**Adhura bahaut hai** by Rahim

by dead heart on May 31, 2010, 01:49:16 PM
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Meri zindagi main maine kiye gunaah bahaut hai,
Tabhi khushian kam aur ghum mujhe mile bahaut hai…

Tanha raha iss qadar ke leekhna seekha diya zindagi ne,
Logon se nahin; kalam se mila mujhe sahara bahaut hai…

Dastaan-e-zindagi doobi hai ashkon ke saager main,
Mohobat toh nahin; mili mujhe bewaffai bahaut hai…

Toot kar chaha tha humne usse aur usne saath na diya,
Aj usse khone ka mujhe afsos bahaut hai…

Mera zakhmi dil bas yehi kehna chahta hai us’se,
Tujh bin Zalim ‘Khamosh’ adhura bahaut hai…



~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2010, 05:39:25 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dost ye andaaz aapka kuch alag hi laga aur bahaut pasand aaya humein...!!!

dard se bhari tumhari is gazal ke baare me kya kahun mere dost,
shabdon se kya taarif karun tumne likha khoobsurat bahaut hai....
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2010, 08:28:41 PM »
Shukriya Dost..hamesha saath dene ke liye teh dil se shukar guzar hoon!
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2010, 03:38:49 AM »
Fabulous ... Rahim Bro Kya gazab Likha hai... Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Umda ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 03:54:36 AM »
Wah bahut hi khoob Rahim bhai.hamesha ki tarah lajawab kavita pesh kiya aapne.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 04:51:55 AM »


    Bahut pyara likha hai Raheem ji aapne.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2010, 06:25:19 AM »
Bahot khoobsurat likha hai Abdul Rahim ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2010, 10:32:25 AM »
Shukriya Divya di, Madhu di, Tamanna jee, Riyaz jee...Teh dil se shukar guzar hoon!
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