Woh Chitiyan, Woh Tadap, Woh Jazbaat!!

by khwaish on July 08, 2008, 10:07:20 PM
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Yeh khabar bhi chap jaayegi,
Kal ke Akbaar mein,
Ab rooh bhi bhikne lagenge Jism ke bazaar mein...

Dekhkar Zamaane ke badalte iss rang roop ko,
Buzurg bhi kehte hai,"aakhir kyon daud rahe hai,
Aaj ke daur ke log,Itni Tez Raftaar mein."...

Aaj paas wale ghar mein koi zor zor se ro raha tha,
"Koi Mar gaya hoga Shayad!!
Koi Baat nahi, Padhlenge hum kal ke Akbaar mein...

Tyohaar woh the jab sab saath milkar khushiyan manate the
Aaj Ka Tyohaar woh hai, jab Dange ke Darr se,
Police ki sena tainaat rehti hai Beech Bazaar mein....

Sach to Sach Hi Hai..!!!
Koi gham nahi agar kisi ko sach Kadwa lage,
Chilla to sab lete hai par Dusre ke kaan tak baat pahunche,
uss Ke LIYE BHI Dum chahiye Awaaz mein....

Salaam, Namaste uss shaks ko karo,
jo Humare kaam aa sake,
Jo humare koi kaam nahi,usse palat kar dekho bhi na!!
Jis kaarya mein koi munaafa nahi,
kyon haath daale hum Uss Karobaar mein....

Woh Chitiyan, Woh Tadap, Woh Jazbaat, Woh Rishte...
Koi Mool nahi hai ab inn Chizon ka "KHWAISH"
Aaj ke iss Bedard Sansaar mein....

             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2008, 10:12:10 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Khwaish jee.. bahoot khoob!!

Maine yah post dard-e-shyri se yaha Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan section mai move kar di hai!!

kavita sari ki sari bahoot kamal ki likhi hai apne.. magar yah do line behad pasand aai:

Chilla to sab lete hai par Dusre ke kaan tak baat pahunche,
uss Ke LIYE BHI Dum chahiye Awaaz mein....
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2008, 10:01:54 AM »
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bohut khoob likha hai khwahish ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2008, 01:53:15 PM »
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bahoot achche khwaish ji.....atisunder kavita ....pooja ji ne sahi jagah pahooncha diya hai ise....
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2008, 10:55:07 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 08, 2008, 10:12:10 PM
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wah kaya baat hai Khwaish jee.. bahoot khoob!!

Maine yah post dard-e-shyri se yaha Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan section mai move kar di hai!!

kavita sari ki sari bahoot kamal ki likhi hai apne.. magar yah do line behad pasand aai:

Chilla to sab lete hai par Dusre ke kaan tak baat pahunche,
uss Ke LIYE BHI Dum chahiye Awaaz mein....


Bahut Bahut shukriya pooja...aapne isse padha aur pasand bhi kiya..ek pal ke liye socha tha ki shayad yeh kavita nahi likhni chahiye thi kyonki kuch baatein isme bahut khator thi(kadwa sach).. par jo dil mein aaya tha likh gaya..shukriya aapka pooja..
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2008, 10:58:29 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 09, 2008, 10:01:54 AM
bohut khoob likha hai khwahish ji

Bahut bahut shukriya bhawnaji..
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2008, 10:59:33 PM »
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bahoot achche khwaish ji.....atisunder kavita ....pooja ji ne sahi jagah pahooncha diya hai ise....

teh dil se aapka shukriya bekararji...
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2008, 11:05:55 PM »
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khwaish ji,

atyant dumdaar kavita...aap yakeenan shresht likhte hein.

Prateek
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2008, 10:54:37 AM »
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Tyohaar woh the jab sab saath milkar khushiyan manate the
Aaj Ka Tyohaar woh hai, jab Dange ke Darr se,
Police ki sena tainaat rehti hai Beech Bazaar mein....

Aaj kal ka halaat nazron ke samne aagaya aapka likha padkar. Khwaish bhaiya aapne bahut accha likha hai.
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2008, 01:03:14 PM »
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khwaish ji,

atyant dumdaar kavita...aap yakeenan shresht likhte hein.

Prateek

aapke hausle-afsaai ka bahut bahut shukriya prateekji
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 02:39:01 PM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Sonia Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2010, 01:30:53 AM »
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Janab Khawahish Sahab Aadaab O Salam

Ek achche aur sache khayaaloN bhari kalaam per daad hazir hai.....     

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez......Usual Smile   
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2010, 01:50:25 AM »
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VERY VERY NICE
LAJAWAB BHAI JAAN
DIL CHEER KE RAKH DIYA AAP KE ALFAZO NE
BAHUT HI LAJAWAB SACH KAHA HAI AAP NE
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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2010, 01:55:55 AM »
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bht pyari peshkash khawaish ji...haan thodi kathor hai ...lekin sach kadwa hi hota hai na....
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2010, 03:12:24 AM »
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Bahut hi ka.duee schchayee pesh ki hai aap ne Khwaish Ji
Reaaly good work
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