Taish- aaine ko haiN chale AANKHEN dikhaane aap bhi...!!

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Regular style se thoda hat kar hai ye, umeed hai aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahi karunga...


Khwaab ulfat ke lage ho phir dikhaane aap bhi,
Kya amaaN ab chodiye ye sab bahaane aap bhi...

man rahi hai terwiN jo is dil-e-naadaan ki,
HaiN yahaaN kis haq se aaye sir mudaane aap bhi...

hum to sachhe log haiN yun jhooth boleNge nahiN,
aaiye jhoothi jubaaN apni kataane aap bhi...

kyuN mohabbat meN yuN tadpaate ho mujhko is kadar,
aaine ko haiN chale aaNkheN dikhaane aap bhi...

tha azal** ko khauf mere ishq-e-saadiq* ka bahut,
jaan kya leta vo par aaye le jaane aap bhi...

**Maut,  *sachha pyar

jaise main muflis* ke daaman ka fataa paiband** huN,
cheel kauwoN saath hain joothan khilaane aap bhi...

*gareeb,  **tukda...

yaad teri aaj fir hai aa ke sirhaane lagi,
ke chalo aaye yahaaN humko jagaane aap bhi...

'taish' likh de nazm ya koi ghazal pursoz gar,
to samajh lena lage fir yaad aane aap bhi...
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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2013, 08:13:06 AM »
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jaise main muflis* ke daaman ka fataa paiband** huN,
cheel kauwoN saath hain joothan khilaane aap bhi...

Waah  Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2013, 08:16:46 AM »
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Regular style se thoda hat kar hai ye, umeed hai aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahi karunga...


Khwaab ulfat ke lage ho phir dikhaane aap bhi,
Kya amaaN ab chodiye ye sab bahaane aap bhi...

man rahi hai terwiN jo is dil-e-naadaan ki,
HaiN yahaaN kis haq se aaye sir mudaane aap bhi...

hum to sachhe log haiN yun jhooth boleNge nahiN,
aaiye jhoothi jubaaN apni kataane aap bhi...

kyuN mohabbat meN yuN tadpaate ho mujhko is kadar,
aaine ko haiN chale aaNkheN dikhaane aap bhi...

tha azal** ko khauf mere ishq-e-saadiq* ka bahut,
jaan kya leta vo par aaye le jaane aap bhi...

**Maut,  *sachha pyar

jaise main muflis* ke daaman ka fataa paiband** huN,
cheel kauwoN saath hain joothan khilaane aap bhi...

*gareeb,  **tukda...

yaad teri aaj fir hai aa ke sirhaane lagi,
ke chalo aaye yahaaN humko jagaane aap bhi...

'taish' likh de nazm ya koi ghazal pursoz gar,
to samajh lena lage fir yaad aane aap bhi...

बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने,वाह-वाह
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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2013, 08:29:49 AM »
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Waah  Applause Applause

ram i ghazal pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!! yuNhi aage bhi saath dete rahiye...
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2013, 09:00:56 AM »
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बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने,वाह-वाह

ravinder saaheb tareef ka shukriya, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2013, 09:07:41 AM »
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Bahut umda taish jee..badi hi achhi peshkash hai..daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2013, 10:08:36 AM »
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Khwaab ulfat ke lage ho phir dikhaane aap bhi,
Kya amaaN ab chodiye ye sab bahaane aap bhi...

kyuN mohabbat meN yuN tadpaate ho mujhko is kadar,
aaine ko haiN chale aaNkheN dikhaane aap bhi...

yaad teri aaj fir hai aa ke sirhaane lagi,
ke chalo aaye yahaaN humko jagaane aap bhi...

'taish' likh de nazm ya koi ghazal pursoz gar,
to samajh lena lage fir yaad aane aap bhi...


Bahut Khub Saheb Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...


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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2013, 05:13:37 PM »
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Khwaab ulfat ke lage ho phir dikhaane aap bhi,
Kya amaaN ab chodiye ye sab bahaane aap bhi...
taish' likh de nazm ya koi ghazal pursoz gar,
to samajh lena lage fir yaad aane aap bhi...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Taish ji,
Matla aur maqta bhut lazawaab hai.
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2013, 05:16:19 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Bohat Khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2013, 08:37:46 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaaaaah taishji. bahut bahut bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad

Khwaab ulfat ke lage ho phir dikhaane aap bhi,
Kya amaaN ab chodiye ye sab bahaane aap bhi..

kyuN mohabbat meN yuN tadpaate ho mujhko is kadar,
aaine ko haiN chale aaNkheN dikhaane aap bhi...

yaad teri aaj fir hai aa ke sirhaane lagi,
ke chalo aaye yahaaN humko jagaane aap bhi...

yeh ashaar bahut hi khoob hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2013, 09:45:48 PM »
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Bahut umda taish jee..badi hi achhi peshkash hai..daad..happy9

nashwani ji, tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab, bas aap aage bhi yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2013, 09:52:26 PM »
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bahut bahut umada... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2013, 10:12:58 PM »
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Bahut Khub Saheb Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...


Shihab

aapki saraahna dekh kar behad khushi mili saaheb, umeed karta hun ki aapka ye saath aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2013, 10:55:03 PM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab.... !


Bahut khoob janab badi achchi aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai... ab lag raha hai ke kuch soNch samjhkar sher adaa kiye haiN aapne..

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab, par in quoted ashaaroN meiN kuch baat hai behad umdaa aur behad gehre khayaal nazar aaye inmeiN ...

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Regular style se thoda hat kar hai ye, umeed hai aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahi karunga...

hum to sachhe log haiN yun jhooth boleNge nahiN,
aaiye jhoothi jubaaN apni kataane aap bhi...

kyuN mohabbat meN yuN tadpaate ho mujhko is kadar,
aaine ko haiN chale aaNkheN dikhaane aap bhi...

'taish' likh de nazm ya koi ghazal pursoz gar,
to samajh lena lage fir yaad aane aap bhi...

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«Reply #14 on: July 06, 2013, 06:21:00 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut hi khoob Bhushan jee, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye.
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