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Yeh aaKhree salam mera tere naam hai
kar le qubool is ko yeh mera salam hai
Yeh aaKhree salam mera tere naam hai
ruKhsat ke waqt palkeN bhigane ki rasm kyuuN
babul ke ghar ko choRna beTee ka kaam hai
yadoN ke saye raushnee hone nah deNge ab
yeh zindagee hamari andheroN ke sham hai
Woh nazm ho ya ho meri Ghazal sub tire liye
Jab se kitab.e dil pe likha tera naam hai
yeh mera kaam tha ki banaya hai aashiyaN
Ab bijliyaN giraana falak tera kaam hai
Kya ab bhhi uski yaad ke baqi hain kuch nishaN ?
Yeh phir zubaN pe teri jo “Nira” ka naam hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2009, 06:53:57 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2009, 08:02:32 AM » |
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Yeh aaKhree salam mera tere naam hai
kar le qubool is ko yeh mera salam hai
Yeh aaKhree salam mera tere naam hai
ruKhsat ke waqt palkeN bhigane ki rasm kyuuN
babul ke ghar ko choRna beTee ka kaam hai
yadoN ke saye raushnee hone nah deNge ab
yeh zindagee hamari andheroN ke sham hai
Woh nazm ho ya ho meri Ghazal sub tire liye
Jab se kitab.e dil pe likha tera naam hai
yeh mera kaam tha ki banaya hai aashiyaN
Ab bijliyaN giraana falak tera kaam hai
Kya ab bhhi uski yaad ke baqi hain kuch nishaN ?
Yeh phir zubaN pe teri jo “Nira” ka naam hai
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2009, 12:42:56 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Nira Ji, 
Shally. hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya. |
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2009, 12:44:54 PM » |
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madhuwesh ji aapko pasand aayi rachna dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon |
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2009, 12:46:44 PM » |
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bhut khoobsurat paishkash nira ji...
aaina ji aapko yahan dekhkar bahut acha laga aapko yeh peshkash pasand aayi aapki shukrguzaar hoon yunhi saath dete rahiyega. nira |
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2009, 12:50:10 PM » |
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bahut achche nira dear...keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2009, 12:58:56 PM » |
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bahut achche nira dear...keep it up
salil ji shukriya aapne sahraya aapko pasand aayi meri rachna |
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2009, 04:16:14 PM » |
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hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya |
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2009, 04:21:48 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2009, 04:26:21 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Nira..
Bahut Acha Likhte Ho Aap.. 
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2009, 04:27:37 PM » |
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Bahut bahut khoob Nira sis
roja sis so nice to see u thanks a lot for liking my poem |
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2009, 04:28:55 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Nira..
Bahut Acha Likhte Ho Aap.. aap sab ki zaraanawazi aapko pasand aata hain mera likha bahut bahut shukriya |
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2009, 05:30:32 PM » |
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Apka Jawab nahi hai ...MAin is poem ko aacha khe kar iski toheen nahi karta chahata hoon apne isko itne jasbat see likha hai usko bus aacha khena yah galat hoga.. Main Apko Salam karta hoon Aur Yah Manta hoon ki apne jis khubsoorati see isko likha hai is ka koi jawab nahi hai..Bobby
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