mahfil main dil udaas tha,,,ghazal,,,,jeet jainam saini

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mahfil main dil  udaas tha,
chore  gayaa jo  khaas tha,

kasam de gaya dur hone kee,
kabhee joh dil ke paas tha,

khushi kee gujarish  kaisi,
aksr gam hee aaya raas tha,

gairo,n  sang jaa mila woh,
jis par bohat wishvaas tha,

agosh main hai mout ke abb,
wahi meri zeene ki aas tha,

tanhai de gaya dil koh joh,
saanso,n kee ekk pyaas tha,
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2015, 07:43:45 PM »
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bahut hee umdah waaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!
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bht khoob Jeet saahab
bht khubsurat ar pyari ghazal kahi apne
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2015, 10:55:43 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on June 07, 2015, 05:24:33 PM
mahfil main dil  udaas tha,
chore  gayaa jo  khaas tha,

kasam de gaya dur hone kee,
kabhee joh dil ke paas tha,

khushi kee gujarish  kaisi,
aksr gam hee aaya raas tha,

gairo,n  sang jaa mila woh,
jis par bohat wishvaas tha,

agosh main hai mout ke abb,
wahi meri zeene ki aas tha,

tanhai de gaya dil koh joh,
saanso,n kee ekk pyaas tha,


Nice thoughts....keep on writing....all the best....Raqeeb
 
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बहुत ही खूब....
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shukriya sarfira ji dil se dsaaadddd kubool
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