Aaj Uss Gham ke Kharidaar Kya Hue???

by khwaish on January 18, 2010, 09:15:59 PM
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Bahut Din ke Baad Iss Mehfil mein kuch Likh Raha Hoon,
Umeed Karta Hoon ke Sab ko yeh Ghazal pasand Aaye..Shukriya

Andheri Raahon Mein Jo Mil kar Jalaaye The Roshan Diye,
Unn Roshan Diyo Ke Pehredaar Kya Hue...

Mere Har Dard,Har Gham Par Nazar Thi jinki,
Aaaj uss Gham Ke Kharidaar Kya Hue...

Duniya Bhar Ke sawaalo par jisne Diye The mere hisse ke jawaab!!!!
Jo The Kabhi Mere Tarafdaar Kya Hue...

Jis makaan Ko ghar Ka Naam Diya Tha Humne,
Aaj uss Veeran Ghar Ke Dar-O-Deewar Kya Hue...

Yeh kya Hua Ke Ronak-e-Shehar Bhi Humse Loot Gayi!!!
Kabhi Aayi to jo Iss Chaman Par Bahaar Kya Hue...

Na-umeedi Ke Daur Se Guzar Rahe Hai Hum!!!
Raahon Mein Dikh rahi thi jo Thodi si Roshni Ke Asaar Kya Hue...

"Khwaish" Jashn-e-mehfilo Mein To Yaaron ki Kami Nahi
Par Aaye Jab Gham Ki Barsaat!! Jo The Kabhi mere Yaar Kya Hue....

Acha Hua Ke Neend Se Aankh To Khuli Apni!!!
Toote Hue khwaabo ki Duniya Mein Jo The Hum Sawaar Kya Hue....

             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 11:41:29 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2010, 12:26:22 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley too good khwaish ji... Best Lines:

Duniya Bhar Ke sawaalo par jisne Diye The mere hisse ke jawaab!!!!

Acha Hua Ke Neend Se Aankh To Khuli Apni!!!
Toote Hue khwaabo ki Duniya Mein Jo The Hum Sawaar Kya Hue....

Good creation!!!


Gum bhi apna, hum bhi apne...
khud ne khud ko maara hai

Duniya thi pahle bhi begani
begano ka sung kab hua humara hai

ghar banta hai armaano se
unhe na humara sath payara hai

dete the jo humare liye jawab
ajj ussi ke sawalo ne to maara hai....
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2010, 12:41:03 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2010, 01:20:42 AM »
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Mai Bhi kuch Likhna Chahata tha Aap Logo Ne Itna Achha Likha Ki Kuch Likhna Bhi Gustakhi Lag Raha Hai
Fir Bhi Likh Raha Hun, Galtiyon Pe Maf Kijiyega

Haste the jo kal tak meri har baat pe...
Aaj vo hi mere gam ke talabgar huye...

Sar jhukaye ham aaj ye sochte rahe...
Kis khata ke liye ham unke gunahgaar huye...

Tham jati thi jinkii sanse me ashk bahne pe...
Aaj vo hi mere gam ke kharidaar huye...
~pank~
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2010, 01:28:14 AM »
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Shukaria Janab ji!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2010, 01:32:00 AM »
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Always Most Welcome Pooja mam
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2010, 01:53:57 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2010, 03:36:45 AM »
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Wah very touching and lovely gazal.Khwaish ji,Pooja ji,Pank ji,aap sabhi ne bahut khoobsurti se likha.keep it up. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2010, 12:26:26 PM »
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wah kya baat hai    khwaish ji....

JO MERI TARAF UTTHEY DUNIYA BAR KE TOOFANO SEY LARDA KARTE THEY
JO MERE LIYE HI APNI ZINDAGI JEEYEA KARTE THEY
AAJ US TARAFDAAR NE HI MERI ZINDAGI BARBAAD KAR DIYA.

JO MERE HAR DUKH DARD DEKHKAR MERI KHUSHIYON KE KHAATIR
MERE HAR GAM KHARIDA KARTE THEY
AAJ US KHARIDAAR NE MERI HAR KHUSHIYAN KHARID KAR DIYA...
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2010, 01:05:55 PM »
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Bahut khoon Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2010, 01:52:10 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pankji..

Aapne iss Ghazal Ko Apna Waqt Diya..Teh Dil Se Shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2010, 06:27:47 PM »
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Bahut SUndar likha hai Khwaish Ji And Nice Response Pooja Ji and Pank Bro
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2010, 12:44:48 PM »
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Wahhhhhh

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Janaab!!
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2010, 06:19:11 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley too good khwaish ji... Best Lines:

Duniya Bhar Ke sawaalo par jisne Diye The mere hisse ke jawaab!!!!

Acha Hua Ke Neend Se Aankh To Khuli Apni!!!
Toote Hue khwaabo ki Duniya Mein Jo The Hum Sawaar Kya Hue....

Good creation!!!



Gum bhi apna, hum bhi apne...
khud ne khud ko maara hai

Duniya thi pahle bhi begani
begano ka sung kab hua humara hai

ghar banta hai armaano se
unhe na humara sath payara hai

dete the jo humare liye jawab
ajj ussi ke sawalo ne to maara hai....


Bahut bahut Shukriya Pooja..

Thankyou Sooooo Much dear For Reading!!! icon_salut

Bahut bahut Khoob Pooja..Kya Khoob likha Aapne bhi.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khud Ko To Kabhi Koi Saza Nahi Dete
Chot jab Khud ko Lagi Ho,Woh Auro ko Bhi Dawa Nahi Dete...

Meri Khamoshi Hi Meri Kamzori Hai!!!
Par yeh Sach Hai Kabhi Apni Kamzori Kisi Ko Bata Nahi Dete...

Yeh Duniya Kuch Aisi Hi Hai "Pooja"
Bin Matlab Ke Ab Log Bhi Ek Duje Ko Dua Nahi Dete...

Zakhm Khud Ko Huye Hai To Unn Zakhmo Ka Ilaaj Bhi Khud Hi kar!!!
Yahan Kisi Ke Paas Auro Ke Liye Waqt Nahi,
kisi Aur Ke Zakhmo Ko Koi Sila Nahi Dete..

"Khwaish" Badnseebo Ki Bas Yehi Ek Dastaan Hai!!!
Haathon Ki Lakeerein Kharaab Ho To Hum Unhe Mita Nahi Dete....

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