Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

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Dard ki duniya meiN, mera basera hai
KushiyoN par bhi, gam ka pehra hai

Har ek lamha, guzarta hai aanhoN meiN
Yaad lekar aata, phir naya savera hai

Zakhm hi milte rahe, teri chahat se mujhko
Naseeb ne kaisa, dard ka jaal bikhera hai

Zindagi ho gayi, ek bhatakte musafir ki tarah
Din ke ujaloN meiN bhi, chaya andhera hai

Yeh wafaoN ka sila hai, toh koi baat nahi
Mere mukaddar meiN nahi, pyaar tera hai

Ulfat ke saude hote hai, bazaar meiN "Aqsh"
Ishq ke naam par bas, milta lutera hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2012, 10:50:24 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2012, 10:55:29 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob
thank you soooooooooo much saini sir
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2012, 11:23:59 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2012, 11:24:28 AM »
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wah wah
thnx prashad jee
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2012, 11:38:55 AM »
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Kya baat hai aqsh ji....wah
Aap ki iss shayari mein dard mera chalka hai...wah
Aap ki khidmat mein ek nazrana meri aur se kabool karein ek rau.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2012, 11:59:40 AM »
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Dard ki duniya meiN, mera basera hai
KushiyoN par bhi, gam ka pehra hai

waah waah Applause ApplauseApplauseApplause

Har ek lamha, guzarta hai aanhoN meiN
Yaad lekar aata, phir naya savera hai

waah waah ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Zakhm hi milte rahe, teri chahat se mujhko
Naseeb ne kaisa, dard ka jaal bikhera hai

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause wah wah wah

Zindagi ho gayi, ek bhatakte musafir ki tarah
Din ke ujaloN meiN bhi, chaya andhera hai

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause wah waah waah

Yeh wafaoN ka sila hai, toh koi baat nahi
Mere mukaddar meiN nahi, pyaar tera hai

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause waah waah

Ulfat ke saude hote hai, bazaar meiN "Aqsh"
Ishq ke naam par bas, milta lutera hai

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause



"Na ghabra ke aagey andhera hai,
har andhere ke baad hi savera hai".

beautifull ghazal Aqsh ji ,,
sar se paun tak gazab hai ghazal ,,,ek rau to banta hai magar
ritesh ji ne already de diya hai...
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2012, 01:21:16 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   haayeee!!! maar hi daaloge aap apni rachnaaon se.. kyaa dhamaakedaar likhaa hai aapne... ek dum masssttt raapchik... bahut bahut good type ka likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 03:22:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Aqsh Jee Aadaab!



Behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne... behad khoob jee
sabhi khayaal behad umdaa rahe.. kafi gehre aur dilfareb ashaar bayaaN
kiye hai jee... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 08:06:31 PM »
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Kya baat hai aqsh ji....wah
Aap ki iss shayari mein dard mera chalka hai...wah
Aap ki khidmat mein ek nazrana meri aur se kabool karein ek rau.....
thank you ritesh jee for the rau
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 08:12:03 PM »
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"Na ghabra ke aagey andhera hai,
har andhere ke baad hi savera hai".

beautifull ghazal Aqsh ji ,,
sar se paun tak gazab hai ghazal ,,,ek rau to banta hai magar
ritesh ji ne already de diya hai...
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
thank you soooo much sahal
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 08:12:37 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   haayeee!!! maar hi daaloge aap apni rachnaaon se.. kyaa dhamaakedaar likhaa hai aapne... ek dum masssttt raapchik... bahut bahut good type ka likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!
thank you soooooooooooo much hriday jee
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 08:13:06 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Aqsh Jee Aadaab!



Behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne... behad khoob jee
sabhi khayaal behad umdaa rahe.. kafi gehre aur dilfareb ashaar bayaaN
kiye hai jee... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

thank you sooo much parwaz jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2012, 08:15:34 PM »
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Dard ki duniya meiN, mera basera hai
KushiyoN par bhi, gam ka pehra hai

Har ek lamha, guzarta hai aanhoN meiN
Yaad lekar aata, phir naya savera hai

Zakhm hi milte rahe, teri chahat se mujhko
Naseeb ne kaisa, dard ka jaal bikhera hai

Zindagi ho gayi, ek bhatakte musafir ki tarah
Din ke ujaloN meiN bhi, chaya andhera hai

Yeh wafaoN ka sila hai, toh koi baat nahi
Mere mukaddar meiN nahi, pyaar tera hai

Ulfat ke saude hote hai, bazaar meiN "Aqsh"
Ishq ke naam par bas, milta lutera hai


nice,ma'am
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«Reply #14 on: December 27, 2012, 08:19:13 PM »
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Ye wafao ka sila hai to koi baat nahee wala sher umda raha.
Dard ko achche lefjo piroya gaya hai. Rachna bahut dard bhari thi par khoobsurat thi.
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