"EK THI ANSHU".........K@HIN@@R

by Kohinoor on August 26, 2012, 01:38:02 PM
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Ek ldki thi....
Sokh...chulbuli ldki...
Naam tha "ANSHU"
aur kaam tha sbko tng krna...hsna muskurana...mstiyaan krna...
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"PAPA KI 'JUGNU'...,
...MUMMY KI 'BITIYA',
DIDIYON KI 'CHOTI'...
...DOSTON KI 'ANSHIYA''
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Jane kitne hi naam uske shakhshiyat se jude hue they...
Khud ko wo SEHZADI kehti thi...apne saher ki!!
Wo pagal si ldki jane kitne khwabon me jeeti thi...
Bolna suru krti to rukti nhi....
"non-stop bak bak"
sari frnds hsti.n kehkar...
Wo b hsti khilkhllakar...
Sbko hsati..aur
rulati b thi..!!
Wo sare frnd ki jaan,
sbki aankhen nm b krati thi..!!
Kbhi inko stana,
kbhi unko stana...
Boaring classes na krne ka
wo roj dhoondhti thi bahana...
Bol Bol k LIBRARIAN k kaan khana,
to kbhi goongepan ki acting krte hue
kisi ajnabi ko isharo me raasta btana...
Aisi thi wo!!
Bahut sauk tha use..............
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2012, 01:40:37 PM »
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2012, 01:59:25 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2012, 02:12:16 PM »

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Bahut sauk tha use sajne ka...
Mummy ki sari ko kholti..lapeti..
Pehnna jo nhi aata tha...fir b kisi tarah sari lapetkar..aankhon me kajal lgaye aur dher sari churiyaan pehnkar wo mummy se poochti...
"kaisi lg rhi hai bitiya?"
"sehzadi lg rhi hai."
kehkar wo muskurati.n to wo unke gle me baahen daal kr kehti...
"hum to Sehzadi hi hain na mummy!!"
wo kehkar hsti...
"kya bn rha hai?"
kitchen k taad pr baithkr pair hilate aur seb khate hue wo bdi di se roj ye sawaal krti...
"bn to bahut kuch rha hai Choti...mgar tum kb sikhogi kuch bnana?
Aanta tk goothna nhi aata tmhe"
sunkar wo chupchaap khisak leti wahaan se...
Ye roj ka kaam tha!!
Barish me bheegna psnd tha use...
Raat me b sbse chupakar jane kaise bheeg leti thi..??
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2012, 02:59:44 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar.... age ke episodes kab tak aa rahe hain???
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2012, 03:06:37 PM »

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Shayri aur gajlon ko pdhne ka sauk hua...phir wo likhne b lgi...
Ulta-pulta..
thoda accha...thoda ajeeb sa...
Yoindia pe post krti thi...wahaan b aana jana uski aadat me shumaar ho gya tha...
Frnds 4* group tha uska
ANSHU
AASHU
NIHARIKA
&
ARSHI
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"tum ye gana ga dena yaarr...
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"ANSHU KO SJA K RKHNA,
DOLI ME BITHA K RKHNA,
CHEDENGI SARI SAKHIYAAN
YE UNSE JA K KEHNA..."
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Anshu itni ada se ga rhi thi ki Niharika rote me b uthkr naachne lgi...
Wo charon 'singing comptition' ki taiyariyon me busy thi.n...
Niharika apna song select hi nhi kr pa rhi thi to rone lgi...
"jiyo yaar...!!
Mai ye wala gana ga doongi to sb jhoom uthenge..."
"so to hai...par kaash ki meri shadi hoti aur tum ye gana ga rhi hoti..."
Anshu ne bdi hsrat se dil pe hath rkhte hue kaha tha...
"uncle se baat kren hm teeno...tmhari shadi k bare me.."
wo sb mje le rhi thi.n..
"thoda jldi krna"
Anshu k reply pe charon ek sath has di.n.....
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2012, 03:52:40 PM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2012, 06:20:32 PM »
Hello My dear Bahenaa !

kaisi ho... ?
Ummid hai mast changi ho... itni masti wali mast kahani
jo likh rahi ho....

All of all kahaani ka start achcha hai but speed kuch jyada hai..
Means pahle to laga ke kavita sa kuch hai par bad meiN aik ke bad
aik stanza padhe toH pata chala ke kahani hai.. tongue3

Wel kahaani ko aaraam se likho, charactors ko show karo, act and
diolog is must for any story... Usual Smile

Meri good wishes hai apni pyaari bahna ke saath... Usual Smile

Likhati raho khush raho...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
                   

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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2012, 12:33:06 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2012, 02:18:16 AM »

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Wo khush thi...
Bahut khush...
Itna ki shayad jitna koi nhi hota...
Fir ek din achanak chakkar aaya use
clg ki sidhiyon se ldkhada k giri pdi...
Jada chot nhi lgi thi mgar behosh ho gyi thi wo...
Hospital me aankh khuli to sb k hairaan pareshaan se chehron ko dekhkr muskura k boli...
"mai theek hun bhaiya..!!"
mgar wo theek nhi thi...
Wo chlti phirti rhi, muskurati rhi...mgar uska sareer glta rha...
Mummy pareshaan hui.n..."bitiya ko kya hua?"
"kuch nhi mummy,college se tusn...chlna phirna..thak jati hun na..!!"
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2012, 04:24:36 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2012, 11:47:34 AM »
Nice
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2012, 11:49:24 AM »
Nice
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2012, 02:20:01 PM »

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Use jb tb ulti ho jati thi jisme khoon b nikalta tha...mgar usne kisi se btaya nhi...
"sb pareshaan ho jayenge...vaise b papa ki tbiyat theek nhi rehti.."
mgar,
"mujhe kuch ho gya hai...!!"
ye baat uske hste chehre ko loot gyi...
Hste hste use achanak se break lg jata aur wo sbke beech se ht jati...
 
....fir ek din sbke sath shaam ki chai peete wqt uske jism me dard ki ek tej lehar uthi aur fir..dher sari khoon ki ulti..!!
Wo cheekhkr behosh ho gyi...
Is baat se anjaan ki uski cheekh me jane kitni hi cheekhen mil gyi thi'n...
Mummy behosh ho gyi uska haal dekhkr...
Papa aur behne use uthane k liyd daude...
.
Hospital me hosh me aane k baad b uska cheekhna jari tha...
Dr. Ne behoshi ka injection lga k use khamosh kr dia.
...Shaam me hosh aaya to sb hi maujood they..papa..bdi di...frnds...
Sb ro rhe they mgar beaawaaj...
Usne muskurane ki nakaam si kosis krte hue kaha
"mai theek hun bhaiya..!!"
mgar koi nhi hsa..wo akeli hsti rhi...
"mai theek hun bhaiya..!!"
is baar hsi k sath sath aansu b ludhak chuke they uske gaalon par....
Sbke beaawaaz aansu abki jhar jhar girne lge...
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"JHARNE KO BEHTE DEKHA HAI NA..??
USI TARAH...."
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2012, 02:38:57 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  aage ka intezaar hai...!!!
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