my first gazal

by Anant Kotabagi on September 25, 2014, 06:50:39 PM
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hum lutaye jin pe apna pyar sab
kis kadar thukaraye hum ko yar sab

lutf is me koi kuch paida kare
zindagi lagne lagi bekar sab

kar dikhaya bekhudi me o kamal
kya kahe jalne lage bedar sab
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2014, 06:55:34 PM »
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hum lutaye jin pe apna pyar sab
kis kadar thukaraye hum ko yar sab

lutf is me koi kuch paida kare
zindagi lagne lagi bekar sab

kar dikhaya bekhudi me o kamal
kya kahe jalne lage bedar sab


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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2014, 03:54:29 AM »
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बहुत खूब....

इस बज़्म में आपका स्वागत है.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2014, 06:04:57 AM »
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hum lutaye jin pe apna pyar sab
kis kadar thukaraye hum ko yar sab

lutf is me koi kuch paida kare
zindagi lagne lagi bekar sab

kar dikhaya bekhudi me o kamal
kya kahe jalne lage bedar sab


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