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ghoslon mein aankh naa khuli ho
seekhey woh udne kaa hunar kaise
jo jagah hi naa ho kuch karne ki
parindaa failaaye apne par kaise
jis ped par banaayaa ghoslaa ho
woh kat jaaye to ho basar kaise
jo chidiyaa bhatak gayi raah se
laut kar jaaye apne ghar kaise
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2013, 08:57:55 PM » |
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sksaini4
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2013, 09:22:31 PM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2013, 11:43:05 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2013, 11:49:40 PM » |
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jo chidiyaa bhatak gayi raah se
laut kar jaaye apne ghar kaise
Ye sher dil ko choo gaya
bade pate ki baat kahee aapne..kya aaj tak chidia kabhi is baat ko samajh paayi hai..
Kabhee naheen ..pankhoN ka aasra jo hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2013, 01:10:52 AM » |
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Bahut Umda.
jis ped par banaayaa ghoslaa ho
woh kat jaaye to ho basar kaise
jo chidiyaa bhatak gayi raah se
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2013, 03:08:33 AM » |
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nice
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2013, 03:28:48 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2013, 03:34:16 AM » |
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bahut chubhta hua sa masla chhupe hue andaaz mein wah wah wah........!
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2013, 04:38:28 PM » |
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Bahaut achchhe khayaal aur bayaan Hriday ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2013, 04:55:12 PM » |
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ghoslon mein aankh naa khuli ho
seekhey woh udne kaa hunar kaise
jo jagah hi naa ho kuch karne ki
parindaa failaaye apne par kaise
jis ped par banaayaa ghoslaa ho
woh kat jaaye to ho basar kaise
jo chidiyaa bhatak gayi raah se
laut kar jaaye apne ghar kaise
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Mashhur Shayar
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«Reply #13 on: October 03, 2013, 10:17:41 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji....!!! |
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2013, 04:47:43 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!! bahut khoob
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