Sitaro tum so jao........Qabil Ajmeri

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Wo kab aayein khuda jane sitaro tum so jao,
huay hai hum to deewane sitaro tum so jao.

kahan tak mujhse humdardi,kahan tak meri gham khuari,
hazaaro gham hai anjaane sitaro tum so jao.

guzar jayegi gham ki raat,umeedo tum to jaag uttho,
sambhal jayenge deewane sitaro tum so jao.

hamein rudaad-e-hasti raat bhar mein khatam karni hai,
na chhedo aur afsaane sitaro tum so jao.

hamarey deeda bekhwab ko taskeen kya do ge,
hamey luta hai duniya ne sitaro tum so jao.

usey 'Qabil' ki chashm-e-nam se dareena talluq hai,
shab-e-gham tum ko kya jane sitaro tum so jao.
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2012, 06:51:45 AM »
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sitaron tum to so jaao waah bahut khoob ghazal hai
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2012, 06:54:13 AM »
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wah wah sahal ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2012, 07:20:48 AM »
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 Thankyou !
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 07:56:57 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 08:36:33 AM »
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Nice!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2012, 08:37:54 AM »
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Wo kab aayein khuda jane sitaro tum so jao,
huay hai hum to deewane sitaro tum so jao.

kahan tak mujhse humdardi,kahan tak meri gham khuari,
hazaaro gham hai anjaane sitaro tum so jao.

guzar jayegi gham ki raat,umeedo tum to jaag uttho,
sambhal jayenge deewane sitaro tum so jao.

hamein rudaad-e-hasti raat bhar mein khatam karni hai,
na chhedo aur afsaane sitaro tum so jao.

hamarey deeda bekhwab ko taskeen kya do ge,
hamey luta hai duniya ne sitaro tum so jao.

usey 'Qabil' ki chashm-e-nam se dareena talluq hai,
shab-e-gham tum ko kya jane sitaro tum so jao.

last ki three duplex ka meaning aap bata dijiye.. urdu humein kam aati hai..sad5
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2012, 08:38:16 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 08:42:59 AM »
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Wo kab aayein khuda jane sitaro tum so jao,
huay hai hum to deewane sitaro tum so jao.

kahan tak mujhse humdardi,kahan tak meri gham khuari,
hazaaro gham hai anjaane sitaro tum so jao.

guzar jayegi gham ki raat,umeedo tum to jaag uttho,
sambhal jayenge deewane sitaro tum so jao.

hamein rudaad-e-hasti raat bhar mein khatam karni hai,
na chhedo aur afsaane sitaro tum so jao.

hamarey deeda bekhwab ko taskeen kya do ge,
hamey luta hai duniya ne sitaro tum so jao.

usey 'Qabil' ki chashm-e-nam se dareena talluq hai,
shab-e-gham tum ko kya jane sitaro tum so jao.



bahut khoob good sharing Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 08:49:21 AM »
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last ki three duplex ka meaning aap bata dijiye.. urdu humein kam aati hai..sad5

ya sure i would love to ....
Rudad means protocol or statement,

hasti means wajood or beingness,
deeda  means eyes

bekhwaab means  without dreams,

taskeen means sukoon ,peace

chashm-e-nam  means eyes with tears (roti hui aankein)
 
dareena means (shadeed or purana) or intense

talluq means connection or relation





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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2012, 08:50:32 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2012, 08:52:53 AM »
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ya sure i would love to ....
Rudad means protocol or statement,

hasti means wajood or beingness,
deeda  means eyes

bekhwaab means  without dreams,

taskeen means sukoon ,peace

chashm-e-nam  means eyes with tears (roti hui aankein)
 
dareena means (shadeed or purana) or intense

talluq means connection or relation






thank you for explaining sir.. Usual Smile Usual Smile its beautiful.. with perfect rhythm..
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2012, 08:55:03 AM »
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thank you for explaining sir.. Usual Smile Usual Smile its beautiful.. with perfect rhythm..
Thankyou ! lovely charan
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2012, 11:34:52 AM »
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Bahut Khub..
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2012, 05:54:02 PM »
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great composition.Qabil Ajmeri ji Congratulations.
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