Aur kuchh din.... (by vb)

by vb on December 13, 2013, 12:19:35 AM
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Ake din hum bhe andheron men utar jaain gay
Chaar din hen, so kisi taur guzar jaain gay

Dard-anjaam murravat ka sila dekh liya
Karb-angez ye lamhay bhe sanvar jaain gay

Khaar hen hum karay bardasht kahan tak duniya
Koi khushboo tu nahi hen k bikher jaain gay

Ye tu ik rasm hay logon ki divaanon k liyay
Sang barsen gay tu hum bach k kidher jaain gay

Yaad auqaat dila di hamen mehfil ne teri
Jaantay thay k yehi ho ga agar jaain gay

Aap ka kuchh nahi jayay ga agar vb jee
Aur kuchh din jo is koochay men theher jaain gay

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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2013, 02:56:50 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2013, 03:25:05 AM »
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Ake din hum bhe andheron men utar jaain gay
Chaar din hen, so kisi taur guzar jaain gay

Dard-anjaam murravat ka sila dekh liya
Karb-angez ye lamhay bhe sanvar jaain gay

Khaar hen hum karay bardasht kahan tak duniya
Koi khushboo tu nahi hen k bikher jaain gay

Ye tu ik rasm hay logon ki divaanon k liyay
Sang barsen gay tu hum bach k kidher jaain gay

Yaad auqaat dila di hamen mehfil ne teri
Jaantay thay k yehi ho ga agar jaain gay

Aap ka kuchh nahi jayay ga agar vb jee
Aur kuchh din jo is koochay men theher jaain gay

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khubsurat ashaar hain VB Ji .last sher mein 'Jo is' ki jagah 'isi' kqr len to behtar hai.bhr me as jaayega.
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2013, 09:46:40 AM »
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just superb
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2013, 01:47:30 PM »
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वाह....वाह...बहुत ही खूब....ढेरों दाद...

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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2013, 01:53:24 PM »
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wha wha bhut khub

shukriya...
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B khubsurat ashaar hain VB Ji .last sher mein 'Jo is' ki jagah 'isi' kqr len to behtar hai.bhr me as jaayega.

F.H.SIDDIQUI jee! hum aap ki baat say 100% itefaaq kartay hen... bilkul sahi kaha aap ne.. aap ki salahiyaton ki waja say halki si tabdeeli ne sher k meaning bhe na badlay or sher bhe durust hua.... buhat thankful hen hum aap k..

hum asal post men sirf is liyay tabdeeli nahi kar rahay... taakay likhnay walay ki ghalati/kamzori/kharaabi saamnay rahay... aur aap k hunar ko bhe pazeerai milti rahay...

again shukriya k saath...
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2013, 02:01:06 PM »
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just superb


buhat shukriya..
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वाह....वाह...बहुत ही खूब....ढेरों दाद...

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hum hindi rasm-ul-khat nahi parh saktay... taareef ya tanqeed dono k liyay shukriya...
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2013, 03:05:04 PM »
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bahut khoob vb ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2013, 03:35:25 PM »
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Ake din hum bhe andheron men utar jaain gay
Chaar din hen, so kisi taur guzar jaain gay

Dard-anjaam murravat ka sila dekh liya
Karb-angez ye lamhay bhe sanvar jaain gay

Khaar hen hum karay bardasht kahan tak duniya
Koi khushboo tu nahi hen k bikher jaain gay

Ye tu ik rasm hay logon ki divaanon k liyay
Sang barsen gay tu hum bach k kidher jaain gay

Yaad auqaat dila di hamen mehfil ne teri
Jaantay thay k yehi ho ga agar jaain gay

Aap ka kuchh nahi jayay ga agar vb jee
Aur kuchh din jo is koochay men theher jaain gay

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wah wah bahut khoob Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2013, 06:50:50 PM »
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bahut khoob vb ji.. Usual Smile

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buhat shukriya...
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«Reply #12 on: December 13, 2013, 06:51:59 PM »
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wah wah bahut khoob Thumbs UP

thanx...
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«Reply #13 on: December 13, 2013, 07:37:49 PM »
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Khaar hen hum karay bardasht kahan tak duniya
Koi khushboo tu nahi hen k bikher jaain gay

Ye tu ik rasm hay logon ki divaanon k liyay
Sang barsen gay tu hum bach k kidher jaain gay

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: December 13, 2013, 09:12:50 PM »
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Khaar hen hum karay bardasht kahan tak duniya
Koi khushboo tu nahi hen k bikher jaain gay

Ye tu ik rasm hay logon ki divaanon k liyay
Sang barsen gay tu hum bach k kidher jaain gay

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya....
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