" THE INCOMPLETE DEATH"

by AROONIEMA on December 22, 2008, 06:08:30 PM
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It was midnight,
The cold was at it's height,
I was walking through a lane,
The time when i passed by a dane,
He was the first person to meet me that night,
He was dressed like cops as if he was ready to fight,
Those were the days of the war,
He was alone and was rushing fiercely towards his car,
Though, the war place was not too far,
By the time he was shooted by a gun,
And he was'nt left to see the rising sun,
The time he was put on the flame,
Yeah, his hands moved to claim,
But it was too late,
Every year on the same date,
I pay my visit to the same place,
To see me one more timeas apart of the people's race,
The place for me is a wreath,
Where I suffered my 'INCOMPLETE DEATH'...
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2008, 06:16:33 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Too Good AROONIEMA!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2008, 11:56:18 PM »
Good one Arooniema
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2008, 05:00:37 AM »
very nice arooniemaji...


seeing somebody dying, is like feeling owndeath.
         "THE INCOMPLETE DEATH"
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2008, 09:17:32 AM »
very good arooniema
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2008, 09:36:58 AM »
Good Work.. Arooniema Ji.. Applause

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diya786
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2008, 10:49:08 AM »
Welcome to yoindia Arooneima ji
very good work
just keep it up!!!
Applause Applause
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