°°° My New Experiment in Ghazals °°°

by Zaif on September 30, 2013, 08:16:52 PM
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(Guys, this is my new experiment in ghazal. This is called a "Do Mukhi Ghazal")

जाना न दूर कभी अब यारा !
दीवाना एक है आदी तुम्हारा |
चाहत है यही, हसरत है यही,
लुटाना तुमपर प्यार सारा |
वादे झूठे हम नहीं करते,
अफ़साना नहीं इश्क़ हमारा |
मुझे दर्द एक लगा सताने,
जाना! दे दे कुछ सहारा |
लुटाके दिल ये उसपे 'ज़ैफ़',
परवाना मैं सबकुछ हारा |

- ज़ैफ़

(Ab har line ko left se right ko padhein.)
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2013, 08:29:45 PM »
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 notworthy u r really amazing
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2013, 08:52:43 PM »
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INNOVATIVE N IMPRESSIVE  ..

KEEP IT UP ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2013, 08:58:54 PM »
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Amazing, keep it up.
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2013, 10:32:25 PM »
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Thnk u evry1.
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2013, 11:00:59 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2013, 11:39:49 PM »
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Quote from: Zaif on September 30, 2013, 08:16:52 PM
(Guys, this is my new experiment in ghazal. This is called a "Do Mukhi Ghazal")

जाना न दूर कभी अब यारा !
दीवाना एक है आदी तुम्हारा |
चाहत है यही, हसरत है यही,
लुटाना तुमपर प्यार सारा |
वादे झूठे हम नहीं करते,
अफ़साना नहीं इश्क़ हमारा |
मुझे दर्द एक लगा सताने,
जाना! दे दे कुछ सहारा |
लुटाके दिल ये उसपे 'ज़ैफ़',
परवाना मैं सबकुछ हारा |

- ज़ैफ़

(Ab har line ko left se right ko padhein.)
«««««««««««



whats a knock,sir- wow
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2013, 12:48:01 AM »
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Quite amazing ... congratulations
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2013, 01:42:10 AM »
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Amazing,,,,,Great Work.
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2013, 07:53:04 AM »
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Thnks 2 all.
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2013, 12:39:03 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2013, 02:39:44 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Amazing one.... keep it up..
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2013, 02:49:31 PM »
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 Applause nice one.
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2013, 04:15:43 PM »
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very nice icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: October 01, 2013, 06:14:53 PM »
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Thnks evry1.
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