Dard hotaa hai! Haqeeqat hai! Saaqiyah aajaa!

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Dard hotaa hai! Haqeeqat hai! Saaqiyah aajaa!
Aaj laachaar tabeeyat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Nazar na pheir, qasam hai tujhey usooloun kee;
Sukoon dey, ki, riwaayat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Lab hain beyaab, past jaan, sookhtaa hai galaa;
Maraz kee saaf kaifiyat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Kahaa hai: maykadey pahunch! Hun naatuwaan beyhad:
Aakhiree us kee hidaayat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Mein gayaa laakh baar; too kabhee naheen aayee!
Phir bhi tujhko hi shikaayat hai? Saaqiyah aajaa!!

Chaar qadmoun pai hun: taaqat bachaayegee kitnee?
Koun see is mein qifaayat hai? Saaqiyah aajaa!

Koun hai doosaraa, 'abd', jo maraaham laaye?
Qabool nazar-e-inaayat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2009, 09:29:00 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ..ABD JI....

KOUN DEGA MERE DIL KO SAKUN,
KOUN DIL KI BUJAAYEGA AAG.
BEJAAN PADA HUN,SAAQIYA,
AA TU MERE PAAS.

NAGRON SE NAGREN MILA,
APNE HAATHON SE MUJHKO PILA.
AA BHAR DE DIL KE ZAKHMON KO,
AAKAR TU MARAAHAM LAGAA.

DE THODI RAWAANI MUJHKO,
KASM HAI TERI JAWAANI KI TUJHKO.
SAAQIYA BAHUT DARD HAI AAJ MUJHKO,
KI AAJ APNE BAHON MEIN SULA MUJHKO.
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2009, 09:37:41 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ..ABD JI....

KOUN DEGA MERE DIL KO SAKUN,
KOUN DIL KI BUJAAYEGA AAG.
BEJAAN PADA HUN,SAAQIYA,
AA TU MERE PAAS.

NAGRON SE NAGREN MILA,
APNE HAATHON SE MUJHKO PILA.
AA BHAR DE DIL KE ZAKHMON KO,
AAKAR TU MARAAHAM LAGAA.

DE THODI RAWAANI MUJHKO,
KASM HAI TERI JAWAANI KI TUJHKO.
SAAQIYA BAHUT DARD HAI AAJ MUJHKO,
KI AAJ APNE BAHON MEIN SULA MUJHKO.

Thanks cara!

Wo aayegee: lamhey mein
Hongey sab dukh door!
Bhar-bhar jaam pilaayegee,
Sirf noor hee noor!!

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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2009, 10:14:20 PM »
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Kya classical ghazal hai
aisi ghazalen ab kahan likhi jaati hain
Daad kubool karen Bundeli saheb
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2009, 10:35:09 PM »
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Kya classical ghazal hai
aisi ghazalen ab kahan likhi jaati hain
Daad kubool karen Bundeli saheb
Sarvesh ji! Haardik dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2009, 11:15:59 PM »
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Abd Ji... Another one of your Beautiful Creation! Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause


Cara Ji... Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai! Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2009, 01:41:44 AM »
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kiya rabth hai abd je wah bhot khob ,bhot piyar sai lafz bunnay hain app nay ,nice creation keep it up
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2009, 02:48:08 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2009, 11:33:35 AM »
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Abd Ji... Another one of your Beautiful Creation! Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause


Cara Ji... Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai! Applause
Deepati ji, bahut-bahut shukruyah!
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«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2009, 11:35:36 AM »
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kiya rabth hai abd je wah bhot khob ,bhot piyar sai lafz bunnay hain app nay ,nice creation keep it up
Thanks a lot chitralsony ji!
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2009, 11:35:51 AM »
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Dard hotaa hai! Haqeeqat hai! Saaqiyah aajaa!
Aaj laachaar tabeeyat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Nazar na pheir, qasam hai tujhey usooloun kee;
Sukoon dey, ki, riwaayat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Lab hain beyaab, past jaan, sookhtaa hai galaa;
Maraz kee saaf kaifiyat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Kahaa hai: maykadey pahunch! Hun naatuwaan beyhad:
Aakhiree us kee hidaayat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

Mein gayaa laakh baar; too kabhee naheen aayee!
Phir bhi tujhko hi shikaayat hai? Saaqiyah aajaa!!

Chaar qadmoun pai hun: taaqat bachaayegee kitnee?
Koun see is mein qifaayat hai? Saaqiyah aajaa!

Koun hai doosaraa, 'abd', jo maraaham laaye?
Qabool nazar-e-inaayat hai: saaqiyah aajaa!

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Bahut khoob Uncle ji...
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2009, 11:36:12 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Abd ji...

Cara ji apne bhi bahoot acha sath diya hai....

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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2009, 11:37:27 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ..ABD JI....

KOUN DEGA MERE DIL KO SAKUN,
KOUN DIL KI BUJAAYEGA AAG.
BEJAAN PADA HUN,SAAQIYA,
AA TU MERE PAAS.

NAGRON SE NAGREN MILA,
APNE HAATHON SE MUJHKO PILA.
AA BHAR DE DIL KE ZAKHMON KO,
AAKAR TU MARAAHAM LAGAA.

DE THODI RAWAANI MUJHKO,
KASM HAI TERI JAWAANI KI TUJHKO.
SAAQIYA BAHUT DARD HAI AAJ MUJHKO,
KI AAJ APNE BAHON MEIN SULA MUJHKO.


Wah lovely...... lines.. cara
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2009, 11:38:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji
Thanks Rajesh ji! Mujhey khushee hai ki aapko meyree gazaleyn pasand aa raheen hain!
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«Reply #14 on: July 19, 2009, 11:39:31 AM »
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Bahut khoob Uncle ji...
Thanks Roja!
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