Taish- SHARABI huN maiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on December 13, 2012, 03:35:26 AM
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Teri yaadoN ka jo itna aadi huN maiN,
Ki kehti ye duniya sharaabi huN maiN...

Dil se to maiN humesha raha ameer,
Par Jae'boN se bilkul khaali huN maiN...

Dekh kar mujhe, bujurg samjheN aashiq,
Par jawaaN kehte ki mawaali huN maiN...

Aaj talak na maaNgaa kiya kuch kabhi,
Bas saaloN se tera sawaali hun maiN..

Ab tu jo karey, vo karey, qubool hai mujhe,
Ae zindagee tujhse raazi huN maiN...

Na mohabbat use mujhse to kyuN kar,
Kehti firti vo, 'taish' ki shayri huN maiN...
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2012, 04:56:36 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 05:54:15 AM »
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Ab tu jo karey, vo karey, qubool hai mujhe,
Ae zindagee tujhse raazi huN maiN... Applause

Beautiful taish jee

bahut bahut mubaarakbaad is haseen ghazal par

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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 06:29:06 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 08:35:55 AM »
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Teri yaadoN ka jo itna aadi huN maiN,
Ki kehti ye duniya sharaabi huN maiN...

Dil se to maiN humesha raha ameer,
Par Jae'boN se bilkul khaali huN maiN...

Dekh kar mujhe, bujurg samjheN aashiq,
Par jawaaN kehte ki mawaali huN maiN...

Aaj talak na maaNgaa kiya kuch kabhi,
Bas saaloN se tera sawaali hun maiN..

Ab tu jo karey, vo karey, qubool hai mujhe,
Ae zindagee tujhse raazi huN maiN...

Na mohabbat use mujhse to kyuN kar,
Kehti firti vo, 'taish' ki shayri huN maiN...


nice lines

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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 10:33:46 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab waaH bahut umdaa.. bade hi gehre aur khoob
khayaalON ko umdaa lafzoN meiN piroya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab. is khoob kalaam par humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile





Teri yaadoN ka jo itna aadi huN maiN,
Ki kehti ye duniya sharaabi huN maiN...

Behad umdaa matla raha janab bahut khoob...

Dil se to maiN humesha raha ameer,
Par Jae'boN se bilkul khaali huN maiN...

Achcha sher hai janab bada saaf aur sidha daad....

Dekh kar mujhe, bujurg samjheN aashiq,
Par jawaaN kehte ki mawaali huN maiN...

Bahut achche ... ulte sidhe kaam karoNge toH aise hi samjheNge
sabhi tongue3


Aaj talak na maaNgaa kiya kuch kabhi,
Bas saaloN se tera sawaali hun maiN..

bahut khoob daad daad...

Ab tu jo karey, vo karey, qubool hai mujhe,
Ae zindagee tujhse raazi huN maiN...

WaaH waaH behad umdaa behad khoob daad...

Na mohabbat use mujhse to kyuN kar,
Kehti firti vo, 'taish' ki shayri huN maiN...

Kia kahne janab waaH behad umdaa...



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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2012, 10:50:00 AM »
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Dil se to maiN humesha raha ameer,
Par Jae'boN se bilkul khaali huN maiN...

Ab tu jo karey, vo karey, qubool hai mujhe,
Ae zindagee tujhse raazi huN maiN...

Na mohabbat use mujhse to kyuN kar,
Kehti firti vo, 'taish' ki shayri huN maiN...

IN ASHAAR KI KYA HAI TAAISH JI,,,ZABARDAST
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2012, 01:30:48 PM »
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bahut sunder


saini sir bahut bahut shukriya, aapka aasirwada aur tareef paa kar, humesha khushi milti hai...!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2012, 02:14:41 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai lucky jee ek lajawab peshkash dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2012, 02:33:25 PM »
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Teri yaadoN ka jo itna aadi huN maiN,
Ki kehti ye duniya sharaabi huN maiN...

Dil se to maiN humesha raha ameer,
Par Jae'boN se bilkul khaali huN maiN...

Dekh kar mujhe, bujurg samjheN aashiq,
Par jawaaN kehte ki mawaali huN maiN...

Aaj talak na maaNgaa kiya kuch kabhi,
Bas saaloN se tera sawaali hun maiN..

Ab tu jo karey, vo karey, qubool hai mujhe,
Ae zindagee tujhse raazi huN maiN...

Na mohabbat use mujhse to kyuN kar,
Kehti firti vo, 'taish' ki shayri huN maiN...


waah  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2012, 02:13:31 AM »
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Ab tu jo karey, vo karey, qubool hai mujhe,
Ae zindagee tujhse raazi huN maiN... Applause

Beautiful taish jee

bahut bahut mubaarakbaad is haseen ghazal par



Shukriya mukesh sahab, aap logoN ki hausla afzaayi se bahut bal milta hai, dil aur behtar karne ki khwaishoN se bhar jaata hai, bas yuNhi aashirwaad dete raheN aap log...!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 04:41:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob Taish ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2012, 08:20:32 AM »
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bahut khoob

prashad sahab yunhi aate raheN.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2012, 11:02:20 AM »
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nice lines



rahi saahab, ye humari khusnaseebi ki aapko lines pasand aayin, bas yahi duaa rahegi ki aapka saath hume aage bhi aise hi milta rahe...!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2012, 02:30:06 PM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab waaH bahut umdaa.. bade hi gehre aur khoob
khayaalON ko umdaa lafzoN meiN piroya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab. is khoob kalaam par humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile







Janaab aapko dekh kar humesha aur behtar likhne ka jazbaa milta hai, bas yahi umeed rahegi ki aapka saath aage v hume yuNhi milta rahe....
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