AAJ MERE LIYE SANWAR JAANA ...................... HASAN

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Kar  ke  Ahd - e – Wafa   mukar  jaana
Aaj ,  JaanaaN !   tera  Hunar   jaana

Meri  Manzil   hai  tera  dar  jaanaaN!
Tere  dar  se  hai  abb  kidhar  jaana

Apna   har   Lamha   de   diya   tumko
Shaam   tumko  , tumheiN  Sahar  jaana

Zindagi !  Jaante   thhe  khoob  tujhe  
Par  na  thha  itna   Mukhtasar  jaana

Chaand  ko   dena   hai   jawaab  mujhe
Aaj    mere    liye    sanwar    jaana

Housle  lay  chale  unheeN   pe  Hamein
Raaste  ,  jin ko   Pur - Khatar  jaana

Do  Qadam  chal  ke  saath  chhod  gaye
Jinko   thha   hum ne   Humsafar  jaana

Log    aksar    wo    nikle    Zahreele
Humne   thha   jinko   Be – Zarar  jaana

Kya  kareiN  Khud   pe  aitbaar  ‘ Hasan ’
Uss  ne  hi   jab   na  Moatabar   jaana
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Ahd e wafa = promise to be faithful  ; Mukhtasar = brief /  short ;
Purkhatar=dangerous;Bezarar=harmless;matabar=reliable
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2014, 03:05:50 PM »
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Kar  ke  Ahd - e – Wafa   mukar  jaana
Aaj ,  JaanaaN !   tera  Hunar   jaana

Meri  Manzil   hai  tera  dar  jaanaaN!
Tere  dar  se  hai  abb  kidhar  jaana

Apna   har   Lamha   de   diya   tumko
Shaam   tumko  , tumheiN  Sahar  jaana

Zindagi !  Jaante   thhe  khoob  tujhe 
Par  na  thha  itna   Mukhtasar  jaana

Chaand  ko   dena   hai   jawaab  mujhe
Aaj    mere    liye    sanwar    jaana

Housle  lay  chale  unheeN   pe  Hamein
Raaste  ,  jin ko   Pur - Khatar  jaana

Do  Qadam  chal  ke  saath  chhod  gaye
Jinko   thha   hum ne   Humsafar  jaana

Log    aksar    wo    nikle    Zahreele
Humne   thha   jinko   Be – Zarar  jaana

Kya  kareiN  Khud   pe  aitbaar  ‘ Hasan ’
Uss  ne  hi   jab   na  Moatabar   jaana
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Aadaab Sir
wah..din ki shuruaat is khoobsurat ghazal se..
jitni bhi daad dee jaaye kam hai..
aur ye ashaar ..to bas kya kahne

Kar  ke  Ahd - e – Wafa   mukar  jaana
Aaj ,  JaanaaN !   tera  Hunar   jaana

Meri  Manzil   hai  tera  dar  jaanaaN!
Tere  dar  se  hai  abb  kidhar  jaana

Chaand  ko   dena   hai   jawaab  mujhe
Aaj    mere    liye    sanwar    jaana

Housle  lay  chale  unheeN   pe  Hamein
Raaste  ,  jin ko   Pur - Khatar  jaana

Kya  kareiN  Khud   pe  aitbaar  ‘ Hasan ’
Uss  ne  hi   jab   na  Moatabar   jaana
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2014, 03:10:15 PM »
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वाह...वाह...बहुत ही खूब....शानदार पेशकश....ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद....

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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2014, 03:34:37 PM »
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Kar  ke  Ahd - e – Wafa   mukar  jaana
Aaj ,  JaanaaN !   tera  Hunar   jaana

Meri  Manzil   hai  tera  dar  jaanaaN!
Tere  dar  se  hai  abb  kidhar  jaana

Apna   har   Lamha   de   diya   tumko
Shaam   tumko  , tumheiN  Sahar  jaana

Zindagi !  Jaante   thhe  khoob  tujhe 
Par  na  thha  itna   Mukhtasar  jaana

Chaand  ko   dena   hai   jawaab  mujhe
Aaj    mere    liye    sanwar    jaana

Housle  lay  chale  unheeN   pe  Hamein
Raaste  ,  jin ko   Pur - Khatar  jaana

Do  Qadam  chal  ke  saath  chhod  gaye
Jinko   thha   hum ne   Humsafar  jaana

Log    aksar    wo    nikle    Zahreele
Humne   thha   jinko   Be – Zarar  jaana

Kya  kareiN  Khud   pe  aitbaar  ‘ Hasan ’
Uss  ne  hi   jab   na  Moatabar   jaana
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Ahd e wafa = promise to be faithful  ; Mukhtasar = brief /  short ;
Purkhatar=dangerous;Bezarar=harmless;matabar=reliable



Waah Waah Waah...Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Saheb..

Bahut Bahut Khoob....

