Taish- hatheli pe LIKH KAR teri do aaNkheN...!!

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Bahut waqt baad is forum meN kuch post karne himakat kar raha huN, laga ki ehsaash kuch mohabbat waale hain to is taraf ka rukh kar liya...



Dushman kabhi ho jaatiN dilbar teri do aankheN,
Pal pal meN badal detiN manzar teri do aankheN...

Moorat bana kar poojiN patthar teri do aaNkheN,
Chadhti jo majaaroN pe chaadar teri do aaNkheN...

PalkeN bicha raahon meN tum raah na dekho meri,
PaaoN meN bahut chubhtiN kaNkar teri do aankhen...

Sab roshani duniya ki ab hai meri mutthi meN,
Aaya hooN hatheli pe likh kar teri do aaNkheN...

Is darza kareeb aa kar kyuN door hue dono,
Ro kar meri do aaNkheN, haNs kar teri do aaNkheN...

MaiN ghoom ke aaya hooN ulfat ki sabhi raaheN,
Hai dard-e-mohabbat ka daftar teri do aaNkheN...

Ab saaqi bhi thak jaata hai mujhko pilaane meN,
Khud ko bhula deta tha pee kar teri do aaNkhen...
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2014, 08:16:10 AM »
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uuuuuffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff maar daala taish ji aapki inn do aankhon ne..... kya khumaar ka rang chadhaya hai k meri aankhein bhi rangeen ho gain padhkar.... bemisaaalllllllllllll gazal likhi hai aapne ...... love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut waqt baad is forum meN kuch post karne himakat kar raha huN, laga ki ehsaash kuch mohabbat waale hain to is taraf ka rukh kar liya...



Dushman kabhi ho jaatiN dilbar teri do aankheN,
Pal pal meN badal detiN manzar teri do aankheN...

haaayeee un aankhon ki kya baat jo har manzar khubsurat kar de...
waaahhhhhhh khuuubbb sher  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Moorat bana kar poojiN patthar teri do aaNkheN,
Chadhti jo majaaroN pe chaadar teri do aaNkheN...

sufiana andaaz nazar aaya aapke iss sher me taish ji...
 behad sukun sa hai is sher me... speechlesss   notworthy notworthy

PalkeN bicha raahon meN tum raah na dekho meri,
PaaoN meN bahut chubhtiN kaNkar teri do aankhen...

ye dil ke bht kareeb raha sher ...
 kankar si chubhti aankhein... uufffffffffff
 icon_thumleft icon_thumleft icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Sab roshani duniya ki ab hai meri mutthi meN,
Aaya hooN hatheli pe likh kar teri do aaNkheN...

jin hathon ki lakeer hain ye aankhein
bada hi kismat ka dhani hai wo to..
 hello2 hello2 hello2
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Is darza kareeb aa kar kyuN door hue dono,
Ro kar meri do aaNkheN, haNs kar teri do aaNkheN...

just mind blowinggg........
roti hasti aankhein bht pyar se aapne dono k halat dikha diye ...
 khubsurat  love4 love4 love4


MaiN ghoom ke aaya hooN ulfat ki sabhi raaheN,
Hai dard-e-mohabbat ka daftar teri do aaNkheN...


waahhhhh daftar teri o aankhein...
ghum fir k ek hi jgh hai jahan sukun bhi hai aur bekarari bhui..
 Winking Winking Winking


Ab saaqi bhi thak jaata hai mujhko pilaane meN,
Khud ko bhula deta tha pee kar teri do aaNkhen...

aisi aankhein padh lene ke baad
kisi aur ka nasha kaise ho sakta hai taish ji........
 love4 love4 love4 love4


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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2014, 08:38:18 AM »
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Haaye Do aankho ne kya gazab kiya hai, jo itni kash m kas se bhari ghazal likh di aapne...
Its too beautiful...
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2014, 12:09:00 PM »
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Wah Wah Dheron Daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2014, 01:51:32 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2014, 08:21:46 PM »
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uuuuuffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff maar daala taish ji aapki inn do aankhon ne..... kya khumaar ka rang chadhaya hai k meri aankhein bhi rangeen ho gain padhkar.... bemisaaalllllllllllll gazal likhi hai aapne ...... love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



kasak ji aapje lehje me to main shukriya bhi adaa na kar paauN... :p waise tah-e-dil se aapka shukraguzaar huN ki aapne is kosish ko pasand kiya... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2014, 08:36:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohut hi umda peshkash bhai jaan
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2014, 12:14:07 AM »
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Haaye Do aankho ne kya gazab kiya hai, jo itni kash m kas se bhari ghazal likh di aapne...
Its too beautiful...

Bhupinder ji aapki daad aur tareef humare sar aaNkhoN pe, bas dua yahi rahegi ki aapka saath hume aage bhi humesha yuNhi milta rahe...!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2014, 12:33:58 AM »
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Sab roshani duniya ki ab hai meri mutthi meN,
Aaya hooN hatheli pe likh kar teri do aaNkheN...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley incredibal writing sir RAU is due
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2014, 02:16:35 AM »
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Wah Wah Dheron Daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Surindar.N  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

surindarn saaheb bahut bahut shukriya janaab hausla afzaayi ke liye, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2014, 03:04:10 AM »
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Aadab Taish Sahib ,,

Apki ghazal parhi mashallah romaniyat se labrez khumaar alod ghazal hai jiske ik ik sher ko parh raqs aata hai zindabad ..us pe aapne radeef aisi talashi hai ke bus dil uchal ke halaq me aa giya wah wah hazaron dad..Aapki ghazal parhne ka faida ye hua ke misron ke amad hone lagi so ap hi ke nazr ye filbadeeh misre..


Do dhari chamakta sa khanjar teri do ankhen
Deti hain saleeqe se nashtar teri do ankhen

Mai doob ke mar jaaun gar teri ijazat ho
Ik neela samandar hain dilbaar teri do ankhen

Sailaab ye ankhon ka ankhon me daba rakhna
Duniya ko baha dengi bah kar teri do ankhen


Dua go

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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2014, 09:39:35 AM »
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waah waah

 saini sire daad ka shukriya...
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2014, 05:21:58 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohut hi umda peshkash bhai jaan

jeet saaheb shukriya....
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2014, 01:16:48 AM »
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Sab roshani duniya ki ab hai meri mutthi meN,
Aaya hooN hatheli pe likh kar teri do aaNkheN...
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premdeep ji bahut bahut shukriya ye izzat bakhsne ke liye...
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«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2014, 07:31:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kya tareef karoon main aapke ghazal ki taish ji...Sach kahoon toh alfaaz nahin mil rahe...behaddddddddddddd khoobsurat aur dil ko cheer kar rakh dene waali ghazal hai...Ise maine copy paste karke rakh diya hai.. is umda peshkash par hazaron dili daad qubool kariye..
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