~Ye Dard~

by pankshivam on February 19, 2011, 11:14:40 AM
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Cheer kar jo mera lahu dil se bahne laga...
Chupchap baitha mai ye dard jane kyun sahne laga...

Samjh na payi meri sanse dhakano ki aawaz ko...
Vo chhed deti hain bar bar us dard bhare saz ko...

Jiska naam lekar ab mai tanha rahane laga...
Vo mera hi saya mere samne aakar meri dastan kahne laga...

~pank~



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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2011, 11:18:45 AM »
bht khoob shivam  ji....
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2011, 11:27:33 AM »
bht khoob shivam  ji....
Thankyou ! Manzil ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 11:33:00 AM »
Cheer kar jo mera lahu dil se bahne laga...
Chupchap baitha mai ye dard jane kyun sahne laga...

Samjh na payi meri sanse dhakano ki aawaz ko...
Vo chhed deti hain bar bar us dard bhare saz ko...

Jiska naam lekar ab mai tanha rahane laga...
Vo mera hi saya mere samne aakar meri dastan kahne laga...

~pank~


Good One ..... pankshivam ji ! dil se daad !!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2011, 05:02:05 PM »
bahut khub pankji...

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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 07:45:27 PM »
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2011, 10:41:03 PM »
Nice pank ji.
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2011, 11:15:41 PM »
lajawaab creation Pankh ji.
dil se daad
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2011, 12:12:32 AM »
Good One ..... pankshivam ji ! dil se daad !!!!
Shukriya Anshumali ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2011, 12:14:44 AM »
bahut khub pankji...

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Shukriya Manjum ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2011, 12:17:04 AM »
Zarra navazi ka Shukriya Rahim Bhai, Nirla ji ,Geet ji ke aap logo ko mera likha pasand aaya
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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2011, 12:22:48 AM »
Bahut Khub Pank Bhai Bahut Hi Sunder Aur Behtrin Likha Hai Aapne
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«Reply #12 on: February 20, 2011, 12:25:55 AM »
Bahut Khub Pank Bhai Bahut Hi Sunder Aur Behtrin Likha Hai Aapne
Thanks Rishi Bhai
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