-----/// Please don't go ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on September 29, 2013, 08:14:02 PM
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when you were about to go
my lips were saying 'yes'
my heart was saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

dreams were with you
my life was with you
how lonely I was without you
i didn't knew how to show
so I was only saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

what i was saying were all lies
with tears full in eyes
said I don't love u, but
thought that you would know
i don't wan't to let you go
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go

you should have turned around
to see me waiting for you
but you never turned around
leaving me all alone
i know you are far away
but my heart is still saying 'no'
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go


*****HRIDAY*****



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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2013, 08:36:23 PM »
very very nice mind blowing ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2013, 08:45:59 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2013, 10:37:14 PM »
when you were about to go
my lips were saying 'yes'
my heart was saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2013, 11:43:10 PM »


when you were about to go
my lips were saying 'yes'
my heart was saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

dreams were with you
my life was with you
how lonely I was without you
i didn't knew how to show
so I was only saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

what i was saying were all lies
with tears full in eyes
said I don't love u, but
thought that you would know
i don't wan't to let you go
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go

you should have turned around
to see me waiting for you
but you never turned around
leaving me all alone
i know you are far away
but my heart is still saying 'no'
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go


*****HRIDAY*****






excelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllle nt poetry ,sir

what an improvisation in the application--nicely pen down
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2013, 12:06:45 AM »
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waah kya baat hai hriday jee..

chhae hue hai charo oor aap to..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2013, 01:27:25 AM »
nice
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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2013, 02:02:38 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob hriday ji.. full of emotions.. dheron dheron daad...
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2013, 07:37:41 AM »
v. Nice
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2013, 08:37:18 AM »
NiCe OnE ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2013, 08:54:59 AM »
Words coming straight from the heart Hriday ji .... Daad apko
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2013, 04:36:13 PM »
wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: October 04, 2013, 03:49:58 AM »
thank you sooo much Sahal ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2013, 10:21:38 AM »
thank you sooo much....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2015, 05:34:12 AM »
Nice. Applause
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