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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2014, 04:40:13 PM »
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Kar  ke  Ahd - e – Wafa   mukar  jaana
Aaj ,  JaanaaN !   tera  Hunar   jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Meri  Manzil   hai  tera  dar  jaanaaN!
Tere  dar  se  hai  abb  kidhar  jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Apna   har   Lamha   de   diya   tumko
Shaam   tumko  , tumheiN  Sahar  jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Zindagi !  Jaante   thhe  khoob  tujhe  
Par  na  thha  itna   Mukhtasar  jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Chaand  ko   dena   hai   jawaab  mujhe
Aaj    mere    liye    sanwar    jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Housle  lay  chale  unheeN   pe  Hamein
Raaste  ,  jin ko   Pur - Khatar  jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Do  Qadam  chal  ke  saath  chhod  gaye
Jinko   thha   hum ne   Humsafar  jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Log    aksar    wo    nikle    Zahreele
Humne   thha   jinko   Be – Zarar  jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kya  kareiN  Khud   pe  aitbaar  ‘ Hasan ’
Uss  ne  hi   jab   na  Moatabar   jaana
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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                        Bahut Umda.!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2014, 06:19:45 PM »
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Kar  ke  Ahd - e – Wafa   mukar  jaana
Aaj ,  JaanaaN !   tera  Hunar   jaana

Meri  Manzil   hai  tera  dar  jaanaaN!
Tere  dar  se  hai  abb  kidhar  jaana

Apna   har   Lamha   de   diya   tumko
Shaam   tumko  , tumheiN  Sahar  jaana

Zindagi !  Jaante   thhe  khoob  tujhe 
Par  na  thha  itna   Mukhtasar  jaana

Chaand  ko   dena   hai   jawaab  mujhe
Aaj    mere    liye    sanwar    jaana

Housle  lay  chale  unheeN   pe  Hamein
Raaste  ,  jin ko   Pur - Khatar  jaana

Do  Qadam  chal  ke  saath  chhod  gaye
Jinko   thha   hum ne   Humsafar  jaana

Log    aksar    wo    nikle    Zahreele
Humne   thha   jinko   Be – Zarar  jaana

Kya  kareiN  Khud   pe  aitbaar  ‘ Hasan ’
Uss  ne  hi   jab   na  Moatabar   jaana
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Ahd e wafa = promise to be faithful  ; Mukhtasar = brief /  short ;
Purkhatar=dangerous;Bezarar=harmless;matabar=reliable



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SUPERB LINES HASAN SIR  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Hasan Sahib Bahut Umdah, Wah Wah. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Zindagi !  Jaante   thhe  khoob  tujhe 
Par  na  thha  itna   Mukhtasar  jaana
 Applause Applause Applause :clap:Bahut Khoob Siddiqui Saheb
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Siddiqui Sahab Aadaab ... !

Masha Allaah janab kia kahne, bus Aapki kalaam padh leN toH dil shaad ho jayeN... gazab ke khayaalat aur gazab ka aNdaaz e bayaaN hai aapka... behad pyaari aur umdaaH kalaam kahi hai har sher la jawaab raha janab...

Is la jawaab gazal par humari hazaaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye.. bazm ko apni kalaamoN se nawaazte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...





Kar  ke  Ahd - e – Wafa   mukar  jaana
Aaj ,  JaanaaN !   tera  Hunar   jaana

Kia kahne janab har aashiqui ke dil ki baat kah dii aapne...


Meri  Manzil   hai  tera  dar  jaanaaN!
Tere  dar  se  hai  abb  kidhar  jaana

Waah bahut khoob janab daad...


Apna   har   Lamha   de   diya   tumko
Shaam   tumko  , tumheiN  Sahar  jaana

Waah waah waah kia kahne bahut khoob behad umda sher hua hai daad daad daad...


Zindagi !  Jaante   thhe  khoob  tujhe 
Par  na  thha  itna   Mukhtasar  jaana

Wallaah janab behad laa jawaab sher kaha hai is umda sher par hazaaroN daad..


Chaand  ko   dena   hai   jawaab  mujhe
Aaj    mere    liye    sanwar    jaana

Oye hoye kia kahne janab bus waah waah waah hi nikal rahi hai bada pyaara sher kaha hai ...


Housle  lay  chale  unheeN   pe  Hamein
Raaste  ,  jin ko   Pur - Khatar  jaana

bahut khoob janab behad sahiN farmaya aapne... bada tajurbekaar sher hai daad...


Do  Qadam  chal  ke  saath  chhod  gaye
Jinko   thha   hum ne   Humsafar  jaana

Waah Waah waah bahut khoob bahut umdaa ...


Log    aksar    wo    nikle    Zahreele
Humne   thha   jinko   Be – Zarar  jaana

Kia kahne jee behad khoob, bade tajurbe kii shayri se nawaaza hai daad...


Kya  kareiN  Khud   pe  aitbaar  ‘ Hasan ’
Uss  ne  hi   jab   na  Moatabar   jaana

Wallaah janab kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur pur Asar maqta kaha hai.. Daad daad daad...



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Ahd e wafa = promise to be faithful  ; Mukhtasar = brief /  short ;
Purkhatar=dangerous;Bezarar=harmless;matabar=reliable

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