**Gunhegaar bahaut hai** by Rahim

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Samander ke kinare baitha tha ek bheed ke beech aur dil tanha tha...Bahaut baar aisa hota hai ke hum logon ke saath hoke bhi saath nahin hote..Kisi ki kami khalti hai...Khair meri yeh nazm uss tanhai ko bayan bhi kar rahi hai, pyaar ki kami bhi dikhana chahta hoon aur ek sachayi bhi bayan karna chahta hoon..Kuch alag likha hai maine iss baar..

Dunia main dil torrne wale madadgar bahaut hai,
Raaz-e-insaan bolne wale razdaar bahaut hai…

Bahaut kam log hai jo wakei rishta nibhate hai,
Sach ko jhoot dikhane wale kalakar bahaut hai…

Koi dekta nahin sache dilon ko aj ki duniya main,
Qatil chehron ko apnane wale chitrakar bahaut hai…

Ae Khuda koi aisa shaks mujhe dikhla de jo karta hai sacha pyaar,
Yahan toh dil ko chakna chur karne wale gunhegaar bahaut hai…

Kaun chahta hai apnon ko aj ki iss duniya main ‘Khamosh’,
Yahan toh paison ke talabgar bahaut hai…

Aur mat rehna kisi par bhi nirbhar tum yahan ‘Khamosh’,
Yahan toh chehre badalne wale dhongi panhagar bahaut hai…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2010, 10:30:15 PM »
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Wah Rahim JI !!!!!!!!!!

very very true ............... Bilcul sach hai yeh bhut  khoob!!!

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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2010, 07:24:24 AM »
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Nice creation hai Abdul Rahim Bhai.

Ye lines sabse achhi lagi:

Bahaut kam log hai jo wakei rishta nibhate hai,
Sach ko jhoot dikhane wale kalakar bahaut hai…

Aapne likha hai:

Ae Khuda koi aisa shaks mujhe dikhla de jo karta hai sacha pyaar,
Yahan toh dil ko chakna chur karne wale gunhegaar bahaut hai…

Lekin Abdul Rahim Bhai aisa nahi hai ke sachha pyar, sachi dosti karne wale log bilkul hi nahi hain. Bahot kam hi sahi lekin aise log bhi duniya mein maujood hote hai.
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2010, 08:25:00 AM »
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"Bahut Kam Log Hai Jo Vaakai Rishte Nibhaate Hai
Sach Ko Jhoot Dikhane wale kalakaar Bahut Hai"..

Waah Waah Waah....Bahut Hi Jazbaati Aur Dil Ko Chuu lene wali Peshkash Bhai Rahim..

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2010, 11:18:07 AM »
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Shukriya Neel jee, Riyaz jee aur Khwahish jee..

Riyaz jee, bahaut sahi baat kahi apne ke sacha pyaar toh kya, sachi dosti bhi nahin nibhate hai log...wakei bahaut kam hai jinpe bharosa kiya jaa sakta hai...
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2010, 07:12:42 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Shihab bhaijan...
Khush rahein!
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2010, 04:33:16 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob Rahim ji. bahot sach kaha aapne .
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2010, 04:38:43 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut Shukriya Saurabh jee..
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2010, 10:08:40 PM »
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Samander ke kinare baitha tha ek bheed ke beech aur dil tanha tha...Bahaut baar aisa hota hai ke hum logon ke saath hoke bhi saath nahin hote..Kisi ki kami khalti hai...Khair meri yeh nazm uss tanhai ko bayan bhi kar rahi hai, pyaar ki kami bhi dikhana chahta hoon aur ek sachayi bhi bayan karna chahta hoon..Kuch alag likha hai maine iss baar..

Dunia main dil torrne wale madadgar bahaut hai,
Raaz-e-insaan bolne wale razdaar bahaut hai…

Bahaut kam log hai jo wakei rishta nibhate hai,
Sach ko jhoot dikhane wale kalakar bahaut hai…

Koi dekta nahin sache dilon ko aj ki duniya main,
Qatil chehron ko apnane wale chitrakar bahaut hai…

Ae Khuda koi aisa shaks mujhe dikhla de jo karta hai sacha pyaar,
Yahan toh dil ko chakna chur karne wale gunhegaar bahaut hai…

Kaun chahta hai apnon ko aj ki iss duniya main ‘Khamosh’,
Yahan toh paison ke talabgar bahaut hai…

Aur mat rehna kisi par bhi nirbhar tum yahan ‘Khamosh’,
Yahan toh chehre badalne wale dhongi panhagar bahaut hai…


~Rahim~

Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2010, 01:29:11 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Rajesh jee..
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2010, 06:20:36 AM »
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bhut kam log hain jo waqaii rishat nibhaate hain
such ko jhoot dikhaane wale kalakaar bhut hain

kya baat hai Rahim sahab waah khoob kaha hai aapne, daad hazir qubool keejiye


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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2010, 12:38:19 PM »
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Daad kubool hai...Bahaut bahaut shukriya!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 11:02:05 AM »
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buht nice hai rahim bhai i like it mujh buht kuch sekhne ko mila very nice lkn agher appaskistan k bara mae likh day to acha ho ga  love4 icon_salut Applause love5
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2010, 11:04:46 AM »
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kui k mujh paskistan k halat k baray mai speech chahyae  :sad10:all the best Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2010, 12:08:47 PM »
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rahim bhai.. bahut sach he ..

ek doha padhta hu apna likha hua~

jhooth jhooth me jag rama sancha na dikhya koi,
"Abhi" baat jo sanchi kahe bairii bahutere hoye~
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