Us shakhs ki kami hai...

by brokenbyluv on October 30, 2010, 05:34:23 PM
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Aaj ye chalti sanse kuch kuch jami hai,
chalte chalte merri dhadkane kayi baar thami hai,

koi gum nhi phir bhi ankho se ashq rukte nhi,
jane kis baat ki merri ankho mein nami hai,

jo rishte khuda ne banake bheje hai vo sang tou hai,
phir bhi kisi ek shakhs ki kami hai,

jane kyun zarurat hai merre dil ko kisi k sath ki,
aaj tanha si raat hai suna asman hai aur khamosh si ye zamin hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2010, 05:41:35 PM »
same yehi mera hal hai yaar........pata nahin kya missing hai........superbbbbbbb poem..once again my feelings ur words......
lovely yaarrrrrr
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2010, 05:48:08 PM »
Woh Insan Hi Kya Jiske Dil Mein
Koi Khwaish Yaan Koi  Kami Na Ho.

Bahut Khoobsurti Se Lafzon Ko
Piroya Hai Aapne Brokenbyliv Ji.

Khush Rahen.

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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2010, 05:54:01 PM »
Bahut bahut shurkiya humdum ji n kasak ji...
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2010, 06:06:28 PM »
wahi tou missing your....Rajkumaar.... Winking Winking Winking
jis-se kar sako raj ki baatein....pyaar ki baatein.... love4  love4
jis se apna kuchh na ho chhupa huaa.....
dil se dil ki baatein.... love9 love9
haan sakhee yahi hai akelepan ka ahsaas......
Apna sab kuchh kisi k saath baantne ki chah drunken_smilie
Shayad ess umra me har ladki ko mehsoos hoti hai ye kami....mujhe bhi..... mujhe bhi....haan sakhee....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 30, 2010, 05:34:23 PM


Aaj ye chalti sanse kuch kuch jami hai,
chalte chalte merri dhadkane kayi baar thami hai,

koi gum nhi phir bhi ankho se ashq rukte nhi,
jane kis baat ki merri ankho mein nami hai,

jo rishte khuda ne banake bheje hai vo sang tou hai,
phir bhi kisi ek shakhs ki kami hai,

jane kyun zarurat hai merre dil ko kisi k sath ki,
aaj tanha si raat hai suna asman hai aur khamosh si ye zamin hai.........
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2010, 06:10:03 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 30, 2010, 06:06:28 PM
wahi tou missing your....Rajkumaar.... Winking Winking Winking
jis-se kar sako raj ki baatein....pyaar ki baatein.... love4  love4
jis se apna kuchh na ho chhupa huaa.....
dil se dil ki baatein.... love9 love9
haan sakhee yahi hai akelepan ka ahsaas......
Apna sab kuchh kisi k saath baantne ki chah drunken_smilie
Shayad ess umra me har ladki ko mehsoos hoti hai ye kami....mujhe bhi..... mujhe bhi....haan sakhee....



Ye ehsas jo bhi hai bahut dard bhara hai...thnx for ur lovely words sweetu...
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2010, 06:18:03 PM »
Pyaar...pyaar...sakhee...Nahi samjhi....
Par kyu tera ye haal hai....badi-di... icon_scratch icon_scratch
KYU TUJHE YE khayaal aaya hai.... DOH DOH
kyu tune hamaari haan me haan milaya hai..... sad11 sad7
kya hamaare haal pe tujhe taras aaya hai.... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 30, 2010, 05:41:35 PM
same yehi mera hal hai yaar........pata nahin kya missing hai........superbbbbbbb poem..once again my feelings ur words......
lovely yaarrrrrr
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2010, 01:38:44 AM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.... beautifully presented...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ek baar nazar uthaake ke dekh main hoon tere liye,
maloom hai tu mujhe nahi chaahti par isme mera kasoor kya hai,

maine to jo bhi sapne dekhe hain wo hain bas tere liye,
mere sapno ko sach karne me teri khushi nahi to mera kasoor kya hai,

maine to bas chaahna sikha hai aur tujhe chahta hi rahunga,
par tujhe mere pyaar ka ehsaas nahi to isme bhala mera kasoor kya hai,

ek din bhool ke apne ateet ko aa jaayegi tu meri baahon me,
aaj meri baahen sooni hai tere bagair to isme mera kasoor kya hai,

dunga itna pyaar tujhe ki tujhe bhi mujhse mohabbat ho jaayegi,
ek din tu meri hogi, aaj nahi to isme bhalaa mera kasoor kya hai...
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2010, 06:02:39 AM »
Bahut bahut shurkiya shihab ji...
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2010, 09:00:03 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 31, 2010, 01:38:44 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.... beautifully presented...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ek baar nazar uthaake ke dekh main hoon tere liye,
maloom hai tu mujhe nahi chaahti par isme mera kasoor kya hai,

maine to jo bhi sapne dekhe hain wo hain bas tere liye,
mere sapno ko sach karne me teri khushi nahi to mera kasoor kya hai,

maine to bas chaahna sikha hai aur tujhe chahta hi rahunga,
par tujhe mere pyaar ka ehsaas nahi to isme bhala mera kasoor kya hai,

ek din bhool ke apne ateet ko aa jaayegi tu meri baahon me,
aaj meri baahen sooni hai tere bagair to isme mera kasoor kya hai,

dunga itna pyaar tujhe ki tujhe bhi mujhse mohabbat ho jaayegi,
ek din tu meri hogi, aaj nahi to isme bhalaa mera kasoor kya hai...

Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji kuch bana tou zarur reply karungi...
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2010, 08:46:27 AM »
Pahala Jumla Hi Dil chhoo Gaya Geet Ji.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Lafzon me utaara Hai aapne.. Akelepan aur Intzaar Ke Lamhaaton Ko Behad Khubsoorati ke Sath Pesh kiya hai.. Applause Applause



Main Jaanta Hoon Tujhe Meri Chaahat Nahi,
Tere Dil Ko Meri Dharkano Se Mohabbat Nahi...

Tere Khwaabon Ko Tamanna Hai Kisi Aur Ki,
Teri Aankhon Me Mere Chehre Ki Sajawat Nahi...

Phir Kaise Kaha Doon Mujhe Ishq Hai Tujhse,
Jab Khayalon Me Tere Mujhe Aane Ki Ijaazat Nahi....

Khatm Kar To Deta Main, Intzaar Tera E-Sanam,
Par Bheegi Palkon Ko Teri, Meri Zaroorat Nahi...

Ek Kami Hai Tere Bagair, Par Such Yeh Bhi Hai Shayad,
Ke Haath Ki Laqeeron Me Tere Naam Ki Likhawat Nahi..!!!



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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2010, 09:03:03 AM »
wah di jitni bar padho ek alag ehsaas bahut khoob...

again the pic is beautifull..

sabhi lines ekse badhkar ek.. maja ayaa..

dhers sari daad~
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«Reply #12 on: November 03, 2010, 09:24:20 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji n dear abhi...Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 03, 2010, 09:33:50 AM »
Quote from: Mann on November 03, 2010, 08:46:27 AM

Main Jaanta Hoon Tujhe Meri Chaahat Nahi,
Tere Dil Ko Meri Dharkano Se Mohabbat Nahi...

Tere Khwaabon Ko Tamanna Hai Kisi Aur Ki,
Teri Aankhon Me Mere Chehre Ki Sajawat Nahi...

Phir Kaise Kaha Doon Mujhe Ishq Hai Tujhse,
Jab Khayalon Me Tere Mujhe Aane Ki Ijaazat Nahi....

Khatm Kar To Deta Main, Intzaar Tera E-Sanam,
Par Bheegi Palkon Ko Teri, Meri Zaroorat Nahi...

Ek Kami Hai Tere Bagair, Par Such Yeh Bhi Hai Shayad,
Ke Haath Ki Laqeeron Me Tere Naam Ki Likhawat Nahi..!!!



**~** Mann **~**


Bahut khoob mann ji..


Ye ankhe jab dhundhti ho ek hi chehra,
kaise us chehre se keh de ki usse mhbt nhi,

in dhadkano mein ho ho har pal kisi ek ka pehera,
phir kyun us shakhs ko dil mein aane ki ijazat nhi,

har lamha jiski khushbu se mehekta ho merra sehera,
kaise keh du ki uski yado se zindgi mein sajawat nhi,

ye baat aur hai kabhi lafzo se saaf nhi kaha ki pyar hai,
per iska matlab ye tou nhi ki mujhe terri chahat nhi,

maine har faisla jo kubula hai sir jhuka kar terra..
vo merri mhbt hi hai koi banawat nhi.........
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«Reply #14 on: November 03, 2010, 09:51:15 AM »
Kya Kahoon,Iske Ilaawa Ke Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob geetji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ehsaas Dil ko chutte Hue..


Tanhaai mein Bhi Tujhe Tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Naa Ho..
Aisa Koi waqt naa Aaye,Jab Koi Tere paas Naa Ho..

Waqt Se mile Zakhm Bhar Hi Jaate Hai!!!
Dard S bhari Hui kabhi Teri Awaaz Naa Ho..

Zindagi Ki Har Cheez Haasil Ho tujhe!!!
Jo kabhi bhuj naa Paaye Aisi koi Pyaaz naa Ho...

yeh Sach hai Kisi Shaks Ki Kami,Kami Hi reh Jaati hai
Par Teri Hai Muraad Poori ho,"Geet" Baaki Dil Mein Tere Koi Aas Naa Ho

Tanhai mein Bhi Tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Naa Ho...
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