Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN... ParwaaZ

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Ahel e mehfil ko Aadaab O Salaam..


Waqt ki kami ki wajaah se bade dinoN se kalam khamosh hai.. na khayaal
bante hai naa kalam chalti hai.. so aik be bher tehreer aap sab ki nazar
ummid hai pasaNd aayeNgi... Usual Smile









Shiddat se tha intezaar ke hum ru-ba-ru aaye
Hua yuN samnaa na pucho kaise ku-ba-ku aaye

Aik muddat se bichde the jo ab kahiN aa ke mile
Naa hum hu ba hu rahe naa woH hu-ba-hu aaye

The lab khamosh nighoN meiN the pashemaan hum
Naa harf e lab kaha usne naa hume guf-ta-gu aaye

Chalnaa pada hai aaj hume apnoN ko chhodkar
Moulaa rah e zindagi meiN mod aise bhi kyu aaye

Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN koyiN kotahi naa ho
Aye khudaa mere imaan e dil meiN itni justaju aaye

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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 07:25:23 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Parwaaz ji... kyaa kehne ... waah ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 03:24:42 AM »
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Ahel e mehfil ko Aadaab O Salaam..


Waqt ki kami ki wajaah se bade dinoN se kalam khamosh hai.. na khayaal
bante hai naa kalam chalti hai.. so aik be bher tehreer aap sab ki nazar
ummid hai pasaNd aayeNgi... Usual Smile









Shiddat se tha intezaar ke hum ru-ba-ru aaye
Hua yuN samnaa na pucho kaise ku-ba-ku aaye

Aik muddat se bichde the jo ab kahiN aa ke mile
Naa hum hu ba hu rahe naa woH hu-ba-hu aaye

The lab khamosh nighoN meiN the pashemaan hum
Naa harf e lab kaha usne naa hume guf-ta-gu aaye

Chalnaa pada hai aaj hume apnoN ko chhodkar
Moulaa rah e zindagi meiN mod aise bhi kyu aaye

Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN koyiN kotahi naa ho
Aye khudaa mere imaan e dil meiN itni justaju aaye


parwaz bhai aadab,

wah bohut khoob ghazal kahi hai, sabhi ashaar khoob rahe ,
behr se zyada qqemti wo ahsas O jazbaat haiN jo aapne is kalaam men piroye HaiN bohut bohut daaaaad quboool kareN
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 04:03:57 AM »
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bahut khoob parwaaz bhaai dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2013, 04:36:41 AM »
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Aadaab parwaaz sb, bahut hi umda kalaam hai!....aur jab be behr ke aise ehsaas-o-jazbaat bahe aur sab ke sab uske rau me bahte chale gae to phir behr ke saath bhala kya hona hai..main soch ke hairaan hooN!.....meri jaanib se dheroN daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye !!  
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2013, 05:24:51 AM »
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Der aayad par KHOOB aayad.Farsi muhawra ki yeh badli shakl aap ke liye . Aane mein der karte hain lekin aakar khoob kamaal karte hain .Bahut achha kalaam, achhe jazbaat  ki akkasi ki hai. Ghair maroof alfaaz ko qafiyon mein khoob istemaal kiya hai. Dheron daad.
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2013, 06:38:58 AM »
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Ahel e mehfil ko Aadaab O Salaam..


Waqt ki kami ki wajaah se bade dinoN se kalam khamosh hai.. na khayaal
bante hai naa kalam chalti hai.. so aik be bher tehreer aap sab ki nazar
ummid hai pasaNd aayeNgi... Usual Smile









Shiddat se tha intezaar ke hum ru-ba-ru aaye
Hua yuN samnaa na pucho kaise ku-ba-ku aaye

Aik muddat se bichde the jo ab kahiN aa ke mile
Naa hum hu ba hu rahe naa woH hu-ba-hu aaye

The lab khamosh nighoN meiN the pashemaan hum
Naa harf e lab kaha usne naa hume guf-ta-gu aaye

Chalnaa pada hai aaj hume apnoN ko chhodkar
Moulaa rah e zindagi meiN mod aise bhi kyu aaye

Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN koyiN kotahi naa ho
Aye khudaa mere imaan e dil meiN itni justaju aaye


lajawaab parwaaz sahab,
sabhi ashaar khoob rahe,,jo mujhe kehna tha wo shara ji ne pehle hi keh diya...zabardast raha. ApplauseApplause
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khush o abaad rahiye,,,bas aate rahiye..
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2013, 10:46:00 AM »
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Ahel e mehfil ko Aadaab O Salaam..


