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by poonam singh on March 01, 2011, 05:49:46 PM
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jab bhi kabhi takkaluf se dekha tha aapne,
rone ke humare pas hajaro bahane nikal pade.

jab se suna hai pyar me aati nahi hai needh,
hum auro ki ankho me khawab sajane nikal pade.

humne kiya taumr unke har dard ka ilaaj,
is daur me humare wo dard dukhane nikal pade.

lab si liye they jinke raj chhupane ke waaste,
mauka mila to wo daasta humari sunane nikal pade.

jab se nahi raha aks fidrat ka aaina,
log bekhoaf ho barish me nahane nikal pade.

pehle tha ye aalam ki koi jaanta bhi na tha,
shohrat ke sath hajaro deewane nikal pade.

tune jo keh diya ki tujhe bandhan ki chah nahi,
hum dariya me teri yado ko bahane nikal pade....
     
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 06:06:18 PM »
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jab bhi kabhi takkaluf se dekha tha aapne,
rone ke humare pas hajaro bahane nikal pade.

jab se suna hai pyar me aati nahi hai needh,
hum auro ki ankho me khawab sajane nikal pade.

humne kiya taumr unke har dard ka ilaaj,
is daur me humare wo dard dukhane nikal pade.

lab si liye they jinke raj chhupane ke waaste,
mauka mila to wo daasta humari sunane nikal pade.

jab se nahi raha aks fidrat ka aaina,
log bekhoaf ho barish me nahane nikal pade.

pehle tha ye aalam ki koi jaanta bhi na tha,
shohrat ke sath hajaro deewane nikal pade.

tune jo keh diya ki tujhe bandhan ki chah nahi,
hum dariya me teri yado ko bahane nikal pade....
     

Humesha Ki Tarah bahut Bhaut Khoob poonam Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 06:11:13 PM »
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shukriya khwaish ji.
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 08:12:17 PM »
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badhiya ghazal ke lie bahut saari badhaiyan Poonam.
achha laga sukoon mila ise parhkar issliye spesal wala dil se THANX Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 10:43:33 PM »
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jab bhi kabhi takkaluf se dekha tha aapne,
rone ke humare pas hajaro bahane nikal pade.

jab se suna hai pyar me aati nahi hai needh,
hum auro ki ankho me khawab sajane nikal pade.

humne kiya taumr unke har dard ka ilaaj,
is daur me humare wo dard dukhane nikal pade.

lab si liye they jinke raj chhupane ke waaste,
mauka mila to wo daasta humari sunane nikal pade.

jab se nahi raha aks fidrat ka aaina,
log bekhoaf ho barish me nahane nikal pade.

pehle tha ye aalam ki koi jaanta bhi na tha,
shohrat ke sath hajaro deewane nikal pade.

tune jo keh diya ki tujhe bandhan ki chah nahi,
hum dariya me teri yado ko bahane nikal pade....
     

veri naaaaaaice P.S
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2011, 10:12:48 PM »
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Nice Ghazal Poonam JI
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 01:27:40 PM »
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bahut khub poonamji....... bahut hi badiya ek dam dil tak........

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2011, 07:54:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya manjum ji,rishi ji,khamoshji,nirala ji.humari rachhnao ko padhne aur srahane ke liye.
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2011, 08:09:33 PM »
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boht acha likha poonam ji apne
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2011, 11:05:56 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2011, 11:17:49 PM »
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bht pyari gazal h poonam..padhkar achcha laga ..last stanza bht achcha laga ji....
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2011, 09:48:28 AM »
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saahol ji,shiba ji aur kasak ji me tahe dil se shukr gujaar hu jo aap ne meri gazal ko pasand kiya.dhanyabad
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