Jalwe apne Parwaaz key abhi to dikhaane haiN

by ParwaaZ on August 15, 2010, 09:56:11 PM
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Kis liye log teri mehfil key itne diwaane haiN
Shamma jal rahi hai tab tak ye parwaane haiN

Apne bahar-e anjuman pe aap na itraiye
Ye mousami gul hai ye to aane jaane haiN

Koi baat nayi sunaye mazi-e haal se parey
choriye ab to woh jo kissey puraane haiN

Aap kariye jo sitam karna hai hum bhi dekhe
Hume bhi apne abhi sabra azmaane haiN

Kaat ke dekho par mere mai bebas nahi hu
Jalwe apni Parwaaz key abhi to dikhaane haiN
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 10:20:35 PM »
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zabardast likha hai aapne parwaz ji........

sply these lines

Kaat ke dekho par mere mai bebas nahi hu
Jalwe apne Parwaaz key abhi to dikhaane haiN
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 12:16:49 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Parwaaz ji... bahut hi umda...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 01:06:12 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

zabardast likha hai aapne parwaz ji........

sply these lines

Kaat ke dekho par mere mai bebas nahi hu
Jalwe apne Parwaaz key abhi to dikhaane haiN

Aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa Kasak Jee........

kalam ki pasandidgi aur khususi sher ki daad ke liye tahe dil se mamnoon huN...... Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2010, 08:35:01 AM »
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Kis liye log teri mehfil key itne diwaane haiN
Shamma jal rahi hai tab tak ye parwaane haiN

Apne bahar-e anjuman pe aap na itraiye
Ye mousami gul hai ye to aane jaane haiN

Koi baat nayi sunaye mazi-e haal se parey
choriye ab to woh jo kissey puraane haiN

Aap kariye jo sitam karna hai hum bhi dekhe
Hume bhi apne abhi sabar azmaane haiN

Kaat ke dekho par mere mai bebas nahi hu
Jalwe apne Parwaaz key abhi to dikhaane haiN


Very very Impressive .....Parwaaz Sahab ! Awesome ! very nice creation.....dil se daad hazir hai... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 12:46:26 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Parwaaz ji... bahut hi umda...!!!

Klaskar jee aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa ....... humare kalaam ko sarahne ka......

Aage bhi apa saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez......
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 02:53:08 PM »
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Kis liye log teri mehfil key itne diwaane haiN
Shamma jal rahi hai tab tak ye parwaane haiN

Apne bahar-e anjuman pe aap na itraiye
Ye mousami gul hai ye to aane jaane haiN

Koi baat nayi sunaye mazi-e haal se parey
choriye ab to woh jo kissey puraane haiN

Aap kariye jo sitam karna hai hum bhi dekhe
Hume bhi apne abhi sabar azmaane haiN

Kaat ke dekho par mere mai bebas nahi hu
Jalwe apne Parwaaz key abhi to dikhaane haiN



BAHUT KHOOB PARWAAZ SB AAPNE KAHAA
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 07:05:42 AM »
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Bahut hi umdaa khayal pesh kiye hai ... Parwaaz Sahab ! Very Nice Creation... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 04:36:13 PM »
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Aik achchhi tehreer se nawaaza ParwaaZ Saheb aapne. Is khoobsurat tehreer k liye hazaaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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Kis liye log teri mehfil key itne diwaane haiN
Shamma jal rahi hai tab tak ye parwaane haiN

Apne bahar-e anjuman pe aap na itraiye
Ye mousami gul hai ye to aane jaane haiN

Koi baat nayi sunaye mazi-e haal se parey
choriye ab to woh jo kissey puraane haiN

Aap kariye jo sitam karna hai hum bhi dekhe
Hume bhi apne abhi sabar azmaane haiN

Kaat ke dekho par mere mai bebas nahi hu
Jalwe apne Parwaaz key abhi to dikhaane haiN

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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 04:41:42 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Parwaaz Ji..

Zabardast Peshkash!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 04:44:38 PM »
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Wah wah ParawaZ sahab bahot purkashish aur murassa takhleeq hai ye aapki. Daad qubool farmayen.
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 05:02:28 PM »
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waaah ....tarreef kam he so shabda hi kuchh keh payege~

pesh he~

kuchh yun kaha baharon ne mujhse samet lo hame apni bahon me,
mene kaha he ye majboori meri ki bahon me sametne ko "Abhi" manzile bahut he rahon me~
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2010, 03:02:48 AM »
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Very very Impressive .....Parwaaz Sahab ! Awesome ! very nice creation.....dil se daad hazir hai... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...

Naresh Jee saath dene aur tariff ka bahut bahut shukriyaa...
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....

Khush rahiye.....

Khuda hafez......
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2010, 02:18:26 AM »
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Waquif Sahab aadaab !

Aapko apni kalaam per dekhkar dili masarrat huyi janab..... Aapki aamad hi humare liye bahut badi daad hai janab.....

Aapki daad sir ankhoN per....

Aage bhi hounsla afzai karte rahiye...
Ummid raheNgi ke aap apni araa se nawazeNge...

Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         



Aik achchhi tehreer se nawaaza ParwaaZ Saheb aapne. Is khoobsurat tehreer k liye hazaaroN daad qubul kijiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2010, 02:27:31 AM »
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parvaz sahab aadab ,,

apki pur-acar takhleeq ki nazar hai meri nachiz si dad .. ..allah apko khush rakhe ..

Maqte me Apne ko Apni se badal dijiye..


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