Ik dard chhupaanaa hotaa hai!

by abdbundeli on February 20, 2011, 09:02:24 PM
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Ik dard bahaanah hotaa hai!
Ik dard suhaanaa hotaa hai!!

Gunchey khiltey hain kaanton mein:
Ik dard nibhaanaa hotaa hai!

Ik dard nidaa ban jaataa hai;
Ik dard nishaanaa hotaa hai!

Rukhsat kartey apney us ko,
Ik dard dabaanaa hotaa hai!

Doli uthhatee hai: seeney mein,
Ik dard chhupaanaa hotaa hai!

Lamhah aataa hai aisaa bhee,
Ik dard bataanaa hotaa hai!

Aisey bhee hain, jin ko jab-tab,
Ik dard bhunaanaa hotaa hai!

Ik dard duaa ban jaataa hai;
Ik dard fasaanaa hotaa hai!

Gazalon mein dhhaal, sarey mahfil,
Ik dard sunaanaa hotaa hai!

Wo hamko sataatey hain jab, tab
Ik dard jataanaa hotaa hai!

Meelaad-e-sukhan key liye, 'abd',
Ik dard jagaanaa hotaa hai!

इक  दर्द  बहाना  होता  है !
इक  दर्द  सुहाना  होता  है !!

गुंचे  खिलते  हैं  काँटों  में :
इक  दर्द  निभाना  होता  है !

इक  दर्द  निदा  बन  जाता  है ;
इक  दर्द  निशाना  होता  है !

रुख्सत  करते  अपने  उस  को ,
इक  दर्द  दबाना  होता  है !

ऐसे  भी  हैं , जिन  को  जब-तब ,
इक  दर्द  भुनाना  होता  है !

डोली  उठाती  है : सीने  में ,
इक  दर्द छुपाना  होता  है !

लमहा  आता  है  ऐसा  भी ,
इक  दर्द बताना  होता  है !

 इक  दर्द दुआ  बन  जाता  है ;
इक  दर्द फ़साना  होता  है !

ग़ज़लों  में  ढाल , सरे  महफ़िल ,
इक  दर्द सुनाना  होता  है !

वो  हमको  सताते  हैं  जब , तब ,
इक  दर्द  जताना  होता  है !

मीलादे सुखन  के  लिए , 'अबद' ,
इक  दर्द जगाना  होता  है !


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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2011, 09:12:06 PM »
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Gunchey khiltey hain kaanton mein:
Ik dard nibhaanaa hotaa hai!

Doli uthhatee hai: seeney mein,
Ik dard chhupaanaa hotaa hai!

Ik dard duaa ban jaataa hai;
Ik dard fasaanaa hotaa hai!


Very Impressive ... Very Touching .... Bundeli Sahab !

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause

yunhi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2011, 09:22:36 PM »
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lajawaab Ghazak sir ji lajawaab.
bas lajawaab ke aage kuch hai to wo hain Bundeli Sirji.
dard ka aisa samawesh aapke hi alfazon se aa sakti hai.
'rukhsat karte apne us ko--
uff gazab ka creation.
sabhi aasaar pr qurbaan hua nir.
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ik dard chupaana hota hai
dikhawe ko muskuraana hota hai

ik dard dabanaa hota hai
haste hue zakhmo ko gale lagana hota hai

ik dard fasana hota hai
siwa unke sabhi ko jataana hota hai
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thanx sirji--for dis post
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2011, 09:33:49 PM »
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Gunchey khiltey hain kaanton mein:
Ik dard nibhaanaa hotaa hai!

Doli uthhatee hai: seeney mein,
Ik dard chhupaanaa hotaa hai!

Ik dard duaa ban jaataa hai;
Ik dard fasaanaa hotaa hai!


Very Impressive ... Very Touching .... Bundeli Sahab !

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause

yunhi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !


Bahut-bahut shukriyah Anshumali ji! Khush rahye! aabaad rahiye!!

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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2011, 09:36:20 PM »
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lajawaab Ghazak sir ji lajawaab.
bas lajawaab ke aage kuch hai to wo hain Bundeli Sirji.
dard ka aisa samawesh aapke hi alfazon se aa sakti hai.
'rukhsat karte apne us ko--
uff gazab ka creation.
sabhi aasaar pr qurbaan hua nir.
''
ik dard chupaana hota hai
dikhawe ko muskuraana hota hai

ik dard dabanaa hota hai
haste hue zakhmo ko gale lagana hota hai

ik dard fasana hota hai
siwa unke sabhi ko jataana hota hai
""
thanx sirji--for dis post
""

Shukriyah Nirala ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah! Aur, bahut khoob!

