Dost.......................Aqsh

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Mere dost ke paas dushmani nibhane ka, hai achcha saleekha
Dosti ke naam par toh, humne khaye hai hardam hi dhoka

Haq e namak ada kiya, namak harami ke saath
Har ek mod par todha hai, hamara har ek bharosa

Thook kar chatna, yeh hai uski aadat mein shamil
Karke chalni hamare seene ko, kyuN deta hai ab dilasa

Khoon ke jagah iski ragoN meiN, daudhta paani hai
Bas!  aur nahi, humne to apne dil ko ab hai roka

"Aqsh" ab toh sambhal ja, yeh hai mashwarah mera
KhooN to tera pee chuka hai, ab hai teri chamdi ka bhuka
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2012, 11:23:09 AM »
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very nice.
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2012, 11:24:45 AM »
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Mere dost ne dushmani nibhane ka, choda na koi mouka
Dosti ke naam par toh, humne khaye hai hardam hi dhoka

Haq e namak ada kiya, namak harami ke saath
Har ek mod par todha hai, hamara har ek bharosa

Thook kar chatna, yeh hai uski aadat mein shamil
Karke chalni hamare seene ko, kyuN deta hai ab dilasa

Khoon ke jagah iski ragoN meiN, daudhta paani hai
Bas!  aur nahi, humne to apne dil ko ab hai roka

"Aqsh" ab toh sambhal ja, yeh hai mashwarah mera
KhooN to tera pee chuka hai, ab hai teri chamdi ka bhuka

very very extreme,bohut khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2012, 11:26:44 AM »
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very nice.
thank you masoom
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2012, 11:27:17 AM »
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very very extreme,bohut khoob likha hai.
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thank you sahal soooo much
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2012, 11:51:18 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2012, 11:53:31 AM »
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thank you saini sir
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2012, 01:40:58 PM »
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pain all around.
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2012, 03:36:50 PM »
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Mere dost ke paas dushmani nibhane ka, hai achcha saleekha
Dosti ke naam par toh, humne khaye hai hardam hi dhoka

Haq e namak ada kiya, namak harami ke saath
Har ek mod par todha hai, hamara har ek bharosa

Thook kar chatna, yeh hai uski aadat mein shamil
Karke chalni hamare seene ko, kyuN deta hai ab dilasa

Khoon ke jagah iski ragoN meiN, daudhta paani hai
Bas!  aur nahi, humne to apne dil ko ab hai roka

"Aqsh" ab toh sambhal ja, yeh hai mashwarah mera
KhooN to tera pee chuka hai, ab hai teri chamdi ka bhuka



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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2012, 06:05:20 PM »
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Mere dost ke paas dushmani nibhane ka, hai achcha saleekha
Dosti ke naam par toh, humne khaye hai hardam hi dhoka

Haq e namak ada kiya, namak harami ke saath
Har ek mod par todha hai, hamara har ek bharosa

Thook kar chatna, yeh hai uski aadat mein shamil
Karke chalni hamare seene ko, kyuN deta hai ab dilasa

Khoon ke jagah iski ragoN meiN, daudhta paani hai
Bas!  aur nahi, humne to apne dil ko ab hai roka

"Aqsh" ab toh sambhal ja, yeh hai mashwarah mera
KhooN to tera pee chuka hai, ab hai teri chamdi ka bhuka



very good...............!
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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2012, 08:38:33 PM »
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Thnx mukesh jee
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«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2012, 08:51:17 PM »
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Mere dost ke paas dushmani nibhane ka, hai achcha saleekha
Dosti ke naam par toh, humne khaye hai hardam hi dhoka

Haq e namak ada kiya, namak harami ke saath
Har ek mod par todha hai, hamara har ek bharosa

Thook kar chatna, yeh hai uski aadat mein shamil
Karke chalni hamare seene ko, kyuN deta hai ab dilasa

Khoon ke jagah iski ragoN meiN, daudhta paani hai
Bas!  aur nahi, humne to apne dil ko ab hai roka

"Aqsh" ab toh sambhal ja, yeh hai mashwarah mera
KhooN to tera pee chuka hai, ab hai teri chamdi ka bhuka


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«Reply #12 on: December 23, 2012, 10:00:19 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 24, 2012, 10:18:34 AM »
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thnx qalb jee
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«Reply #14 on: December 24, 2012, 10:19:02 AM »
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very good...............!

thank you sheba jee
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