HAI NAZAR JISKI PATTE -PATTE PAR ............MKV

by mkv on February 16, 2013, 02:44:11 AM
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Bewafaaee ki baat kee usne
aur judaaee ki baat kee usne

Pyaar  ko bhoolkar mere usne
Bas ladaaee ki baat kee usne

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai  ki baat kee usne

Shauq rakhta hai voh mithai ka
rasmalaaee ki baat kee usne

Shayri hai abhee meri kacchee
Rahnumaayee ki baat kee usne

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne

Meri betee vidaa nahee hogee
Ghar jamaai ki baat kee usne

Hai nazar jiski patte- patte par
Us khudaaee ki baat kee usne

Kholkar dil ‘mukesh’ hai tujhse
Jaghasaaee ki baat kee usne

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 03:41:29 AM »
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chalo ik RAU hi de dayte hai aap ko
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 04:09:54 AM »
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priy mukesh isse umdaa taufaa ek ghazal go shaayar kaa ek ghazal go shaayar ke liye naheen ho saktaa ab tak kee sabse behatreen ghazal main dil kee gahraaiyon se tumhe saadhuwaad detaa hoon rau ke alaawaa aur koi bhee puruskaar aaj mere pass hotaa to tum par dilo jaan se qurbaan kar detaa hameshaa aage badhte raho mujhe lagaa hai ki aaj ye guru daksinaa hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2013, 04:18:16 AM »
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Bewafaaee ki baat kee usne
aur judaaee ki baat kee usne

Pyaar  ko bhoolkar mere usne
Bas ladaaee ki baat kee usne

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai  ki baat kee usne

Shauq rakhta hai voh mithai ka
rasmalaaee ki baat kee usne

Shayri hai abhee meri kacchee
Rahnumaayee ki baat kee usne

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne

Meri betee vidaa nahee hogee
Ghar jamaai ki baat kee usne

Hai nazar jiski patte- patte par
Us khudaaee ki baat kee usne

Kholkar dil ‘mukesh’ hai tujhse
Jaghasaaee ki baat kee usne

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.


wah wah wah umda , lajwab, bohut khoob, mukammal ghazal kahi mukesh bhai sabhi ashaar achche haiN DAAAD qubool kareN, aur meri rtaraf se bhi hasan sir ko janamdin din hardik shubhkamnayen, khuda kare wo yuNhi hamesha hamari rehnumai karte raheN....
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2013, 04:21:44 AM »
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Bahut bahut mubarak ho Mukesh ji. Bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne. har sher khoob rahe.Har ek sher bahut gehraai liye hue hai. Hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kijiyega.




Wish you a many happy returns of the day Hasan ji

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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2013, 05:14:17 AM »
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बहुत ही खूब अन्दाज़ है आपका मुकेश जी ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2013, 05:39:46 AM »
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Bewafaaee ki baat kee usne
aur judaaee ki baat kee usne


Achchaaaa jeeeee?

Pyaar  ko bhoolkar mere usne
Bas ladaaee ki baat kee usne

Ha ha ha ha ha ha
Or karo shaadii. Manaaa kiyaa thaaa naa. Bahut shaku thaa. Ab rote raho

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai  ki baat kee usne

Applause Applause Applause Sachchiii baat hai

Shauq rakhta hai voh mithai ka
rasmalaaee ki baat kee usne

Hiiiiii re munh me paaaanii laaaaa diyaaaa aaapne to

Shayri hai abhee meri kacchee
Rahnumaayee ki baat kee usne

Mujhe sunaaa rahe ho. Sulaa lo. Kabhii hamaara bhi waqt aayega

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne

Zabardast... Ye sher haasil-ae-gazal hai.
Es sher ne dil khush kar diyaaaa

Meri betee vidaa nahee hogee
Ghar jamaai ki baat kee usne

Aiiii laaa aaaj to ak se barkar ak sher kahe hai tumne....
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Waise tumhaarii to betii hi nahii hai.
Oh ab samjhaa bhaabhii ka shaq sahii thaaa. Tumne dusrii shaadii kar rakhii hai.

Hai nazar jiski patte- patte par
Us khudaaee ki baat kee usne
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Kholkar dil ‘mukesh’ hai tujhse
Jaghasaaee ki baat kee usne

Ye sher to palle hi nahii parr rahaa.

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.


Bahut khooobsurat gazal hai. Kuch sher etne shandaar rahe ki parkar apne aap monh se waah waah nikal gayii.

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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2013, 06:09:14 AM »
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Wah.Wan.Bahut sunder ghazel kahi hai aapne.Mubarak ho aapko.
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2013, 06:43:27 AM »
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bohat Khub!!!

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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2013, 07:20:13 AM »
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good mukeshjee
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2013, 07:36:22 AM »
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badi shaandaar rachna rahi mkv ji........ dheron daad..
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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2013, 09:11:57 AM »
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Bewafaaee ki baat kee usne
aur judaaee ki baat kee usne

Pyaar  ko bhoolkar mere usne
Bas ladaaee ki baat kee usne

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai  ki baat kee usne Thumbs UP Thumbs UPone rau boss!!!!!!!!!

Shauq rakhta hai voh mithai ka
rasmalaaee ki baat kee usne

Shayri hai abhee meri kacchee
Rahnumaayee ki baat kee usne Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Meri betee vidaa nahee hogee
Ghar jamaai ki baat kee usne Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Hai nazar jiski patte- patte par
Us khudaaee ki baat kee usne

Kholkar dil ‘mukesh’ hai tujhse
Jaghasaaee ki baat kee usne

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.



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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2013, 09:24:32 AM »
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Mukesh  ji. saada  zubaan  mein  bahut  khubsurat , mukammal  ghazal  kahi  hai . Qaafiye  khuub dhoondh dhoondh  kar laaye hain  aur  pyara istemaal   kiya  hai . Masha allah ,  shaayeri  per  nikhar  per  nikhar  aa  raha   hai . Meri  bahut duaaein ..... Aur  is  ghazal   ko   mera   birthday   gift  banaane  ke   liye  
tah e dil  se shafqatein . Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2013, 09:25:33 AM »
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MKV sahab --sach me bht lajawaab ghazal likhi aapne
ekdm alg h aapki poetry se--

aap to kaafi nikhar gaye janaab--
congratss
kuch hme bhi to sikhaie aap

iss khoob ghazal par dher saari daad--
Hasan sir ko janam din ki badhaiyan--
Hasan sir ka gift bht khuburat hai

khus rahe
muskurate rahe
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2013, 09:45:53 AM »
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Bewafaaee ki baat kee usne
aur judaaee ki baat kee usne

Pyaar  ko bhoolkar mere usne
Bas ladaaee ki baat kee usne

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai  ki baat kee usne

Shauq rakhta hai voh mithai ka
rasmalaaee ki baat kee usne

Shayri hai abhee meri kacchee
Rahnumaayee ki baat kee usne

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne

Meri betee vidaa nahee hogee
Ghar jamaai ki baat kee usne

Hai nazar jiski patte- patte par
Us khudaaee ki baat kee usne

Kholkar dil ‘mukesh’ hai tujhse
Jaghasaaee ki baat kee usne

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.



veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-mkv
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