woh mera aksr ishq main,,,,ghazal,,,jeet jainam saini

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woh mera aksr ishq main kotaah-a.ndesh  banaate rahe,
hum usko khudaa-saaz samjh  logo,n sey bachaate rahe,

khar chubha zar e pa toh zakhm kaa  ehsaas hone laga,
aksr hum us khabees ke raah main phool bichaate rahe,

kamzarf sanam kamaal e ishq  pal bhar main  tod gaya,
chore gaye  jise  aashiyana e dil main chupaate rahe,

alam e tanahi main aksr gamon ka zad o kob hone laga,
to jazbaat bahar aa gaye jinko dil main dabaate rahe,

maaal e umr e muhabbat to mout hi hoti hai jaan gaye,
mita gaye woh jiski khushi main duniya se ladte rahe,

lout aana kafan-dafan ki saba mera sandesha leaayegi,
aansu baha dena gam ke joh khushi main  bahaate rahe,






kotaah-a.ndesh----silly[murkh]
kafan-dafan----burial[qabristaa,n]
maaal e umr e muhabbat-----result of love[ishq kaa annt]
zad o kob-----atteck[hamla]
kamaal e ishq-----limit of love[pyaar ki simaai,n]
zar e pa----under the feet[pairo,n ke niche]
khabees----rogue[doosht]
khudaa-saaz---------god,s gift[rab ka uphaar]
kamzarf------mean[matlabi]
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2015, 12:43:06 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2015, 01:40:45 PM »
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bohat shukriya ram sir ji daaaaaddd or rau dil se qabool
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2015, 03:41:52 PM »
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Bahot hi khoobsurat!
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2015, 10:19:37 PM »
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bahut hee khoob waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2015, 04:16:02 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2015, 04:22:02 AM »
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बहुत ही खूब.....

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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2015, 07:26:13 AM »
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Bahot  khoobsurat waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2015, 11:34:05 AM »
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