HAI NAZAR JISKI PATTE -PATTE PAR ............MKV

by mkv on February 16, 2013, 02:44:11 AM
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«Reply #30 on: February 27, 2013, 01:30:57 PM »
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Bewafaaee ki baat kee usne
aur judaaee ki baat kee usne

Pyaar  ko bhoolkar mere usne
Bas ladaaee ki baat kee usne

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai  ki baat kee usne

Shauq rakhta hai voh mithai ka
rasmalaaee ki baat kee usne

Shayri hai abhee meri kacchee
Rahnumaayee ki baat kee usne

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne

Meri betee vidaa nahee hogee
Ghar jamaai ki baat kee usne

Hai nazar jiski patte- patte par
Us khudaaee ki baat kee usne

Kholkar dil ‘mukesh’ hai tujhse
Jaghasaaee ki baat kee usne

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.


wonderful ghazal mkv jee nice gift too  Usual Smile
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«Reply #31 on: February 28, 2013, 11:53:43 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub MKV JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #32 on: March 01, 2013, 10:27:15 AM »
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Bahut khooobsurat gazal hai. Kuch sher etne shandaar rahe ki parkar apne aap monh se waah waah nikal gayii.


shukriya bhai
kahan gaayab hai?
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«Reply #33 on: March 02, 2013, 12:17:10 AM »
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Wah.Wan.Bahut sunder ghazel kahi hai aapne.Mubarak ho aapko.
Shukriya sudhir jee
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«Reply #34 on: March 02, 2013, 10:47:32 AM »
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bohat Khub!!!

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thanks shireen jee
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«Reply #35 on: March 02, 2013, 05:13:00 PM »
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good mukeshjee
Thanks poonam jee
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«Reply #36 on: March 03, 2013, 12:40:21 AM »
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badi shaandaar rachna rahi mkv ji........ dheron daad..
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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
Thanks Vimmy jee
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«Reply #37 on: March 04, 2013, 12:53:30 AM »
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QALB jee aadaab
tah e dil se aapka shukriya
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«Reply #38 on: March 05, 2013, 02:16:57 PM »
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Mukesh  ji. saada  zubaan  mein  bahut  khubsurat , mukammal  ghazal  kahi  hai . Qaafiye  khuub dhoondh dhoondh  kar laaye hain  aur  pyara istemaal   kiya  hai . Masha allah ,  shaayeri  per  nikhar  per  nikhar  aa  raha   hai . Meri  bahut duaaein ..... Aur  is  ghazal   ko   mera   birthday   gift  banaane  ke   liye 
tah e dil  se shafqatein . Hasan

Aadaab Sir
Dil khush ho gaya aapke comments padhkar.
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«Reply #39 on: March 25, 2013, 12:05:07 AM »
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MKV sahab --sach me bht lajawaab ghazal likhi aapne
ekdm alg h aapki poetry se--

aap to kaafi nikhar gaye janaab--
congratss
kuch hme bhi to sikhaie aap

iss khoob ghazal par dher saari daad--
Hasan sir ko janam din ki badhaiyan--
Hasan sir ka gift bht khuburat hai

khus rahe
muskurate rahe
Thanks sarfira jee
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«Reply #40 on: April 04, 2013, 07:33:44 PM »
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veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-mkv
Thanks a lot
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«Reply #41 on: April 04, 2013, 07:37:40 PM »
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MKV sahab --sach me bht lajawaab ghazal likhi aapne
ekdm alg h aapki poetry se--

aap to kaafi nikhar gaye janaab--
congratss
kuch hme bhi to sikhaie aap

iss khoob ghazal par dher saari daad--
Hasan sir ko janam din ki badhaiyan--
Hasan sir ka gift bht khuburat hai

khus rahe
muskurate rahe
Thanks Sarfira jee
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«Reply #42 on: April 04, 2013, 07:40:56 PM »
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very nice mukesh ji
lajawaab karidya hai,,,mindblowing
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thanks sahal jee
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«Reply #43 on: April 04, 2013, 07:46:42 PM »
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thanks shaukeen jee
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«Reply #44 on: April 04, 2013, 07:48:25 PM »
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MKV Jee Aadaab!



Kia baat hai janab, achcha dedication hai... Usual Smile
Badi purasar aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne.... chhoti bher meiN
kafi asardaar ashaar rahe....

Sabhi ashaar behad umda rahe janab, is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Aur In ashaaroN ke kia kahne janab... aik aalaa kism ke
ashar hai yeH behad gazab hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad khususan in
ashaaroN ke liye....

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bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz bhai
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