**Andhera bahaut hai** by Rahim

by dead heart on May 16, 2010, 08:37:52 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 17, 2010, 07:59:00 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai Rahim bhi... bahut achcha likha hai aapne... humein aapki ye kavita bahut pasand aayi... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!
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«Reply #16 on: May 17, 2010, 09:28:54 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil dost...teh dil se shukriya!
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«Reply #17 on: May 17, 2010, 09:32:23 PM »
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afsos nahi mere sher ko unhone galib ka kah diya
ye to shukar hai unhone accha hai to kah diya
Applause Applause Kya baat hai...Bahaut ache!!
for rahim,madhu,maddy

kabhi dard ko hum sahte hai
kabhi dard ko hum kahte hai
shayer jitne bhi hai yaha manoj
dard de duniya mei sab rahte hai


for rahim
gum se apne dost tum bahut larte ho
shayeri rahim tum bakhub karte ho

Bahaut bahaut khoob..

Aur shukriya bhi ke apne mere liye kuch likha...Bahaut bahaut shukriya!
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«Reply #18 on: May 17, 2010, 09:43:32 PM »
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Yeh shaer apke liye share kar raha hoon;

Yeh ainey tujhe kya dikhaenge teri khabar Mohsin,
Aa meri ankhon main dekh tu kitna haseen hai...
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«Reply #19 on: May 17, 2010, 09:45:13 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Maddy ji... !!!

aankhon me hain anshu bhare huye
par hontho pare hanshi bahoot hai,

har koi chupta hai asliyat apni
or kahte h ki aankhon me sachchayi bahoot hai,

har koi pahle number par aana chahta hai
par aankhe kholo to zindgi ki dhoud me bheed bahoot hai,

in aanshuon ko pochne ke liye koi hath to badaye
aankhon me pani dene wale to bahoot hai,

dil me khooshiyon ke liye jagah hi nhi hai
kyonki dil me gum ke badal bahut hai,

sochta hun ki kabhi koi aayega hamara bankar
par kya kren is duniya me dhokhebaj bhi bahoot hai !!!

 love9 love9 love9 love9
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«Reply #20 on: May 19, 2010, 03:49:55 AM »
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for rahim,madhu,maddy

kabhi dard ko hum sahte hai
kabhi dard ko hum kahte hai
shayer jitne bhi hai yaha manoj
dard de duniya mei sab rahte hai



sayar ka to kaam hi durd ko sahna hai,
kabhi duniya se to kabhi khuda ladna hai,
har sayar Tanhayi ka Raja hota h Maddy,
yahi to rahim, madhu or manoj ka kahana hai .
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«Reply #21 on: May 19, 2010, 03:54:36 AM »
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shukriya klaskar jee

 hello hello hello hello
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«Reply #22 on: May 19, 2010, 04:42:26 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Likemaddy ji.great lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: May 19, 2010, 04:52:47 AM »
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thanks again madhu jee wave wave wave wave
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