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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2011, 09:43:52 PM »
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aap bahut kamaal ka likhte ho sirji.
aap ki kalaam me kuch add karne ki gustaakhi kar gaya --
iske liye pata nhi himmat kidhar se aai ?
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2011, 09:55:35 PM »
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aap bahut kamaal ka likhte ho sirji.
aap ki kalaam me kuch add karne ki gustaakhi kar gaya --
iske liye pata nhi himmat kidhar se aai ?


Aapkaa swaagat hai Nirala ji! Aapkey Kavi mein dil bhee hai aur khaasee jaan bhi hai!

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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2011, 09:59:29 PM »
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thanx--
kavimay dil uff bahut badi baat aapne kah di mere liye
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2011, 10:50:54 PM »
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Bahut Khub Garg Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Peshkash Ki Hai Aapne
Nirala JI Ne Bilkul Sahi Kaha Aapki Her Ek Rachana Alag Hi
Andaz Mein Likhi Hoti Hai..
Aapki Her Rachna Ko Padhkar Humein Bahut Accha Lagta Hain..
Aap Yu HI Humesha Aapki LIkhi Rachna Ko Padhne Ka Mauka Deta Rahiye..
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2011, 10:51:56 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2011, 02:24:12 AM »
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Ik dard bahaanah hotaa hai!
Ik dard suhaanaa hotaa hai!!

Gunchey khiltey hain kaanton mein:
Ik dard nibhaanaa hotaa hai!

Ik dard nidaa ban jaataa hai;
Ik dard nishaanaa hotaa hai!

Rukhsat kartey apney us ko,
Ik dard dabaanaa hotaa hai!

Doli uthhatee hai: seeney mein,
Ik dard chhupaanaa hotaa hai!

Lamhah aataa hai aisaa bhee,
Ik dard bataanaa hotaa hai!

Aisey bhee hain, jin ko jab-tab,
Ik dard bhunaanaa hotaa hai!

Ik dard duaa ban jaataa hai;
Ik dard fasaanaa hotaa hai!

Gazalon mein dhhaal, sarey mahfil,
Ik dard sunaanaa hotaa hai!

Wo hamko sataatey hain jab, tab
Ik dard jataanaa hotaa hai!

Meelaad-e-sukhan key liye, 'abd',
Ik dard jagaanaa hotaa hai!

इक  दर्द  बहाना  होता  है !
इक  दर्द  सुहाना  होता  है !!

गुंचे  खिलते  हैं  काँटों  में :
इक  दर्द  निभाना  होता  है !

इक  दर्द  निदा  बन  जाता  है ;
इक  दर्द  निशाना  होता  है !

रुख्सत  करते  अपने  उस  को ,
इक  दर्द  दबाना  होता  है !

ऐसे  भी  हैं , जिन  को  जब-तब ,
इक  दर्द  भुनाना  होता  है !

डोली  उठाती  है : सीने  में ,
इक  दर्द छुपाना  होता  है !

लमहा  आता  है  ऐसा  भी ,
इक  दर्द बताना  होता  है !

 इक  दर्द दुआ  बन  जाता  है ;
इक  दर्द फ़साना  होता  है !

ग़ज़लों  में  ढाल , सरे  महफ़िल ,
इक  दर्द सुनाना  होता  है !

वो  हमको  सताते  हैं  जब , तब ,
इक  दर्द  जताना  होता  है !

मीलादे सुखन  के  लिए , 'अबद' ,
इक  दर्द जगाना  होता  है !


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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2011, 11:50:36 AM »
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thanx--
kavimay dil uff bahut badi baat aapne kah di mere liye

You're welcome Narala ji!

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«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2011, 11:54:28 AM »
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Bahut Khub Garg Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Peshkash Ki Hai Aapne
Nirala JI Ne Bilkul Sahi Kaha Aapki Her Ek Rachana Alag Hi
Andaz Mein Likhi Hoti Hai..
Aapki Her Rachna Ko Padhkar Humein Bahut Accha Lagta Hain..
Aap Yu HI Humesha Aapki LIkhi Rachna Ko Padhne Ka Mauka Deta Rahiye..
Excellent

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Rishi ji!

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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2011, 11:56:04 AM »
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bahut umdaa abd

Shukriyah! Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'khamosh_aawaaz' ji!

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bht khoob abd ji....
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