my first gazal

by Anant Kotabagi on September 25, 2014, 06:50:39 PM

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hum lutaye jin pe apna pyar sab
kis kadar thukaraye hum ko yar sab

lutf is me koi kuch paida kare
zindagi lagne lagi bekar sab

kar dikhaya bekhudi me o kamal
kya kahe jalne lage bedar sab


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Re: my first gazal

«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2014, 06:55:34 PM »

Quote from: Anant Kotabagi on September 25, 2014, 06:50:39 PM

hum lutaye jin pe apna pyar sab
kis kadar thukaraye hum ko yar sab

lutf is me koi kuch paida kare
zindagi lagne lagi bekar sab

kar dikhaya bekhudi me o kamal
kya kahe jalne lage bedar sab

bahut khoob likha hai janaab !

WELCOME to YOINDIA family !


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amit_prakash_meet

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Re: my first gazal

«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2014, 03:54:29 AM »

बहुत खूब....

इस बज़्म में आपका स्वागत है.....


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Re: my first gazal

«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2014, 06:04:57 AM »

Quote from: Anant Kotabagi on September 25, 2014, 06:50:39 PM

hum lutaye jin pe apna pyar sab
kis kadar thukaraye hum ko yar sab

lutf is me koi kuch paida kare
zindagi lagne lagi bekar sab

kar dikhaya bekhudi me o kamal
kya kahe jalne lage bedar sab