-----/// Please don't go ///----- Hriday

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«Reply #15 on: May 17, 2015, 05:04:00 AM »
Thank you sooo much Iqtedar ji....!!!


Quote from: Iqtedar on September 29, 2013, 05:07:14 PM
when you were about to go
my lips were saying 'yes'
my heart was saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: May 18, 2015, 08:39:39 PM »
thank you sooo much M_B ji....!!!


Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 29, 2013, 06:13:10 PM

excelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllle nt poetry ,sir

what an improvisation in the application--nicely pen down
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«Reply #17 on: May 20, 2015, 08:22:22 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nashwani ji....!!!



Quote from: nashwani on September 29, 2013, 06:36:45 PM
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waah kya baat hai hriday jee..

chhae hue hai charo oor aap to..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #18 on: May 21, 2015, 05:32:20 AM »
Thank u soooo much saini ji....!!!


Quote from: sksaini4 on September 29, 2013, 07:57:25 PM
nice
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«Reply #19 on: May 21, 2015, 06:27:58 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji.....!!!

Quote from: aqsh on September 29, 2013, 08:32:38 PM
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Bahut khoob hriday ji.. full of emotions.. dheron dheron daad...
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«Reply #20 on: May 21, 2015, 07:01:38 PM »
Thank you sooooo much Rajan ji.....!!!


Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on September 30, 2013, 02:07:41 AM
v. Nice
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«Reply #21 on: May 23, 2015, 04:39:34 AM »
Thank you soooo much Bhupinder ji.....!!!


Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on September 30, 2013, 03:07:18 AM
NiCe OnE ji
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«Reply #22 on: May 23, 2015, 06:26:21 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Zarraa ji....!!!

Quote from: zarraa on September 30, 2013, 03:24:59 AM
Words coming straight from the heart Hriday ji .... Daad apko
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«Reply #23 on: May 26, 2015, 06:23:50 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji....!!!
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«Reply #24 on: May 26, 2015, 06:24:34 PM »
Thank you sooo much Pooja ji...!!!
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