Taish- sehmi NANGI jo ye tasveer hai...!!

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Shayad pehli baar ek tanziya ghazal likhi hai, pata nahin kahaan tak safal raha huN...!!


sehmi nangi jo ye tasveer yahaaN,
ab yahi desh ki taqdeer yahaaN...

dost saare mere zakhmi ho gaye,
dushmanoN par jo chala teer yahaaN...

julm sehte hue jo uff na kareN,
log kehlaate vahi veer yahaaN...

Seedhe muNh baat kahaaN hoti hai ab,
hain jubaaN pe rakhe shamsheer yahaaN...

taish kyuN sunta kisi aur ki tu,
koi ghalib hai na hi meer yahaaN...
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2013, 03:31:27 AM »
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bahut khoob.. waah taish sahab!!.. are aap ho to gaalib bhi hai aur meer bhi hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2013, 03:37:52 AM »
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bahut khoob taish jee..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2013, 06:02:57 AM »
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 . . . Har barki tarah apne is bar bhi apni lajawab shyri pesh kii. Applause Applause Applause
     
 Aur yeh andaz bhi naya hai
. Hats off to you!
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2013, 06:17:20 AM »
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sehmi nangi jo ye tasveer yahaaN,
ab yahi desh ki taqdeer yahaaN...

dost saare mere zakhmi ho gaye,
dushmanoN par jo chala teer yahaaN...

julm sehte hue jo uff na kareN,
log kehlaate vahi veer yahaaN...

Seedhe muNh baat kahaaN hoti hai ab,
hain jubaaN pe rakhe shamsheer yahaaN...


Bahut khoob Taish jee

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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 06:22:11 AM »
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Shayad pehli baar ek tanziya ghazal likhi hai, pata nahin kahaan tak safal raha huN...!!


sehmi nangi jo ye tasveer yahaaN,
ab yahi desh ki taqdeer yahaaN...

dost saare mere zakhmi ho gaye,
dushmanoN par jo chala teer yahaaN...

julm sehte hue jo uff na kareN,
log kehlaate vahi veer yahaaN...

Seedhe muNh baat kahaaN hoti hai ab,
hain jubaaN pe rakhe shamsheer yahaaN...

taish kyuN sunta kisi aur ki tu,
koi ghalib hai na hi meer yahaaN...


khubsurat tanz hai taish ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2013, 07:01:53 AM »
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bahut khoob.. waah taish sahab!!.. are aap ho to gaalib bhi hai aur meer bhi hai

are atul saaheb vo shayar the hum log shauqiya hain, ab itna bhi jhaad pe na chadhaoo saahbe, waise jaan kar bahut khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, bas aage bhi yuNhi apna pyar hume dete raheN...!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2013, 07:50:57 AM »
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Lucky jee Aadaab!


Waaah janab wash kia kahne... bahut khoob air behad umda kalaam kahi hai......


Sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai.... Meri hazaaro dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye .... Shaad o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..

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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2013, 08:06:01 AM »
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bahut khoob taish jee..happy9

aapki tareef ke liye aapka shukraguzaar hun nashwani saaheb, bas yuNhi apna pyar aage bhi aap dete raheN...
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2013, 08:31:37 AM »
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. . . Har barki tarah apne is bar bhi apni lajawab shyri pesh kii. Applause Applause Applause
     
 Aur yeh andaz bhi naya hai
. Hats off to you!

arghaya ji is izzat afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut shukriya, umeed karta hun aapka saath aage v yuNhi bana rahegaa...!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2013, 09:00:48 AM »
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Shayad pehli baar ek tanziya ghazal likhi hai, pata nahin kahaan tak safal raha huN...!!


sehmi nangi jo ye tasveer yahaaN,
ab yahi desh ki taqdeer yahaaN...

dost saare mere zakhmi ho gaye,
dushmanoN par jo chala teer yahaaN...

julm sehte hue jo uff na kareN,
log kehlaate vahi veer yahaaN...

Seedhe muNh baat kahaaN hoti hai ab,
hain jubaaN pe rakhe shamsheer yahaaN...

taish kyuN sunta kisi aur ki tu,
koi ghalib hai na hi meer yahaaN...

Bahut Khoob Janab.
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2013, 09:10:38 AM »
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Shayad pehli baar ek tanziya ghazal likhi hai, pata nahin kahaan tak safal raha huN...!!


sehmi nangi jo ye tasveer yahaaN,
ab yahi desh ki taqdeer yahaaN...
 tearyeyed :tearyeyed:itna ghara sher taish main is ki respect karti hoon kya likho.n bhaut maani khez aur khubsoorat sher hai
dost saare mere zakhmi ho gaye,
dushmanoN par jo chala teer yahaaN...
bahut schchi baat hai aisa hi ho raha hai . khata kisi ki saza kisi ko bahut wazni sher hain ye wah wah wah icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
julm sehte hue jo uff na kareN,
log kehlaate vahi veer yahaaN...
lekin zulm karna aur sahna dono hi gunaah hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Seedhe muNh baat kahaaN hoti hai ab,
hain jubaaN pe rakhe shamsheer yahaaN...
yahi to ladaai jhagde ki wajah bani hui hai. sabko apni ana se badh kar kuch nazar nahin aataa. ghar baahar jidhar dekho her chhote bade kaam pe issue icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
taish kyuN sunta kisi aur ki tu,
koi ghalib hai na hi meer yahaaN...


main to hoo.n na meri suna karo ji
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wah wah wah.........!
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2013, 03:15:45 PM »
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waah waah bahut umdaa
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2013, 04:46:16 PM »
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Shayad pehli baar ek tanziya ghazal likhi hai, pata nahin kahaan tak safal raha huN...!!


sehmi nangi jo ye tasveer yahaaN,
ab yahi desh ki taqdeer yahaaN...

dost saare mere zakhmi ho gaye,
dushmanoN par jo chala teer yahaaN...

julm sehte hue jo uff na kareN,
log kehlaate vahi veer yahaaN...

Seedhe muNh baat kahaaN hoti hai ab,
hain jubaaN pe rakhe shamsheer yahaaN...

taish kyuN sunta kisi aur ki tu,
koi ghalib hai na hi meer yahaaN...


              Taish Saheb,
                               bahut umda ghazal kahi hai, waaaaaaaah
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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2013, 08:11:33 PM »
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sehmi nangi jo ye tasveer yahaaN,
ab yahi desh ki taqdeer yahaaN...

dost saare mere zakhmi ho gaye,
dushmanoN par jo chala teer yahaaN...

julm sehte hue jo uff na kareN,
log kehlaate vahi veer yahaaN...

Seedhe muNh baat kahaaN hoti hai ab,
hain jubaaN pe rakhe shamsheer yahaaN...


Bahut khoob Taish jee



mukesh sir bahut bahut shukriya pasand karne ka, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...
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