Akhir ghar maiN mere aaina kiska hai

by janumanu on September 15, 2010, 02:23:21 AM
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Akhir ghar maiN mere aaina kiska hai
jab bhi maiN dekhuN koe doosra dikhta hai


aaj yaad kuch bahut aa rahi ho tum bhi
aaj chand bhi to der se nikla hai

shab bhar zamiN kuredunga maiN bhi to
dast-e-falak se ek tara fislaa hai

pyaar na karna kahta hai 'Janumanu
aur zamana isi kayee par chalta hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 02:34:13 AM »
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Quote from: janumanu on September 15, 2010, 02:23:21 AM
Akhir ghar maiN mere aaina kiska hai
jab bhi maiN dekhuN koe doosra dikhta hai


aaj yaad kuch bahut aa rahi ho tum bhi
aaj chand bhi to der se nikla hai

shab bhar zamiN kuredunga maiN bhi to
dast-e-falak se ek tara fislaa hai

pyaar na karna kahta hai 'Janumanu
aur zamana isi kayee par chalta hai

Vikas Ji ! yoindia parivaar me aapka dil se swaagat hai... aur yaha aapko dekhkar behad khushi ho rahi hai... behtreen shayaroN ki har jagha zarurat hoti hai... woh naye likhne waaloN ke agraj hote hai...

aapki yaha yeh pehli peshkash hai .. isne mujhe bahut prabhavit kiya...sabhi ashaar ka fikR-o-khayal aur adaayegi umdaa rahi...tahe dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahen aage bhi... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 02:38:29 AM »
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Bhai Kaise hai..... Usual Smile

Aapko yahaaN dekhkar bahot achcha laga... Usual Smile
Aur aapne yeH adhuri si hi kalaam kyuN rakhi... par sabhi sher achche lage.... Daad:)          


Quote from: janumanu on September 15, 2010, 02:23:21 AM
Akhir ghar maiN mere aaina kiska hai
jab bhi maiN dekhuN koe doosra dikhta hai

Aaah kia baat hai Bhai... Kafi gehrai meiN sher kaha hai aapne daad.. Bahut umdaa          


aaj yaad kuch bahut aa rahi ho tum bhi
aaj chand bhi to der se nikla hai

Hmmm Shayaarana andaaz bahut achche daad Bhai... Usual Smile          


shab bhar zamiN kuredunga maiN bhi to
dast-e-falak se ek tara fislaa hai

Bahut achcha sher hai bhai... Par Chandm Malik sahab... aapne apni shanakhat hi nahi dii yahaaN :D is hisab se hume sher mulammal nazar nahi aa raha hai...          


pyaar na karna kahta hai 'Janumanu
aur zamana isi kayee par chalta hai


Achcha sher hai juch spel mistake hai kya... shahad hum hi "Kayee" ka matlab thik se nahi samjhe.. Usual Smile          


Aapke yahaaN aane se hume abhi yeH site puri tarha apni lag rahi hai...... Aik achchi peshkash per dili daad.... Kabool kijiye.... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye....
Khush rahiye..... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile
          
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2010, 02:21:40 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on September 15, 2010, 02:34:13 AM
Vikas Ji ! yoindia parivaar me aapka dil se swaagat hai... aur yaha aapko dekhkar behad khushi ho rahi hai... behtreen shayaroN ki har jagha zarurat hoti hai... woh naye likhne waaloN ke agraj hote hai...

aapki yaha yeh pehli peshkash hai .. isne mujhe bahut prabhavit kiya...sabhi ashaar ka fikR-o-khayal aur adaayegi umdaa rahi...tahe dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahen aage bhi... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...

Naresh ji aapka bahut shukriyaa .. swagat karne ke liye Usual Smile
padhne aur sarahne ke liye

aapki nazr-e-karam bani rahe , yahi kaamnlaa karta huN Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2010, 02:37:49 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 15, 2010, 02:38:29 AM
Bhai Kaise hai..... Usual Smile


Pahle se aram hai bhayee [color=/red]
Aapko yahaaN dekhkar bahot achcha laga... Usual Smile
Aur aapne yeH adhuri si hi kalaam kyuN rakhi... par sabhi sher achche lage.... Daad:)   [color=/red]

ab bhayee adhoori aur poori kya hai ye to pata hi nahi mujhe Usual Smile
shukriyaa pasand karne ke liye
       


Aapke yahaaN aane se hume abhi yeH site puri tarha apni lag rahi hai...... Aik achchi peshkash per dili daad.... Kabool kijiye.... Usual Smile


[color=/red] thank u thank Usual Smile
Aate rahiye....
Khush rahiye..... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile
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same to u
         

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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2010, 02:39:44 AM »
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Thank u so much yaar

tum bahut jydaa bolte ho sach maiN Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2010, 11:49:47 AM »
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Quote from: janumanu on September 17, 2010, 02:39:44 AM
Thank u so much yaar

tum bahut jydaa bolte ho sach maiN Usual Smile

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Kia bhai aap bhi naa..... tongue3
Abhi to humne kuch bola hi nahi.... Chaliye jaldi se nayi peshkash rakhiye... Hume intezaar hai Usual Smile         
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