badnaam bohut hai,,,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam

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gumaan na kar dariya shaant hai to,
samundero main bhi tufan bohut hai,

kiyon karta hai fiker zamane ki [jeet],
shayer hote duniya main badnaam bohut hai,

katal karni hai zindagi apni aaj kal,
aage jaker jo sehne ilzaam bohut hai,

tu jo kerti hai us se hum hai rubaru,
mere charo or bikhre paigaam bohut hai,

gaalo per nishaan pade aansu,o ke,
aankho ki palke kehe dard bohut hai,

jaam pee lene se kadam dagmaga se gaye,
gher ek tha uska yaha raahe bohut hai,

umeed ki dor jo tut gayi ek pal main,
saanse kiyon rukti nahi gum bohut hai,

hum rakhte khiyal ger karte yakeen humper,
yaha ishq ke nakaab main shikari bohut hai,

               jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2014, 01:57:02 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut umda Jeet Jee.
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2014, 02:36:16 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2014, 08:18:59 AM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Umdah Jeet Sahib. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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gumaan na kar dariya shaant hai to,
samundero main bhi tufan bohut hai,

kiyon karta hai fiker zamane ki [jeet],
shayer hote duniya main badnaam bohut hai,

katal karni hai zindagi apni aaj kal,
aage jaker jo sehne ilzaam bohut hai,

tu jo kerti hai us se hum hai rubaru,
mere charo or bikhre paigaam bohut hai,

वाह.....वाह.....

बहुत ही खूब.....

ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद....

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dli se daaaad kabool amit sir ji shukriya
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gumaan na kar dariya shaant hai to,
samundero main bhi tufan bohut hai,

kiyon karta hai fiker zamane ki [jeet],
shayer hote duniya main badnaam bohut hai,

katal karni hai zindagi apni aaj kal,
aage jaker jo sehne ilzaam bohut hai,

tu jo kerti hai us se hum hai rubaru,
mere charo or bikhre paigaam bohut hai,


excellent jeet ji
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