Mashhur Shayar
Rau: 115
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Waqt Bitaya:101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.
kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
Posts: 16243 Member Since: Feb 2010
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2012, 03:23:24 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa K_A ji....!!! BAHUT KHUBSURAT NAZM LIKHI HAI HRIDAY VERIIIIII NAAAAAICE
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~Hriday~
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Mashhur Shayar
Rau: 115
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Waqt Bitaya:101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.
kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
Posts: 16243 Member Since: Feb 2010
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2012, 04:00:33 PM » |
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Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much Ripan ji for your sweeet comments....!!! |
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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2012, 04:03:12 PM » |
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kya khoya maine hai
kya khoya usne hai
kya paayaa maine hai
kya paayaa usne hai
toota dil kiska hai
mera hai ya uska hai
wooow toching lines... bahut khoob. |
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