dil bekaraar hai,,,,ghazal,,,,,,,,,jeet jainam saini

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naa jaane kiyon ye  dil bekaraar hai,
umeed to nahi fir bhee  intezaar hai,

kaise mouf kar doo,n gunah sare uske,
mare dil  main  abb bhee  gusaar hai,

hijr ki lou main  jalaa  gaya mujhko,
woh zakhm dane wala bewaffa yaar hai,

mari mohhobat ka kaise mol chukayegi,
aaj bhi mare ishq main  karzdaar hai,

uskee yaad main din ba din tadap kar,
yuh rukhsaar par aansu taar taar hai,

qashmqash main hai zindagi yeh  jeet,
dil main abb dhadkan nahi angaar hai,



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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2015, 08:19:44 PM »
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bahut sunder waah.
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2015, 12:01:54 AM »
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Waaah waaah waah
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2015, 04:14:44 AM »
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bahut umdah waah waaaaaaaahhhhh
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2015, 04:19:32 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2015, 08:27:27 AM »
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वाह वाह बहुत ही सुंदर गजल है ढेरो दाद के साथ एक राऊ कबूल करे  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2015, 02:36:28 PM »
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bohat shukriya surinder sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2015, 02:37:40 PM »
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shukriya saahil bhai
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bohat shukriya prabha ji
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bohat shukriya ram sir ji dil se daaadddddd or rau qabool
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वाह....

बहुत खूब....
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