Tu Taish Ya Khuda Ki Hai....!!

by ghayal_shayar on December 26, 2012, 07:34:58 PM
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Ae dil bata tu aaj jo, itna udaash hai,
Vo shaqs kaun hai, ke yuNhi aas-paas hai.

AankhoN me minnateN huiN, hothoN pe pyaas hai,
Pehna ye aaj tumne kyun mera libaas hai.

Karta yahaaN jo ishq hai, uski to haar hai,
Main hooN ki koi aur hai jo bad hawaas hai.

Ab intezaar ki ho chuki intehaaN, suno,
Waqt-e-visaal* ta'e jo hua dus pachaas hai.

*dekhne ka waqt, time for meeting

Khousboo gulaab ki to nasha hai sharaab sa,
Tu 'taish' ya khuda ki hai, kiski kayaas* hai.

*kalpana, Imagination.
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2012, 07:44:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Taish ji....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2012, 08:31:42 PM »
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nice,sir
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2012, 08:33:20 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2012, 10:00:57 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2012, 11:29:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob Taish jee
umda peshkash..

khoob nibhaaya hai aapne..
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2012, 12:35:16 AM »
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Lucky Jee Aadab!


Khushi huyi janab yeH jaankar ke aap bher meiN likhane ki achchi
practice kar rahe haiN... Humne toH jaise hi sdc chhodi waise hi
bher aur kafiye se jaise rishta tod diyaa tha...

Zidd Sahaab ne jitna sikhaya tha use hi yaad karke aage ke kadam rakhte rahe...

Aapki last bher baNd kalaam behad khoob rahi thi..
Chaliye is kalaam par nazar dalte haiN... Usual Smile






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Ae dil bata tu aaj jo, itna udaash hai,
Vo shaqs kaun hai, ke yuNhi aas-paas hai.

Behad achcha matla raha janab daad... Usual Smile

AankhoN me minnateN huiN, hothoN pe pyaas hai,
Pehna ye aaj tumne kyun mera libaas hai.

bahut khoob janab achcha sher hai ... aur khoob khayaal raha..
haaN "kyuN" lafz ko aapne 1 meiN baNdha hai waise jayaz hai ke nahi hume nahi
pata par humne bhi baNdha thha jo ki adaa ho raha tha.. aapke is sher meiN
bhi hume adaa hota nazar aa raha hai...


Karta yahaaN jo ishq hai, uski to haar hai,
Main hooN ki koi aur hai jo bad hawaas hai.

behad khoob sher hai janab .. par bher se kharij hai..
Koi surat toH zaheN meiN nahi ban rahi hai par.. aapne hai lafz ko bhi
aik 1 meiN baNdha hai jo shayad hi munaseeb hai...


Ab intezaar ki ho chuki intehaaN, suno,
Waqt-e-visaal* ta'e jo hua dus pachaas hai.

hahahaahah achcha sher hai janab daad... dus pachaas bahut khoob
kafiya baNdha hai daad...


*dekhne ka waqt, time for meeting

Khousboo gulaab ki to nasha hai sharaab sa,
Tu 'taish' ya khuda ki hai, kiski kayaas* hai.

Janab ulaa misra behad khoob raha par sani meiN aap bher se
phir chuk gaye.. zarra gaur kar lijiye... aur sher behad khoob raha daad... Usual Smile

*kalpana, Imagination.
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Taish sahaab is umda kalaam par huamri hazaaroN daad O mubbarak
bad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2012, 01:22:15 AM »
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Ae dil bata tu aaj jo, itna udaash hai,
Vo shaqs kaun hai, ke yuNhi aas-paas hai.

AankhoN me minnateN huiN, hothoN pe pyaas hai,
Pehna ye aaj tumne kyun mera libaas hai.

Karta yahaaN jo ishq hai, uski to haar hai,
Main hooN ki koi aur hai jo bad hawaas hai.

Ab intezaar ki ho chuki intehaaN, suno,
Waqt-e-visaal* ta'e jo hua dus pachaas hai.

*dekhne ka waqt, time for meeting

Khousboo gulaab ki to nasha hai sharaab sa,
Tu 'taish' ya khuda ki hai, kiski kayaas* hai.

*kalpana, Imagination.
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BAHUT KHOOB KALAAM KAHA HAI AAPNE  ....BAHUT  C  DAAD
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 06:16:19 AM »
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boht khub taish ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 07:45:16 AM »
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bohut khoob taish jee daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 11:02:05 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 11:49:45 AM »
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Nice...
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 01:15:49 PM »
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Bahut Badiya sir...
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2012, 08:43:44 PM »
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waah waah, bahut hi khoobsurat, bahut hi acchi ghazal, wah
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2012, 01:58:47 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Taish ji....!!!


hriday saahab bahut bahut shukriya, is hausla afzaayi ke liye... umeed karta huN aage v aapka saath milta rahegaa...
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