Taish- aaya huN LIKH KAR ye teri aankheN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on February 02, 2013, 09:36:26 AM
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Ek adni aur atpati si peshkash, bazm ke nazar kar raha huN, umeed karta hun jyada niraash nahi kiya hoga, khaamiyon ke liye maafi ka talabgaar huN...

Beh'r- 221 1222// 221 1222




mujhse jo kabhi milti.n, khulkar ye teri aankheN.
main bhi to hota paagal, choo kar ye teri aaNkheN..

jab bhi kisi ne poocha hai mujhse pata mera,
har baar maiN aaya huN likh kar ye teri aaNkheN.

kuch bhi na dekha usne, jisne na dekha tujhko,
maine do jahaaN paya padhkar ye teri aankheN.

karti hai kyuN mujhko tu door adawat se,
apna jo banaati hain ladkar ye teri aaNkheN.

poocha jo kyuN qiblaa chod kar vo idhar aaye,
is shahr men aate sab sunkar ye teri aaNkheN.

hai roshani bin suraj, har koi nabeena* hai,
maiN bhool gaya hooN jo rakh kar ye teri aaNkheN.

*Andha, Blind.

mai'n 'taish' me'n hu'n lekin khud mei'n na samajh mujh ko
ab mujhse yuN kehti khud aa kar ye teri aaNkheN.
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Rahul raj gupta
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2013, 09:57:35 AM »
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Nice...
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2013, 10:03:46 AM »
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nice very nice
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2013, 10:17:21 AM »
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Taish jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne. bahut bahut daad
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Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2013, 10:30:48 AM »
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Bohat Khub!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2013, 10:51:24 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut mubarak ho taaish jee. bahut khoob likha hai aapne.superb composition
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2013, 11:28:49 AM »
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Bahot khoob Taish ji. Achhi koshish ki hai. Lekin kuchh misre behr mein nahi hain. Phir se koshish karein. Aap behr mein likhne ki koshish karte hain ye qabil-e-tareef hai. Ghazal ke liye ye lazim hai.



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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2013, 12:16:49 PM »
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bahut khub taish ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2013, 12:30:45 PM »
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Nice!

Achi Koshish hai.
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2013, 12:49:37 PM »
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Bahut khoob,Taish ji.Achhi koshish hai.Kuchh misre jo bahr mein nahin hain,meter ko madd e nazar rakhte hue ek baar phir se dekh lijye , khud sahi kar leinge.bahut mubarakbad.
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2013, 01:52:33 PM »
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 tearyeyed...it was really beautiful
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2013, 03:37:56 PM »
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Aapke jazbe ko salaam karna chahunga..
khoob likha aapne..
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2013, 07:18:40 PM »
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Lucky Jee Aadaab!


Kidhar hai janab aajkal bade kam nazar aa rahe haiN.. ?
sab thik thak toH haiN naa.. ?

Aur yeH kiski aaNkheN hai janab jo itni khoob nazm ka
unwaan ban gayi... Winking

Bhair bher ke baare meiN toH ustaad shoharaaoN ne bataa hi
diyaa... Aur waise bhi maiN kabhi bher ke liye nahi ulajhta.. tongue3

achchi nazm rahi janab.. bade pyaare aur khoob khayaal rahe..
Meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile               
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2013, 07:15:08 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2013, 07:22:01 PM »
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Nice...

rahul saahab pehli baar mukhatib huN aapse, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aaapko koshish pasand aayi, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapka saath yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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