"khud se ye humkalaami"

by aaina on August 26, 2009, 10:52:45 AM
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wo door hai us par bhi jiye ja rha hun mein 
Khud se ye humkalami kye ja raha hu.n mein

Ab meykade ho.n band mujko gharaz nahii
Aankho.n se teri mey ko piye ja rha hun mein

Jo zindagi ne tujhse pehle diye the zakham
Wo Teri rafugari se siye ja raha hun mein

Tu jo nahi to zindagi kis kaam ki sanam
Kehta raha hun aur kahe ja raha hu.n mein

Daikho to meri jaanib ek meri humnafaz
kaise ye doori e  sitam sahe ja rha hun mein

Aslam wo keh rha hai apne dard mujhko de
Dar bhi raha hun aur diye jar aha hun mein   
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2009, 10:57:07 AM »
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Waah bahoot bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.. bahoot Khoob likha hai aapne ..Daad Kabool kare !
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2009, 04:29:10 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 26, 2009, 10:52:45 AM
wo door hai us par bhi jiye ja rha hun mein 
Khud se ye humkalami kye ja raha hu.n mein

Ab meykade ho.n band mujko gharaz nahii
Aankho.n se teri mey ko piye ja rha hun mein

Jo zindagi ne tujhse pehle diye the zakham
Wo Teri rafugari se siye ja raha hun mein

Tu jo nahi to zindagi kis kaam ki sanam
Kehta raha hun aur kahe ja raha hu.n mein

Daikho to meri jaanib ek meri humnafaz
kaise ye doori e  sitam sahe ja rha hun mein

Aslam wo keh rha hai apne dard mujhko de
Dar bhi raha hun aur diye jar aha hun mein   

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Mashallah Aslam Ji...Bohot khoobsurat aur umdah ghazal hai....aur dil ko chu jaati hai kahin.....!! Bohot hi khoob...isi tarah hume seekhne ka mauqa dete rahiye  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2009, 04:35:39 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Aslamji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoobsurat!!! Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2009, 04:57:16 PM »
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kia baat

kia rafugari ki hai

dad qobool ho


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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2009, 11:45:51 PM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji,very beautiful gazal.mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2009, 06:55:44 AM »
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wah wah janab.bahut khub
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aaina
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2009, 10:44:16 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 26, 2009, 10:57:07 AM
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Waah bahoot bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.. bahoot Khoob likha hai aapne ..Daad Kabool kare !


thnxxxx so much sophi
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2009, 10:44:56 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 26, 2009, 04:35:39 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Aslamji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoobsurat!!! Thumbs UP

bhut bhut shukriya dear khwaish
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2009, 10:45:50 AM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on August 26, 2009, 04:57:16 PM
kia baat

kia rafugari ki hai

dad qobool ho


javed

shukriya javed sahab is hosla afzaaii
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2009, 10:49:04 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 26, 2009, 11:45:51 PM
Wah wah Aslam ji,very beautiful gazal.mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent


thnxxxx so much madhu for ths appriciation
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2009, 10:49:52 AM »
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Quote from: injured.warrior on August 27, 2009, 06:55:44 AM
wah wah janab.bahut khub

shukriya warrior sahab bhut bhut shukriya janaab
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2009, 10:50:53 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 27, 2009, 09:32:44 AM
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bahot bahot khoob likha hai Aslam ji
umda ashaar hain,awesome  icon_thumleft


thnxx buddy thnxxx alot youn hi hosla badhaate rahiye
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2009, 10:52:10 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 26, 2009, 04:29:10 PM
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Mashallah Aslam Ji...Bohot khoobsurat aur umdah ghazal hai....aur dil ko chu jaati hai kahin.....!! Bohot hi khoob...isi tarah hume seekhne ka mauqa dete rahiye  Usual Smile

bhut bhut shukriya talat................
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2009, 01:06:40 PM »
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Aslam Ji, Aap ki khoobsurat ghazal ke saamne kuch sher likhni ki gustaakhi ki hai !



Paas Ho Kar Bhi Tujhse Door Hain
Ji Rahe Hain Ki Hum Majboor Hain

Manzil Ka Nishaan Dikhta Nahin
Aur Paanv Bhi Thakan Se Choor Hain

Kaun Dekhe Aankhon Ke Peeche Ka Manzar,
Kaun Jaane Ki Kitne Ranjoor Hain

Aah-o-Fughaan Se Kya Haasil,
Nahin Ishq Ke Ye Dastoor Hain
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