*Humko Waise Hi Jee Lene Do*

by Roja on January 29, 2009, 02:24:10 AM
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Yeh humne pehle kisi Yo ke section pe Post ki jaisa lag raha hai.
Aaj mann kuch kehna chah raha hai...
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Aankhon mein ek pratna aur honton per ik yachana hai
Jaise bhi hum jee sakte hai waise hi jee lene toh do..
Nahi hum tumse pyar mangte koyi uphaar mangte,
Apni aankhon ke aansoo hi humko pee lene toh do..

Tum toh humko kuch na doge na tumse hum mangenge,
Hame pata hai apni seema, usko kabhi na landhenge.
Tumhare pass woh kuch hai nahi joh humko de paoge,
Per jo Ishwar ne diya hai humko haq se lene toh do..

Tum toh khud hi bhooke ho sada jo mange rahte ho,
Khane ko itna hai per fir bhi bhooke pet hi rehte ho.
Apna tumhara nahi yahan kuch, jo hai woh toh auron ka hai,
Is nisarg ke kosh se, zarurat ber humko bhi lene toh do..

Tum humko kuch de pao itne tum azaad nahi,
Apne swarth ko hara sako, itne bhi ustaad nahi.
Isliye band kar do ye MEETE BOLI KE SEVA, YEH SAB NATAK HAI SARE,
Hame AATMAGAURAV se Gam apna seh lene toh do..

Bhashan tumara bhi toh atyachar se kam nahi
Woh jo ek dikhawa hai, gam se koyi gam nahi hai
Kal tum Pioge apne hi pracharon ke abhimaan ka amrit
Ek sach humko aaj per yeh abhi keh lene toh do..

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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2009, 05:14:31 AM »
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Bahoth umda aur achi peshkash rooja bahen waise humne pahele ye nahi padi thi ajj pada acha laga aur is ghazal ke asal maqsad tak shayad koi pahonche ya na pahonche mai pahonch gaya !!

Aur eak Ashar apki nazar kartahon roja bahen jo sacha-e-pe mabni hai !! tawajo chahonga !!


Hawa tham jayegi , fiza zaherili ho jayegi !!
Agar doge apni begunahi ka saboth to saza lambi ho jayegi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2009, 06:50:15 AM »
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Bohat khoob Roja too good tumhare jazbato ko Ghayel salam karta hain aur unka poora aadar karta hain khuda tumhe har us uljhan se bachaye jisne tumhe yeh Mazboot aur behtareen kalam likhne pe majboor kiya AAMEEN.................. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2009, 10:06:02 AM »
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Bohat Hi Achchi Kavita Roja Didi,.
Har Bar Ki Tarah Yunhio Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2009, 03:39:13 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah roja ji wah bahut khoob, dil se daad kabool farmayen aap, bahut hi aache se likha hai aap ne.
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2009, 06:12:09 PM »
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Bohot hi Khoob likha hai Roja Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2009, 06:39:58 PM »
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Wonderfull work bohat khoob Roja dear.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2009, 07:13:25 PM »
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Bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne Roja Ji
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2009, 04:35:17 AM »
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Bahoth umda aur achi peshkash rooja bahen waise humne pahele ye nahi padi thi ajj pada acha laga aur is ghazal ke asal maqsad tak shayad koi pahonche ya na pahonche mai pahonch gaya !!

Aur eak Ashar apki nazar kartahon roja bahen jo sacha-e-pe mabni hai !! tawajo chahonga !!


Hawa tham jayegi , fiza zaherili ho jayegi !!
Agar doge apni begunahi ka saboth to saza lambi ho jayegi !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Bahut bahut shukriya Qadeer bhaiya.
Bas us din mere dil ka haal aisa kuch tha bas. Kuch aur matlab nahi tha...

Aapne sahi kaha, hawa tham jayegi.... hame intezar hai Hawa ka thamjane ki. sad7

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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2009, 04:37:10 AM »
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Bohat khoob Roja too good tumhare jazbato ko Ghayel salam karta hain aur unka poora aadar karta hain khuda tumhe har us uljhan se bachaye jisne tumhe yeh Mazboot aur behtareen kalam likhne pe majboor kiya AAMEEN.................. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sumaameen  sad7
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2009, 04:39:47 AM »
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Bohat Hi Achchi Kavita Roja Didi,.
Har Bar Ki Tarah Yunhio Likhte Rahiye,.

Bahut bahut shukhriya bhai.
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2009, 04:41:01 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah roja ji wah bahut khoob, dil se daad kabool farmayen aap, bahut hi aache se likha hai aap ne.

Thanks Baadal ji.
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2009, 04:41:58 AM »
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Bohot hi Khoob likha hai Roja Applause Applause

Shukriya Talat dear, aap b kuch likhti toh char chand lag jata... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2009, 04:42:49 AM »
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Thanks honey ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2009, 04:43:49 AM »
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Bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne Roja Ji
 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut shukhriya Rajesh Harish ji.
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