Ye raat aur pass aane lagi hai.

by adhuri kalpana on November 02, 2012, 03:25:34 PM
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adhuri kalpana
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Ek chubhan mann ko satane lagi hai,
                             Ye raat shayad aur pass aane lagi hai..
                             Kabhi iss aur kabhi uss aur karwat badalna,
                             Aag ban ke teri yaad mujhko jalane lagi hai,
                             Ye raat shayad aur pass aane lagi hai..

                                   Tere chune se wo machalna mera,
                                   Kabhi shola kabhi sabnam sa badalna mera..
                                   Toot ke teri bahon mai fhir pighalna mera,
                                   Aati jaati sanse ab har kissa sunane lagi hai..
                                   Ye raat shayad aur pass aane lagi hai..

                             Rulake mujhko wo hasana tera,
                             door ja ke fhir mushkurake laut aana tera..
                             Baccho sa fhir meri god mai so jana tera,
                             Chadar ki har shilwat teri yaad dilane lagi hai,
                             Ye raat shayad aur pass aane lagi hai.
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2012, 03:34:20 PM »
just wonderful creation.............

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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2012, 03:48:20 PM »
bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2012, 03:50:36 PM »
bahut khoob  Applause Applause

(aapka id name mein adhuri likha hai. but aap adhuri nahi hai. )
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2012, 03:55:51 PM »
thank u so much soudagar ji Usual Smile Usual Smile


thank u SK ji again n again Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2012, 03:58:15 PM »
suman ji dhanyawaad ..jab tak insaan adhura hota hai usmai kabhi na kabhi pura hone ki chahat zinda rehti bas isliye Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2012, 08:09:39 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut sundar Kalpana ji... sach me bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... too good....!!!

har ek saans meri tere naam se hi chalti hai
har ek dhadkan meri tere hi geet sunaati hai
bhulaane ko to main kab kaa bhulaa detaa tujhe
par teri yaad tujhe mere aur kareeb le aati hai
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2012, 01:40:15 AM »
bahut umda icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2012, 04:44:36 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 03, 2012, 06:10:42 AM »
thank q soo much HARIDAY ji Usual Smile

NANDBAHU ji sukhriya Usual Smile

AQSh thank u Usual Smile
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