Life changers

by chilloutwithme on January 24, 2005, 05:45:20 PM
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didn't know where to post this new poem so posting it here....

Its dedicated to some1 who changed my life.....

My heart wants to sing tonight,
Sing like the bird who's just learnt to fly,
The stream just touched the earth as if,
The cool breeze grazes my hair as if...

Uptil now I had my eyes shut tight,
Scared to face the world so bright,
Never knew that a new day awaits me,
Its only when u entered could I see the light.

U say I'm beautiful, U call me smart,
Maybe ur encouragement, did hit the dart,
I could never imagine what u've done to me,
I was a brat, now look at me...

I broke ur heart a many times,
Failed u disappointed u with my crimes,
But u kept ur hand on my head always,
God, can anybody 4get those assuring smiles.

You taught me not to learn,
but to create my own music,
The song I sing today
Gets its soul from that magic.
 
Look at me what I m today,
Its b'coz someone who never tried to,
but simply changed my life.
Want to tell that someone tonight,
Can u hear me singing sir? My heart just wants to sing tonight......




Hey guys plz contribute ur dedications for ppl or situations who affected ur life the most..in this forum. This forum goes to all those teachers n good ppl who impact us...pata nahi kaisey!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2005, 07:35:19 PM »
good one!!
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chilloutwithme
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2005, 12:09:23 PM »
thnks Pooja...what abt u..kya kisi ne kabhi inspire kiya tumhey?
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2005, 05:54:05 PM »
Yes, Dear!!
Mere Coach Mr. Mohinder Singh and My Love for Azhar.

Ek larki thi anjaani si
Azhar per wo marati thi
jab bhi khalti thi cricket
har dam uski nakal kiya kararti thi
nakal nakal mai kab ban gai wo
best fielder of Punjab Univercity
yah soch soch kar, phir haraan hua karati thi

Kismat se uske coach thy, Shri Mohinder Singh
Jo bahoot Vishwaas us per karty thy
dil hi dil mai rakhaty thy yah baat
aor upper se, roj bahoot danta, usse karty thy

Jab bhi hote thy Tournaments, baat bas yahi kaha karaty  thy
Tum ho meri team ki shaan, yahi baat wo dohraya karty thy!

yahi unki baat, muje Indian Team ki member bana gai,
Her sikhai baat unki khail mai, muje naam dilwa gai,
Liye bahoot se inaam kam umar mai maine,
yaha tak ki  best citizen of Panchkula "padavi" bhi dilla gai
Mille bahoot hi coach, Jinse sikha maine game khailana
magar ek unki baty, apni chavi sari Umar ke liye mere man mai bitha gai.

Kisi bhi shabdo se mai unka thanks nahi kar sakati.

Above all Mere Payare dada ji,
Ajeeb nata mera is shayari se karwan gai!!!
jayada likha to aor lamba ho jayega tab shayad koi parre hi nahi. So yahi khatam karati hu Usual Smile
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nishita
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2005, 07:06:49 AM »
'Amazing both...just too gud Usual Smile
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2005, 05:18:54 PM »
nice shreya sis, and pooj  Usual Smile
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pandit
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2005, 05:26:54 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Yes, Dear!!
Mere Coach Mr. Mohinder Singh and My Love for Azhar.

Ek larki thi anjaani si
Azhar per wo marati thi
jab bhi khalti thi cricket
har dam uski nakal kiya kararti thi
nakal nakal mai kab ban gai wo
best fielder of Punjab Univercity
yah soch soch kar, phir haraan hua karati thi

Kismat se uske coach thy, Shri Mohinder Singh
Jo bahoot Vishwaas us per karty thy
dil hi dil mai rakhaty thy yah baat
aor upper se, roj bahoot danta, usse karty thy

Jab bhi hote thy Tournaments, baat bas yahi kaha karaty  thy
Tum ho meri team ki shaan, yahi baat wo dohraya karty thy!

yahi unki baat, muje Indian Team ki member bana gai,
Her sikhai baat unki khail mai, muje naam dilwa gai,
Liye bahoot se inaam kam umar mai maine,
yaha tak ki  best citizen of Panchkula "padavi" bhi dilla gai
Mille bahoot hi coach, Jinse sikha maine game khailana
magar ek unki baty, apni chavi sari Umar ke liye mere man mai bitha gai.

Kisi bhi shabdo se mai unka thanks nahi kar sakati.

Above all Mere Payare dada ji,
Ajeeb nata mera is shayari se karwan gai!!!
jayada likha to aor lamba ho jayega tab shayad koi parre hi nahi. So yahi khatam karati hu Usual Smile


bahut hi achaa pooja ji....
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chilloutwithme
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2005, 09:39:49 AM »
nice 1 pooji...I didn't know u were an accomplished cricketer. Kya yaar kabhi bataya nahi aapney.....
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