Ishq ki aag laga dena.................................Aqsh..

by aqsh on October 07, 2013, 11:52:46 AM
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena

Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

Meri aankhoN meiN doobne ki, tamanna karne wale
Phir soch le, maujo ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena

Mere rukhsaar par saje til ko, raat ki syaahi na kah
Chaand ka kaam hota hai, andheroN ko mita dena

“Aqsh” ki wafa aur junoon, toh hai sirf usi ke liye
Jis meiN hunar ho, hawa ke rehte chiraagoN ko jala dena

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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2013, 12:08:10 PM »
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waah waah kyaa zindaa dilee hai to ho jaaye ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2013, 01:22:37 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!! kuch likhaa hai iske jawaab mein, ummeed kartaa hoon aapko pasand aaye....!!!



tere maan jaane tak main teraa  intezaar karungaa
tu naa kare naa sahi, main  tujhse   pyaar karungaa

ret pe ghar banaake lehron se  bachaa lungaa main
toot  jaaye  kabhi  agar  use firse tayyaar karungaa

taaj banaa ke kaarigar ne apne haath  gawaaye the
tere   liye  apni  zindagi  hi  tujhpe   nisaar  karungaa

khwaahish hai dilki  teri  aankhon mein  doob  jaaye
doob  teri  aankhon  mein  tere dil ko paar karungaa

bujh jaaye koi  chiraag  hawaa  ke jhaunke se kabhi
khud  ko  jalaa  ke main roshni mere yaar karungaa

maut aajaaye gar kabhi 'Hriday' ko mohabbat mein
teri  khushiyon  ke liye duwaayein hazaar karungaa


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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2013, 01:26:35 PM »
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena

Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

Meri aankhoN meiN doobne ki, tamanna karne wale
Phir soch le, maujo ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena

Mere rukhsaar par saje til ko, raat ki syaahi na kah
Chaand ka kaam hota hai, andheroN ko mita dena

“Aqsh” ki wafa aur junoon, toh hai sirf usi ke liye
Jis meiN hunar ho, hawa ke rehte chiraagoN ko jala dena

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause ApplauseWaah waah,bahut hi Khoobsurat Peshqash Ki Hai Apne.!!
Is Khoobsurat Kalaam Par Ek Rau,Pesh Hai,Qabool Kariyega.!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2013, 01:33:23 PM »
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena

Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

Meri aankhoN meiN doobne ki, tamanna karne wale
Phir soch le, maujo ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena

Mere rukhsaar par saje til ko, raat ki syaahi na kah
Chaand ka kaam hota hai, andheroN ko mita dena

“Aqsh” ki wafa aur junoon, toh hai sirf usi ke liye
Jis meiN hunar ho, hawa ke rehte chiraagoN ko jala dena




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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!  one rau
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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2013, 01:37:53 PM »
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Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

waah waah AQsh ji lajwaab likha hai ,ek dum zabardast ghazal likhi hai apne ...ye ashaar to bohut pasand aya hai mujhe ,
RAU dena to banta hai.
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2013, 02:06:17 PM »
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena

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Wah,Wah,Wah Aqshji,Bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai,Really Beautiful.Matla bahut achha laga. Aapke isi matle ke jawaab me apne aik ghazal ka matla aapkee nazr karna chahta hun -

Ret per main ghar banana chahta hun.
Aag   paani    me lagana chahta hun.
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2013, 02:09:34 PM »
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WAAH WAAH SUPER ONE.............. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2013, 02:57:45 PM »
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bohut khub aqsh ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2013, 04:11:37 PM »
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bohut khub aqsh ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 07, 2013, 04:39:43 PM »
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kya  baat kya baat kya baat....is gazal mein jitna josh hai utna hee khud mein bhi le aana........dekhte hai phir kaun himmat karta hai tumhare samne aane ki ...lajawab lajwab lajwab lajwab alawab peshkash


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«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2013, 04:42:03 PM »
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bahot khoooooob.....
mauj ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena...
Meri aankhoN meiN doobne ki, tamanna karne wale
Phir soch le, maujo ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2013, 06:20:30 PM »
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waah aqsh ji bohat bohat khoob ,....lutf aaya aapki ghzal padh kar,
maqta bht pasand aaya
Aqsh” ki wafa aur junoon, toh hai sirf usi ke liye
Jis meiN hunar ho, hawa ke rehte chiraagoN ko jala dena .waah................bohat bohat c daad,...............
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2013, 06:49:47 PM »
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena

Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

Meri aankhoN meiN doobne ki, tamanna karne wale
Phir soch le, maujo ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena

Mere rukhsaar par saje til ko, raat ki syaahi na kah
Chaand ka kaam hota hai, andheroN ko mita dena

“Aqsh” ki wafa aur junoon, toh hai sirf usi ke liye
Jis meiN hunar ho, hawa ke rehte chiraagoN ko jala dena



excellent,ma'am
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«Reply #14 on: October 07, 2013, 07:35:10 PM »
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Aqsh Saahiba Aadaab...!


WaaH waaH waaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke andaaz e bayaaN ke... Badi hi umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee behad shayrana ashaar huye haiN....

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe, is laa jawaab kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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