Waqt ki kami ki wajaah se bade dinoN se kalam khamosh hai.. na khayaal
bante hai naa kalam chalti hai.. so aik be bher tehreer aap sab ki nazar
ummid hai pasaNd aayeNgi... Usual Smile









Shiddat se tha intezaar ke hum ru-ba-ru aaye
Hua yuN samnaa na pucho kaise ku-ba-ku aaye

Aik muddat se bichde the jo ab kahiN aa ke mile
Naa hum hu ba hu rahe naa woH hu-ba-hu aaye

The lab khamosh nighoN meiN the pashemaan hum
Naa harf e lab kaha usne naa hume guf-ta-gu aaye

Chalnaa pada hai aaj hume apnoN ko chhodkar
Moulaa rah e zindagi meiN mod aise bhi kyu aaye

Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN koyiN kotahi naa ho
Aye khudaa mere imaan e dil meiN itni justaju aaye


waah parwaz ji bohat achi ghzal se rubaru karaya aap ne ,.......
bohat c daad ,............
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2013, 11:35:31 AM »
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Waah! Parwaaz jee badi pyaari kalaam rahi aapki. padhkar bahut khushi haasil hui.Aise hi likhte rahiye. Dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2013, 11:57:24 AM »
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Ahel e mehfil ko Aadaab O Salaam..

Waqt ki kami ki wajaah se bade dinoN se kalam khamosh hai.. na khayaal
bante hai naa kalam chalti hai.. so aik be bher tehreer aap sab ki nazar
ummid hai pasaNd aayeNgi... Usual Smile




Shiddat se tha intezaar ke hum ru-ba-ru aaye
Hua yuN samnaa na pucho kaise ku-ba-ku aaye

Aik muddat se bichde the jo ab kahiN aa ke mile
Naa hum hu ba hu rahe naa woH hu-ba-hu aaye

The lab khamosh nighoN meiN the pashemaan hum
Naa harf e lab kaha usne naa hume guf-ta-gu aaye

Chalnaa pada hai aaj hume apnoN ko chhodkar
Moulaa rah e zindagi meiN mod aise bhi kyu aaye

Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN koyiN kotahi naa ho
Aye khudaa mere imaan e dil meiN itni justaju aaye


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excellant  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2013, 12:14:36 PM »
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Ahel e mehfil ko Aadaab O Salaam..


Waqt ki kami ki wajaah se bade dinoN se kalam khamosh hai.. na khayaal
bante hai naa kalam chalti hai.. so aik be bher tehreer aap sab ki nazar
ummid hai pasaNd aayeNgi... Usual Smile









Shiddat se tha intezaar ke hum ru-ba-ru aaye
Hua yuN samnaa na pucho kaise ku-ba-ku aaye

Aik muddat se bichde the jo ab kahiN aa ke mile
Naa hum hu ba hu rahe naa woH hu-ba-hu aaye

The lab khamosh nighoN meiN the pashemaan hum
Naa harf e lab kaha usne naa hume guf-ta-gu aaye

Chalnaa pada hai aaj hume apnoN ko chhodkar
Moulaa rah e zindagi meiN mod aise bhi kyu aaye

Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN koyiN kotahi naa ho
Aye khudaa mere imaan e dil meiN itni justaju aaye




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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2013, 01:12:11 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2013, 03:41:15 PM »
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Ahel e mehfil ko Aadaab O Salaam..


Waqt ki kami ki wajaah se bade dinoN se kalam khamosh hai.. na khayaal
bante hai naa kalam chalti hai.. so aik be bher tehreer aap sab ki nazar
ummid hai pasaNd aayeNgi... Usual Smile









Shiddat se tha intezaar ke hum ru-ba-ru aaye
Hua yuN samnaa na pucho kaise ku-ba-ku aaye

Aik muddat se bichde the jo ab kahiN aa ke mile
Naa hum hu ba hu rahe naa woH hu-ba-hu aaye

The lab khamosh nighoN meiN the pashemaan hum
Naa harf e lab kaha usne naa hume guf-ta-gu aaye

Chalnaa pada hai aaj hume apnoN ko chhodkar
Moulaa rah e zindagi meiN mod aise bhi kyu aaye

Teri Parwaaz e ibaadat meiN koyiN kotahi naa ho
Aye khudaa mere imaan e dil meiN itni justaju aaye


God bless you.nice post
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2013, 11:28:40 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Parwaaz ji... kyaa kehne ... waah ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!



Kapil Jee Aadaab!


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Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaa rahiye...

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